Date: 04/27/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 16
omg! i love the way you wrote this its all my deepest darkest juvenile fantasies about Bill lol mein gott if only you know the stuff my "twin" and i talk about when we imagine Bill. we have our own harem ;) i love this! keep it coming > and i LOVED the bill perspective in 7 days i wanted to CRY!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you - deep, dark, juvenile fantasies are my specialty ;) I'm glad you liked the Bill POV, I will do more I think :)
Date: 04/27/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 16
so cute! i cant beleive they are really getting married.. i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you ;))
Date: 04/25/09 03:11 am Title: Chapter 15
aww this was a great story idk know if you are done with it but it seems pretty complete and i cant even imagine how tom's hair might look but i still love him just as much and im so happy they got back together. great job
Author's Response: Thanks! And it's not quite done yet :)
Date: 04/18/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 15
It's now 3:30 AM, and I've been reading this and 7 Days for the past 2 days. I've cried, I've laughed, I've felt like my heart was breaking. This has to be one of the most perfect love stories on this site. Thanks for such an evocative, emotional tale.
Author's Response: Hey Katanasai, you're welcome :))Thank you for appreciating a love story, and thank you for reading and commenting ;)) (sorry to have kept you up so late!)
Date: 04/13/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
awwww (:
Author's Response: So many awwws :)) Thx!
Date: 04/13/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter 15
aaaaw,
Adoraaaable
Author's Response: Thx :))
Date: 04/12/09 04:54 am Title: Chapter 15
hhooww ccuuttee!!! i love this story and 7 days of course!!!! so good!! update!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Date: 04/10/09 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 15
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Author's Response: !! :)
Date: 04/10/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 15
I've read it all in less than a day. It's lovely! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :))rn
Date: 04/06/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 15
AWWWWW.
=]
I spent the entire weekend reading your story, and then I finished this part today... it's wonderfully written, just enough plot to interlude the smut fest.
Thanks so much for writing & posting this! It's wonderful!
Author's Response: You're welcome, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you :)
Date: 04/06/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
I love that Bill's going through her memories box after they went through Bill's book.
The song thing is beautiful and so touching.
And OMG ! They're engaged!!! :D *squee*
Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Katjana1989, thank you so much! 7 chapters of catch up for you 7 reviews for me :) I'm glad you liked it, the twins, their story, how they are. Thx again xxx
Date: 04/06/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
*Haha, that showing is funny :P
*What a sweet story :) Bill would make such a good dad one day :)
*And then a slightly other version of that story, but I liked that one too :)
*The whole thing about the book is so painful and difficult but also so beautiful.
Date: 04/06/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
*That's a pretty difficult conversation, but so well-written, waw.
*There needed to be something sexy after that, even if it's a small thingy. :)
*Bill, you're a pig!
*"Hey! Wait a minute! MY Sabrina from Firenze?" Woops! :P
*Tom's such a paparazzo :P
*No lip ring? That'd be weird if he did take that out, however, if he did remove his dreads at the same time, I think I wouldn't notice the loss of the piercing that much. But still.
*She's got her nipple pierced."
"Bill, do you have to tell him everything?"
"He's got his cock pierced."
Bahaaa! xD xD xD
Date: 04/06/09 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
*"The same one that taught Bill actually. But don’t tell him." Tsk! xD
*I hate that bitch that ruined Bill!
Date: 04/06/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
*Uncle Tom ! :)
*I really hope Bill's going to be really okay some day.
*Ebay! xD
*Bill's so helpless, it's cute!
*"Mummy? Is Daddy here?"
"Yes. He's here."
Awww! That made my heart melt!
Date: 04/06/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
*The twins are absolutely lovely! I can so imagne that scene. Awww!
*“Are you our Daddy?”
The last thing I hear is my best china crashing to the floor.
-> That's a reaction that was to be expected. :)
Lovely chapter!
Date: 04/06/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
*The patchwork quilt! Aww! :D
*They just want each other too bad. :P
*That sex in the office is kinda funny but sexy!
*How cute, first one kid barges in, then he comes back with his twin. :)
Date: 04/06/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 15
I was not expecting that. Well, maybe half. I did assume the letter would have a proposal after the part in seven days where she said if he still wanted it in five years they would get married. I think I half expected her to freak out and say no again but she's matured so much ^^. If something goes wrong for them now and they don't get married I think I might cry. I must admit, I had completely forgotten about the song so when it was in the letter I was totally shocked. Nice twist ;)You always manage to write in a way that makes everything so easy to picture.
I can't wait for the next update. Take your time though, its completely worth the wait. I'm intrigued as to the secrets Bill's still hiding though after Tom said about his whole closed off period.
I notice you gave the actress' name away, does this mean we're going to see more of her? Maybe she'll have a shit fit when she realises Bill is back with his ex?
I've just got back from the most boring holiday ever in Cornwall where I forgot to take my laptop and was forced to watch Hannah Montana and Eastenders with my niece. I would have gotten home sooner but there was no train direct to Cardiff and so I had to keep switching trains and some how ended up in Manchester so I was majorly pissed off but I got home eventually and read the new chapter and it really cheered me up ^^
Thank you
x
Author's Response: Thank you so much EvilAngel (I get to respond at the third version ;)) It means a lot that you've thought about how the characters react and that you can picture it all from my writing :) Yes, the actress will crop up somewhere in this 7Days universe, not in this particular phase of their story. I'm glad to hear I took your mind off your longer than expected, Hannah Montana infested holidsy! xxx
Date: 04/06/09 11:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Truth is stronger than fiction...mhm...maybe not! Not in the case of your story. I could hardly picture something sweeter, more soothing to the heart than what you've made of this love story. It's not cheesy at all though, don't misunderstand me! Actually, it kind of crossed my mind for a few times that maybe you are Bill's secret crush in real life, because I couldn't find a better explanation for the extraordinary realism of the story. Hi hi...don't laugh! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ah, if only...rnThanks Irene, I often worry about crossing the line into cheesy, given the romantic nature of the story ;) But "Sweet & soothing to the heart" is such a lovely compliment, I hope it makes people happy I guess, as it does me (when I'm not struggling to write it) xxx
Date: 04/05/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
you just made my day.
this story is o good that sometimes i can't help but think about bill and somehow end up thinking about how sad he must have been during their years apart, but then i remember it was all in a fan fic xD
Author's Response: Thanks :) tbh, I think it made my day too when I finally wrote it!rnDon't get the two Bills confused!