Date: 04/19/09 04:30 am Title: Chapter Nine
really enjoyed this. :) :)
Author's Response: Oh wow! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 04/18/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Nine
woow .this was soo cute! i never read and tom and georg one before. its soo funny and adorable . LOVED IT! now u should so write one with Bill and Gustav, like a sequal to this story. it would be soo adorable cuz i am getting the embression that gustav n bill are kinda gonna go through wat tom and georg did ahha
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I am so happy that you enjoyed my story - and thank you for reading it even though it was a Torg! I'm considering a Bill/Gustav sequal...I have a few ideas running around but I'm not too sure which one would work best!
Date: 04/18/09 11:55 am Title: Chapter Nine
I don't like Torg, this was my first Torg. And I loved it, it was cute! I see why you're featured!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for making this your first Torg! And I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 04/18/09 04:59 am Title: Chapter Six
Awwwww... Bill is such a good little brother. You know... I'm not really a big fan of Tom and George pairing ... But this story is starting to change my mind.
Author's Response: Thanks - I really tried to make Bill as caring and sweet as I could without overdoing it. I'm glad you like the story so far and thanks for your review!
Date: 04/18/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter Three
Ohlalala! George has some plans man!
Author's Response: That he does...
Date: 04/18/09 04:19 am Title: Chapter Nine
You know I literally squealed when I saw this had been featured. Finally. You really really deserved it, honey. I'm glad this is finally getting the recognition it deserves. Sorry, I haven't had a chance to read your new fic yet but I will do so as soon as I get the chance. You are an amazing writer. I feel so happy that I managed to contribute to getting that up there. Well done. This fic is too perfect for words. Just thought I'd drop by to say that even though you already know what I think of it. :)
Author's Response: I owe the feature all to you - I was speechless when I read what you wrote about it and so very honored! As always, I thank you so much for reading my story and wanting to feature it in the first place! You're amazing and so sweet!
Date: 04/17/09 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Nine
This story is worthy to be featured. I loved it. Loved this pairing too.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Date: 04/15/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine
That was the perfect ending!! I love it so much! This is definately an instant fave!
Poor Gustav, and I want a sequal that is Bill/Gustav...Right now.
Author's Response: Yes, poor, poor sweet Gustav. Maybe I will write the Bill/Gustav. I just need some ideas for it. I'm so happy you liked the story and the ending! And thank you for favoriting and reading my story!
Date: 04/15/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Eight
This chapter is really hot, and that sex scene was really great, especially since it wasn't meant to be hot and sexy, it was meant to be plot. It was very tasteful. I really love it. Amazing for a first sex scene.
This entire chapter is really great, and I can't wait to read the last chapter.
Author's Response: I am so happy you liked the sex scene! I tried really hard with it, and I guess it came out all right! And wow, it was tasteful? Thank you!
Date: 04/15/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I'm beginning to think Bill is asexual in this chapter. Totally happy not paying attention to anyone, not even looking at the people surrounding him. Funny.
I think he was very in character as well. I really like this chapter. I really like this story. It's going on my favorites the minute I'm done reading it.
Author's Response: I really didn't want to pair Bill up in this story, so I let him have a good time without having him latch on to any side characters or stuff like that. And I'm so glad you like the story so much!
Date: 04/15/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Six
I love the ultimate twin moment there at the end, where Bill starts crying and is in pain because his brother is. In fact, I just love the whole comfort scene, and everything that was said. You are amazing. I love you.
This is an amazing chapter, and the song I'm listening to doesn't help in making this chapter any less painful. Poor Georg, and poor Tom. But Tom is an idiot.
Author's Response: Again, I am so happy you appreciate my relationship for the twins! You totally understood what I was trying to convey there, with them sharing each other's pain and comforting one another. And yes, Tom is stupid. But pity him anyway!
Date: 04/15/09 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Five
Bill is Mr. Words-o'-Wisdom. He's the mother and the therapist all wrapped into one. I love the brotherly moment where Bill gets him awake and then is all affectionate, leaning his head on his stomach. It's so sweet.
Yeah, I bet he will keep his promise, because girls don't get him up anymore, only Georg...This should be interesting.
I also can't wait to see what Gustav will do when he finds out...
Author's Response: Thank you for liking the brotherly moment! I am so happy you appreciate it! I tried really hard to make the twins close, and I'm glad you think I'm doing it right! And as for Gustav...well, just wait and see!
Date: 04/15/09 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Four
Aw, the line where Bill is like "I don't care what you do. I don't want to see it, I don't want to hear it. Ew. Ew. Ew!" was so adorable. You can clearly see Bill's my favorite in the band, right? Sorry.
But really, we're getting there. We are getting there. I like it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked that line! I was laughing when I wrote it...because I think Bill really would react like that. It just seems like him. And that's fine he's your favorite. He really is very adorable!
Date: 04/15/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Three
This is utterly adorable, I have to say. Tom really just needs to admit that he's in love with Georg, and I don't even particularly like this pairing! But really, I like this fic. A lot. I feel bad for Georg!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! Tom is totally head over heels for Georg...he just needs to overcome his tough guy image and come out and tell him! Poor Georg...I made everything so hard for him!
Date: 04/15/09 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Two
I love that Bill acts like the mother...XD It's so hilarious, and it's a great contrast to his usual role as the childlike adorable little ball of happines...
This fic is keeping me interested, which is a great feat, considering Bill isn't a main character. That's usually a requirement.
Author's Response: Well, one of the twins has to be helpful...and I think Bill would do it best. He's more sensitive publicly than Tom is. I'm glad you like it so far even though Bill isn't the main character!
Date: 04/15/09 07:37 pm Title: Chapter One
Aw, poor Tom! I usually don't like fics where a main character is not Bill, but I like this so far.
Author's Response: I'm glad you do! Don't worry; Bill is featured as a secondary character in this story, so he is around in most of the chapters!
Date: 04/03/09 02:24 am Title: Chapter Nine
this was my third time reading it its still my favorite
Author's Response: And I am truly greatful that you still love and read my story. Thank you so much - you're always very sweet.
Date: 03/04/09 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I loved it!! You could write a sequel about Bill and Gus...I said could! :) You rock writing x3
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I could do a sequel with Bill and Gustav...maybe, I'm considering it. I'm glad you liked my writing and thank you so much for reading my story!
Date: 03/02/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Aww I'm sad it's over!!
You should write more Torg! I would definitely read it.
:)
Author's Response: I'm planning on writing more Torg soon. Thanks so much for reading my story! I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: 02/26/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Lol! What a prefect ending! You should definitily have a one-shot or something in the future for this, like a sequal, about what happened between Bill and Gustav! I loved this story!! And it's over!! *crys* I guess I'll just read the whole thing all over again later!! *crys* Awsome story! Hehehehe. Gustav a voyeuristic perv. *laughs uncontrol*
Author's Response: I'm am considering a sequal/one-shot with some Bill and Gustav goodness (and some Torg as well!). We'll just have to see if I can come up with a decent idea first! Feel free to read this story as much as you want, it means a lot to me that you like it that much! Gustav as a perv = hysterical (it's always the quiet ones). And thank you so much for all of your reviews and thank you so much for reading my story!