that was so great! the way you write bill in your stories is honestly the first time i have liked Bill as the male in the relationship. you are awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

lol @ da phone moment. She totally forgot about the kids for a while eh? xD

Author's Response: lol, he's a nice distraction though, right? :D Thanks :)

hehehehehe.... awesome dude. u write so well :D
Liebe

Author's Response: Thank you :) Liebe to you ;)

Wow.
I've benn waiting to find out what he meant when he said "i've been with a lot of people"
I think she handled it pretty well although, I want to see how she reacts when she meets Karl and likewise with Bill and Dieter. They will see each other again, right?

I'm wondering how Tom's coping with The mini twins. That should be entertaining ;)

Bill's still moving really fast. I just want to shake him and tell him to slow down before he fucks it up and one/both of them has a breakdown. >.<

Update soon ^^
xx

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I've already been thinking about them meeting their respective ex-es, we'll see how that goes ;) And as for moving too fast, well, it's always gone fast for them - nobody said it was going to be easy ;DD

"We should get it fixed, I like to have a shower." He takes some fresh clothes from the case. "Do you think I could have some wardrobe space?" – how long is Bill staying? How long are they staying there?

"Bill, how long are you staying?" - lol

"Until we all move to Germany." – ok um ok

"But don’t you need to go back for your work?"
"No, I'm not leaving, I can handle it from here. But if I do need to go back I'll just go overnight and you can come with me. – yeah cause it’s so easy to travel with twin four year olds. What is it that he does again? I can’t even remember.

And my lawyer. I'll need to talk to him anyway to make sure you're in my will and everything. And...
"WAIT!"
"Yes?" He looks up again.
"Your will?"
"Well yes, of course." – yes of course! Wow that’s a lot Bill! a lot all in one breath of air.

"Hmm..." He takes the pen, flips to a clean page in the notebook and writes 'three' at the top in bold letters. "Three what?"
"Three. You said you'd had three serious relationships." – lol and he wrote it down *snorts* Yes I was wondering about that myself. We know about the actress and the one who wouldn’t let him do “dirty stuff” but who was the third?

"Karl." – A guy? Really? A guy? Really? A guy? Oh look I’m on repeat.

"Carla." – wow she’s all thrown off more then me.

One minute. Two minutes. Five minutes. – tick tick tick she’s not processing is she tick tick tick.

He hesitates. “I can’t deny a few drunken… gropes, but that’s all, never further than that. But this was nothing to do with that part of my life.” – ok that’s kind of super hot!

“I guess when you can't find what you're looking for, you start to wonder if maybe you're looking in the wrong place.” - *nods* I understand.

He goes on. “It wasn't really a relationship as such, but... I included it because it was important to me."
"How important?" – no not “how important?” WHAT made it important?

“Well, he works for me, so, yes.” – eeee you screwed an employee?

"Do you really want me to spell it out for you?" – yes please.
I chew on my lip. "No, I suppose not." – awh!

“Bill, this is such a lot to take in. I think I need… I need...”
The blood has drained from his face. “What?” – don’t freak yet, deep breaths

“Bill, I think I need a cup of tea.”
“Oh my God!” He laughs in relief. “Tea! Oh! Haha! I thought you were going to say you needed some time out or wanted me to go or something. Tea! I can make tea.” – lol awh poor baby.

“Why didn’t you have a relationship with him? Why didn’t you… take it further?”
He moves a chair from the other side of the table and brings it closer to me, putting our mugs down in front of us. “He wanted something I couldn’t give him.”
I make a face.
“Not that!” He chides me, giving me a gentle shove. - lol
“Sorry.”
He pauses and takes my hand. “He was in love with me. I think I kind of knew, I was flattered, he was attractive… it was… nice. But it wasn’t right, he wanted much more than I did. And he told me a few truths about how I was, who I was. It was him that set me on the road to… well… here.” - awh

“As long as I don’t have to meet him.”
“Hmm, you will, he's my Chief Designer.” - *slaps hands to face* oh my!

He tuts. “You're still friends with Dieter and you lived together.”
“That's different.”
“It’s worse.” – not it’s not she was alone and couldn’t contact you. She though you were unattainable and unreachable. She had given up hope. But you had the opertunity to get a hold of her and you waited until now to do it.

I laugh lightly and stroke his hair back from his face. “It’s not the most unlikely scenario in the world, is it?”
He feigns offence, laughing too. “I don’t know what you mean!” - lol

He raises his eyebrow suggestively and shuffles forward on his seat. “Well, I don’t know if you remember, but I always wanted…”
“Ssh,” I put my finger to his lips and grin. “I remember.” – oh yes please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol, thanks :) You may be pleased to hear that I have already started a side story where his encounter is 'spelt out' and as for the pleading for the last bit... Well, we'll see ;))

Phew, I was expecting something way worse than that from the chapter notes. Guh, they're so cute; even after 4 years.. :))

Author's Response: Hey, thank you :)) Yeah, maybe I did overstate the case a bit in the notes, but I think I have readers from all different perspectives - I didn't want anyone to think it's just some random controversy added purely for drama ;) Thank you again! :))

haha i love it...

Author's Response: Thank you :)

I think this new revelation is perfectly true to the character. I liked this chapter very much. She's has concerns, but she's not running away. She had questions about the other girls (any of us would) and he addressed those honestly IMO. I like this story a lot. :) I would like to meet this Bill in person. RAWR.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) And I'd like to meet this Bill too :D

yay

Author's Response: I'm taking that as a good 'yay', so thank you! :)

I promised to come back, so here I am. I liked it when someone said it's strange how we are in your head and still you're the one we know the least about. Even Bill seems easier to read. I'm not saying he is a simple person, but he is more childish than her and the fact you picture him so close to how he really is makes everything more realistic and enjoyable. I know this sounds more like literary criticism, but I can't stop admiring your style. As a reader, I appreciate not only the subject, but also the switches in their minds and the unexpected turns emotions make in them. Sex is not only a bonus, but a way of expressing everything better. So please write more, so that I can bore you again with my coms!

Author's Response: I like what you said - that they express themselves through sex - I think this is true with them, it's not just rampant horniness all the time - but that is worrying to them too, especially her. And yes, their emotions turn quickly - they have a life of their own, sometimes out of my control! Thank you so much for all your comments Irene :) xxx