Date: 03/13/09 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 2. Hunger. -*
for me or for you? ;)
haha, weird story, but cool all the way!
Date: 03/09/09 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3. Meet The Parents. -*
im liking the story so far...*starts day dreaming*...hehe...Bill...vampire..biting..
*spaces out a little*
Date: 03/02/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
OMG LOVED THIS STORY!!!!
Date: 02/24/09 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
This was SO GOOD! i love vampires and i like tokio hotel, it's the perfect match.
i have read alot of vampire/tokio hotel fictions but no one as good as this!
you guys rock on writing fanfictions!
Date: 02/18/09 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
This story was truly and utterly amazing! Every chapter held suspense for me, I loved it! xD
Date: 02/16/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
Give me a few moments to soak in the ending to an absolutely incredible story... -ten minutes later- Alright, let me try to not completely just lose myself to this. I'm a constructive critic, after all! Critism first... then my squees!
In several chapters you place "wont" when you mean "won't". "Won't" is "will not," which is what you mean in several chapters. "Wont" is "likely, accustomed, or used [to]." I think there was something else I needed to bring up, so I apologize that I'm not on top of my game. Usually, I read an entire fanfic in one day and then review... however, I needed to edit a chapter to a fanfiction my friend is creating and took a break on reading yours. And I'm not exactly a person who goes back and rereads something... I'm not patient enough for that now that I know what happens. If it wasn't something big enough for me to remember, then it doesn't take away from the story and isn't that important. =P
Good luck on you two becoming "one writer". My friend, who writes as well and uses this account with me, and I have tried to write together, but we're so different in our styles that it's not possible. Now we both just write what we want and edit each other's works. Good Lord, you should have heard us argue about everything when we tried to co-write.
Okay, now time for my squees!! I'll be honest, I am not a big Tom Kaulitz fan -- I think that he's the essence of every male: just wants sex. He's full of himself and always just has one thing on his mind. Yes, I'm biased when it comes to him -- but I try to keep an open mind with every fanfiction I read. Despite my dislike for Tom, I truly enjoyed this story. I found myself laughing along with the story, feeling sorry for him, and (overall) just delving willingly into the plot. Even when it turned out to not be a Bill/OFC fic, I didn't care -- surprisingly. So fantastic work. Not only that, but the ending had a wholesome feel to it. It doesn't seem rushed at all and I enjoy the aspect of a bright future ahead.
I hope that you have a lovely morning/noon/afternoon/night/orwhatevertimeitisthere.
~~Luna
Date: 02/09/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
wow...this was amazing!!! Just ONE lil thing, though...Even a human can live without a stomach. It's just a storage device for food until your body uses it. My friend doesn't have one. It's kinda disgusting watching her eat, though [she has sit on the pot && eat >.
Date: 02/09/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
Good but is she only with Tom? I thought she loved both Tom and Bill.
Date: 02/09/09 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
i loved it.
you know, you could make a sequel...
(:
Date: 02/09/09 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
GAHH!
That's cute! Tom settled down!
&& Bill got a girl to give his sexy sweetness to.
Im jelouse! -LoL-
I want a Bill, and a Tom for my friend [cuz im nice lyk dat]. ^^
I loved it! Thank you for writing!
I apreciate it! xDD
Date: 02/09/09 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
I am already married to Tom! Leave me alone and I'm only sharing with veggielover13 and AllisHatake and even them she only get's him every third thursday every two months and on that day i get Bill! ^_- Ohhhhh is Bill going to get with Kim?
Date: 02/09/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
OHGOODGRAVY.
I CANT BELIEVE YOU GUYS ARE ENDING THIS :((
i almost cried when i read that.
but it was great :D:D:D:D:D:D
Date: 02/09/09 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
HONEY, I DON'T NEED A MARRIAGE TO DECLARE MY LOVE FER THIS BOY!
so BACK OFFFF!
xD
ahh.
dude. watch when i steal BILL ASWELL!
BWAHAHAA!
xD
xx.
Date: 02/09/09 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
awww :)
its such a sweet ending,,
hell it is the perfect ending to a perfect fairytale :)
Date: 02/09/09 08:11 am Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
Awwwww.....that was such a cute ending. I liked it. Teeheee!
Date: 02/09/09 03:53 am Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
awww
awesome ending to an awesome story
=]]
Date: 02/09/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
ya...i dont THINK i already am...i KNOW i already am. no questions. tom and i plan on having kids some day but for now its pretty much all about sex.
be jealous.
GREAT STORY!!! I LOVED IT!!!
Date: 02/08/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
a great ending to a great story ! im sorry to see it end, but it was a great ending!
Date: 02/08/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
AHHHHHHHH *happy smile on face*
Date: 02/08/09 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 19. The End-*
loll
I loveeeeedddddd this
Storryy!
And im going to miss it
dearly
*wipes away tear*
Good job guys!
You dudettes are awesome!
-Rissa