Date: 01/23/09 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 14. Wanting Him.-*
will u update if I make 14 other profiles and review this chapter on each profile?
Date: 01/23/09 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 14. Wanting Him.-*
will u update if I make 14 other profiles and review this chapter on each profile?
Date: 01/23/09 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 14. Wanting Him.-*
haha i got a shout out *dances around like ive got mad cow disease* aww fuck 15R's . alright people get to work i wont 15R's stat! ok lets move move move! *dances around like amad cow again*
Date: 01/23/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 14. Wanting Him.-*
Good chapter. Is Bill's jawline more pronounced? I hadn't noticed.
Date: 01/23/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 14. Wanting Him.-*
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
i love it!
Date: 01/23/09 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 14. Wanting Him.-*
Aww i loves it! but i want moreeee!!!! x[ stupid cliffy
Date: 01/23/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
Just started reading this story and it's getting good.....*Shivers* Keep up the good work!
Date: 01/23/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
OH EM GEE!
DUDE! - I need more!
I hope they dont eat her - thats just...bumer.
They r like ...so right but so wrong!
More, More, More?
Date: 01/23/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
I like your story but I wish you wouldn't use the vampire concepts from her books like "venom"- I really hate her idea of a vampire. I subscribe to the anne rice view :)
Date: 01/23/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
I normally hate fantasy type stories but this one is so addictive!
Date: 01/23/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1. Who are you? -*
yes yes absolutely good xD though breaking dawn isn't that good it'S just like writing for it'S to over happy ending marriage etc.
Date: 01/23/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
omg omg omg omg awesome chapter
Date: 01/23/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
Are you reading new moon or something :P looks like it juuuust a really little bit xP soo still like it and I review didb't I xP I don't have school next two weeks so write soon and make my lots and lots of free time bearable :D
Author's Response: lmao. i finihed that. i'm buying breaking dawn this saturday. and does it? is that a good thing? haha -xO
Date: 01/23/09 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
damn
im excited to see whats next
u guys are why good at this
Author's Response: haha :] thanks you x loved your review lots leik jelly tots an vodka shots :) -xO
Date: 01/23/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 13. Stake And Lion // The Juice Box -*
Loves it!!! =D you know I always do! xD
Date: 01/22/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 12. A Premontion? -*
Damn, i would so review ten times, lol!
oooh, its getting very interesting! honestly, apart fomrt he cravings for blood, i wouldn't mind being a vampire too much, the eternity thing would bug me, but then if there truly is sucha thing as true love, i'd be more likely to find it right? lol! sorry for that!
i have to say girls your writing is very easy to understand, none of that having to go back and read it to know whats going onj, perfectly straitforward, meaning a fun and entertaining read! hope to see more fomr you soon!
ta ta, thea
Date: 01/22/09 10:53 am Title: Chapter 12. A Premontion? -*
i love this
Date: 01/22/09 03:54 am Title: Chapter 12. A Premontion? -*
im having withdrawls already and i havent even finished writing the review!!!!! i LOVE YOU TWO!
Date: 01/22/09 01:56 am Title: Chapter 12. A Premontion? -*
Now is this real or not asking this because you write it in italics :D
Author's Response: maybe... maybe not. you'll have to find out ;)
Date: 01/21/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12. A Premontion? -*
wow! I really like this story! but you're such a tease!! so much sexual tension and then nothing!! arrrrgh!