Oh.My.God.I have no words. But I certainly know you do!I need to reread and digest before writing my full review. Lovely, absolutely the best on this site! I'll be back!

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I laugh. "Wow, that was quick. I'm impressed, they're never that co-operative with me."
"What can I say, I'm a natural." Tom smiles. "OK, so we're off." He pats his bag. "I have my phone, I have sunscreen, I have drinks and snacks and I'm told there's a football in the garden. Oh, I also fed some cats, I presumed they were yours." – wow look at Tom being all responsible and stuff!

He's silent for a second, then he squeezes them again and whispers something that makes them giggle then they run to Tom, grabbing his hands and dragging him from the room. – I wonder what he told them? *smiles*

it barely brushes his shoulders and is cut in casual layers. It appears to be close to his natural colour, but has highlights of various blonds shot through it. – so weird to think of them being blonde *shakes head*

I hold up my hand to look and notice it has a similar pattern to the tattoo on his chest so I sit forward slightly and lean over, resting my hand on him to compare it.
The ring is not similar. It's exactly the same. The swirls and patterns on the delicately worked silver are intricately replicated in the swirling tattoo inked right over his heart.
Suddenly his hand is on mine and his eyes are wide open, smiling at me. "Yes." He sits up, still holding my hand to his chest. "It's the same." – that’s so cool! He always kept her close to his heart…awh!

"So, what about the rest of me? Do you like what you see?" He smiles again. "I know you were looking!"
I shrug. "You look OK, I guess..." – evil she’s evil!

He cocks his head to one side and gives me a puzzled look, reaching out for me, but before he has the chance I've hauled myself from the tub and am wrapping myself in a towel. – uh-oh!

"Not you Bill, your past. I know I can’t change it, I know that..." I shake my head. "But how can I ever be with you now and not be thinking all the time of all the women who've been there too? It's not just the numbers, it's..." I take a deep breath. "I just think how beautiful they must all have been, how amazing their bodies would have to be, just to get even near to you. Then I think what if I can’t give you what you need..." – uh-oh where did this come from?!

I gesture towards the bed. "Is that how you did it with them? Are you just going through the motions with me?"…"Are you just going through the motions with me? Just repeating the same 'one, two, three' you've done a hundred times before, with... a hundred other girls...?"– wow we are having a severe case of low self esteem and confidence issues!

"You're not going to stay with me." – there we go that’s more like the OFC that I know afraid that you aren’t good enough to keep him so you want him to go before you get hurt…if you control him leaving you’re heart will still break and you’ll feel worse ‘cause you drove him away.

"If you want to see the children you can see the children. Anytime you like. You don’t have to pretend to enjoy fucking me just to see them." – awh poor bear!

"Look at me." I raise my eyes to his and he repeats the phrase. "My biggest fantasy was that I would wake up every morning with you beside me.
When you said it, it was the wrong time, but then it became my fantasy too. But it's not a fantasy any more is it? I woke up this morning next to you. And I'll wake up tomorrow next to you." He brings his other hand up and cups my face. "And the next day, and the next…" – so sweet!

He now has both hands behind my neck and he gently pulls me to him. "Close your eyes."
I do as he asks and he kisses me.
He kisses me the way everyone has ever dreamed of being kissed then he pulls away and puts his finger to my lips. – yum! Lovely! *sigh*

"No, I... I just don’t want you to feel like you're trapped into being with me. I don't want you to stay with me because you feel you have to."
"You’d let me go so easily?"
"No!" I shake my head. "No... I never want to let you go... not again... But..." – but!

"But you could do so much better."
"Better than what? There is nothing better than you and me. And believe me, I've looked, I've tried to find it." – awh so sweet!

He raises his eyebrow. "We’ve been apart for over four years. I was out of control for... at least two of those, probably a bit more. I'm sure you can work it out."
I do a quick calculation in my head. "Oh God." – yeah well he was out of control hope he used lots and lots of protection!

"Three? The Actress." I scowl. "And then... them. The hordes." – who were the other serious relationships?

"But only one night?"
"There were a few I did a couple of weeks with, but that was all."
"The ones that taught you to cook or make a decent cup of tea?"
"Yeah. You see!" He smiles. "It wasn't time completely wasted!" - lol

I cover my face. "I don’t want to know!"
He laughs. "I'm going to tell you anyway! This is so indiscreet of me... but once, I went down on her and there was, shall we say, a slip of the tongue and I rimmed her. She loved it. I mean really got into it. Then when we'd done she locked herself in the bathroom and accused me of forcing her. She went to stay with her mother for three days – wouldn’t come back until I convinced her I’d never try it again!" - lol

He shakily unzips me then he drops to my side. Slowly he slides his hand between my jeans and panties and his fingers press against me through the soft fabric. He mutters under his breath. "So wet for me... always so fucking wet..." – mmmmhhh!!!

"I still remember the first time I touched you, the first time I put my fingers inside you..." His lips flutter across my cheek. "That was the first time I made you come... Oh God..." He's breathing heavily in my ear. "It was one of the most exciting things that had ever happened to me." – really that scene wasn’t that impressive I think it was the full effect of everything!

"Isn't that very... intimate? For a one night stand?" – yeah well when you’re out of control I don’t think it matters!

"I liked to think so. And I didn’t want bad reviews."
It's my turn to make a face. "Reviews? Is there a star rating for that kind of thing?"
He laughs. "Well, if there was, I'd be fully booked!" - lol

"I want to push my tongue deep inside your cunt, cover you with my whole mouth, eat you, lick you, suck you, bite you..." His breath is heavy in my ear. "Then fuck you..." – well we know she like this…the talking bit!

Author's Response: lol, super long - I have trouble finding your comments in the quotes!rnrn- "really that scene wasn’t that impressive I think it was the full effect of everything!" - Do you mean the scene in this chapter or the one in the past that he was referring to?rnrnAnyway, thank you! :)

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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *squeals of utter happiness* if this is what we get after a long wait it so WORTH it!! i love it!

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I like it

Kinda sad tokio hotel went down the tubes :(

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lol aw. what happen. ive read this before

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lmao u make a great sandwich so funny. great chapter

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Love it, Love it, Love it... please upload soon...

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omg..
u have no idea how badly i am freaking out right now (in a good way of course , lol)
this was just...amazing, two litle boys! i neevr expected it....i loved '7 days', this just makes it soo much better..!!
please keep writing,
=D please.

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:D love it

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