Date: 02/22/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
"What just happened?”
“You fainted.”
“I didn't! I just... stumbled..."
"Yeah, OK, you stumbled." - snorted I literally fucking snorted!!!!
"It is OK you know. Everything is going to work out just fine."
"How can you be so sure?"
"I'm not!" He laughs and wraps his arms around me. "But it sounds good, doesn't it?! I love you, you love me, and now I'm a proper, official Daddy!"
His optimistic attitude is irresistible as he squeezes me so tightly I can hardly breathe. – awh!!!
Tom looks almost exactly like Bill. He's dressed in a similar way and his hair is in the same style only slightly darker, no jewellery or eyeliner, but the effect of the two of them standing there together is mesmerizing! – OMG Tom NOT IN THUG WEAR that’s that’s sacrilegious!!!!
“Mummy, Mummy! This is Tomi! He's our UNCLE! He looks like Daddy! Because they're TWINS! LIKE US!” – I love that the boys are so excited that their daddy is just like them!
The smile has left his face and he looks grave. “He did. On the surface. But he was still closed, keeping something hidden, even from me. He kept everything inside. I think it would’ve... I don’t know, I think he could’ve cracked, y’know? It scared me sometimes, how he was.” – I love that everything is all rainbows kittens and sunshine on the surface but there is a dark underbelly to the story. That’s nice!
"Are you sure you love him?"
"Tom, I..."
He reaches out and strokes my arm. "Please don't be offended, but I have to ask. I have to protect him."
I look straight into his eyes but before I have the chance to answer he smiles.
"You do. It's OK, there's no need to answer. You do love him." – I love that Tom and her relationship is almost as close as her’s and Bill’s. That they all click the same kind of way.
“You need to remember all this too Tom. You're going to be doing a lot of babysitting.”
“I can’t wait!” He grins – I totally believe him awh!!!
Date: 02/22/09 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
She composes herself. "Do you want me to come over tomorrow?"
"Yes, I... we would love for you to come over tomorrow."
Bill whispers a suggestion in my ear.
"Would you like to join us for dinner? We may have a proposition for you." – wow that’s fast!
"He gave us these!" They point enthusiastically at the pendants hanging around their necks.
"And he was kissing you!" They start to giggle.
"And he was in the BATH with you!" They laugh hysterically. – thanks for the play by play boys! *shakes head*
The twins appear.
"Hello, I thought you were playing outside. Do you want something to eat?"
"No." They shuffle from foot to foot, holding hands in solidarity.
I frown. "What have you done?"
"Nothing Mummy." – I’ve done that too lol
He smiles over at them. "They're a bit bossy though. I think they must have inherited that from you." – lol says the guy who talked her into just about everything!!! *shakes head*
"Well, I'm glad they didn't try to con you into giving them sweets."
"Oh they tried! But I didn't give in and they were OK with that!" He looks so pleased with his small victory I can't help but lean forward and kiss him.
I whisper. "You're going to be a good Dad." – one point for Bill!
They nudge each other and fidget, still whispering.
“Bill?”
“Yes?”
More fidgeting. “Bill?.”
“Yes?”
“Are you our Daddy?” - *flutter claps and giggles* clever boys!!!
Date: 02/22/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
I move to the second case. Expecting it to be as heavy as the first, I brace myself and grip the handle tightly. To my surprise it's as light as a feather and I fall backwards, crashing to the floor. – ahahahaha *cracks up*
"Bring back memories?" He stands up, holding open the patchwork quilt that he stole from the cottage we stayed in that one night, years ago. – awh!!!! I knew he’d keep it!!
"You moved your hips!" – this whole bit, they’re figing about the other one turning them on. It’s just so funny.
"Doesn’t bother me, if it doesn’t bother you." He shrugs. "Plenty of other stuff we can do anyway." He shakes his head. "If that's the best you can do for things to stop us fucking all the time, then you're not trying very hard."
"It's not me that wants to stop!" - *giggles and covers face*
I reach for a Post-it note, scribble on it and slap it on my forehead 'STOP IT!'
He grabs one too and carefully writes 'NO'
Then another 'I'M GOING TO FUCK YOU'
I point to the message still stuck to my face 'STOP IT!' - *cracks up*
"DoyouthinkyoucouldputallthisdowninanemailandIllgetbacktoyouassoonasIcanOKthanksbye." – I had to transfer this to a word document and break it up to understand this. *cracks up*
Come on..." He unwraps my arms from around him and pushes me onto my back, hooking his arms under my knees, raising my legs and pressing them towards my body. It has the desired effect and I scream obscenities at him, my orgasm hitting hard. – even after all these years he can still find it! O.O
He smiles. "It was fun. Me and Tom never did a proper road trip."
"You still could."
"No." He shakes his head. "It's too late now."
"Hey." I poke him with my foot. "It’s never too late." – awh no they don’t get to do that kind of stuff do they?
Bill stares at the closed door. “Do you think they know?”
“Maybe. They’re smart kids, very forward."
"They must get that from me." He nods smugly as he gets out of the bath. - *smacks Bill for his ego*
Date: 02/20/09 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
Fascinating,write some more please. [:
Author's Response: Fascinating is good i hope :)
Date: 02/14/09 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
Please upload the next chapter soon :)
Author's Response: Thx - it took a while, but it's up :)
Date: 02/13/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 13
This is so wonderfully engaging Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Haha, Thank you! and you're welcome :)
Date: 02/12/09 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
Absolutely BRILL!
Date: 02/12/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awwww.. ok I'm pregnant and emotional... this is wonderful
Date: 02/12/09 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
I KNEW THEY KNEW... I KNEW THEY WOULD KNOW!!! I LVE YOU!!! YOu rock!
Date: 02/12/09 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 9
Bill dressed as Jack Sparrow... PRICELESS!Have I told you today that I love you and your writing?
Date: 02/08/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* I think you're purposely trying to make me fall in love. The story is incredible and jeez, I'm not going to even mention the various piercing I have encountered reading this [I just did, didn't I?] Oh well, I love it and can't wait for the next chap. :]
Author's Response: Nothing wrong with a bit of love :) Thank you !
Date: 02/08/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow. I really have no words. This entire thing was great I've spent all day reading 7 tage/7 days and I laughed, cried it was just amazing. Your very talented. Then I started reading this and im so happy you've decided to continue. I think Bill is going to be a good daddy! And hopefully they live happily ever after. :]
Author's Response: Thank you estrella17! and I get to be your first review here, so that's pretty cool too :) Sorry to steal a day out your life though, thank you for following the story :)
Date: 02/08/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 13
haha
i like this
in the other story...7 days...bill writes her a letter...to be opened in 5 years...i'm interested as to whatever happened to that...
Author's Response: She's still got it.. ;) Thx for reading (and remembering :))
Date: 02/08/09 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
just keep the stories going :D thank you too.
Date: 02/08/09 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
sorry just had to give you major props since i think *hope* that you are a lil over 25 if you write this way about Bill. sorry in my country the girls seem to have a fixation on the whole twincest thing .. and for me being a 30 yr old fan *yea i know* its an utter waste.
Bill and Tom Kaulitz are PRIME GRADE A YUMMY-NESS so ... your stories just hit the spot for me. Support all the way!
Author's Response: Ha, you found me out! :) We need to stick together :)) Thank you for the support - I'm head over heels for their PRIME GRADE A YUMMY-NESS too! Thank you for reading xxx
Date: 02/08/09 05:26 am Title: Chapter 13
ha love it,that was so weird and perverted of bill though to say that to her,he could have said it when tom wasn't around to
Author's Response: lol, they have no secrets ;)
Date: 02/08/09 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12
oh god are they gonna get drunk and sleep together huh...oh god i hope not
Date: 02/08/09 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12
oh god are they gonna get drunk and sleep together huh...oh god i hope not
Date: 02/08/09 05:07 am Title: Chapter 11
eeewwwwwwww!!!!!!!ebay...seriously,that is really gross,but i can agree they would get a lot of $ for them
Date: 02/08/09 04:02 am Title: Chapter 6
ha...pissed bill...blonde pissed bill even better
