Date: 04/22/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter One
omg that is amazing and creepy at the same damn time
Author's Response: Amazing and creepy? Well, at least there is a compliment in there! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/20/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I'm really happy with how you ended it. Gustav as a voyeur. I never saw it coming well... cough... maybe in the back of my mind I did. Hehe. I love 'em.
The ending was just right, the sweet and tangy mix of fluff and smut. X3
The story was great fun to read and I hope that I'll reread it many more times. Thanks for expending the effort to write such a lovely work of art! You have some amazing talent and I hope you can use it to the best of ability!
Author's Response: Oh wow, I don't know if I'm deserving of all your compliments! But thank you, all of your reviews were very sweet! I'm so happy you liked the story (and my sweet, pervy Gustav!) and please, feel free to reread it as much as you want! And I'll try to use my writing abilities to the best as I possibly can - though this story is my pride and joy on this site, and I am so happy you chose to read it!
Date: 04/20/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Eight
That was your first sex scene? Dear it was wonderful! You did fairly well!(coming from a noob in the subject herself) The best part was that you didn't rush it and the way you describe even their most casual of touches is enough to make a good round of squeals. Great job dear.
Author's Response: Yes, that was my first! I really didn't feel like I was ready to get all graphic with everything, so I just went with description and loving moments! I am so glad you liked it!
Date: 04/20/09 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Seven
*can't feel body. Crying from laughing too hard* Everything in this was so awesome, but ZOMG GUSTI!!!! >XD
Sweetheart has to stop arguing with the bartenders. lmfao
Author's Response: Yay, you're the first person to notice the Gustav-fights-with-bartender sequence that I had going on! Wow, I'm so happy that you find Gustav so funny. He was intended to be the comic relief!
Date: 04/20/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter Six
Wow. *perfectly in love with your story* It's just this right blend of angst and satisfaction that keeps me reading. This was a great chapter. The way you wrote the argument was so believable and Tom breaking down and crying made me nearly break out in tears. However, at this point in time I'm mostly concerned for Georg.
And guess Gusti wasn't so clueless after all. =)
Author's Response: Ah, dear sweet Gustav...does he or does he not know? Yes, Georg is the one that needs the extra loving right now...and Tom...because I made him cry! Aren't I nice? It thrills me that you're enjoying the story so much, especially the way I wrote it!
Date: 04/20/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Five
Aw. I rather adored this chapter. Tom's feelings are developing rather nicely I'd say, and Georg is such a sweetie.
The best part would have to be definately how oblivious Gustav is. That was great. Is he like playing World of Warcraft or something? That would be funny... or youtubin. Or hell, maybe Gustav's reading this story on his laptop. ;D
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like my Tom...I was trying to bring out his feelings without making him too mushy. Same with Georg. And yes, Gustav is totally the best part! He was playing video games and watching stuff and YouTube and he had his iTunes open and was blaring Metallica. He's very good at multi-tasking!
Date: 04/20/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Three
I have died laughing. Omfg. >XD The ending of the chapter was wonderful!
Georg is quite the mastermind. Hehe.
Author's Response: Georg is a very sneaky, very clever little boy! Glad you thought it was funny!
Date: 04/20/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Two
Rawr. Bad Tomi. Dominant or not, you have no right to treat Georg like an abused puppy. >.>
But wow, this chapter was even better than the first. I'm so thouroghly hooked now. ;D
Author's Response: Haha, I guess Tom does treat Georg like that, doesn't he? Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 04/20/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter One
Whoa. I was a little iffy on reading this, but it really has an amazing start! Lol. I love the way you describe things and the feelings both of them have. It seems like it could be real. I can't wait to read more chapters. *scurries to the next one*
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad that you like my descriptions! I tried really hard to make them as realisitc as possible and I'm never sure if I do it right or not! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/20/09 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Four
Bill jumps off the bed. “I don’t care what you do. I don’t want to see it, I don’t want to hear it. Ew. Ew. Ew!” He scurries towards the bathroom, squealing in disgust as he shoves his fingers into his ears.
----LMFAO omg I'm sorry but that is the most awesome picture eveeeer! Priceless; I could picture it in my head perfectly.
Author's Response: Ah, glad you liked that! I was trying to think of a good way for Bill to react to the situation at hand, and that was what I came up with...I thought it would be funny if he was disgusted - and it seems like it was!
Date: 04/20/09 04:06 pm Title: Chapter One
I just had to come back and read over a few scenes again - this is weird, but I ADORED your characterization of Bill. there was something really special about it. Particularly in lines like this: Out on the dance floor Bill is the life of the party, girls and guys begging to gain his attention but Bill ignores each and every one of them, remaining alone and having a good time without any interruptions.
Wonderful!! Probably one of my favorite fic-Bills... :)
Author's Response: My fic-Bill and I are very happy that you enjoyed his portrayal in this story! I was just trying to make him the cute, loveable, caring brother that I imagine him to be (and he probably is...to a degree, of course, because I'm sure he can get moody very quickly)! The scene you quoted, about Bill dancing, was written mainly because I wasn't trying to pair Bill up with anyone and I wanted to show that he didn't need to be attached to anyone to have a good time...because he's Bill, and Bill is always the life of his own little party!
Date: 04/20/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Nine
nasty gustav
like it
Author's Response: Nasty Gustav is one of the best Gustavs ever! Glad you liked it!
Date: 04/20/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter Four
lol
georg is so sweet,he really loves tomi
Author's Response: Yes, he does love Tom very, very much!
Date: 04/20/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Three
evil Tom
poor Georgie
i hope Tom will bottom
Author's Response: Georg needs all the pity he can get because Tom is just not being that nice to him. And don't worry, Tom will bottom. Eventually.
Date: 04/20/09 02:41 pm Title: Chapter One
this seems so fucking real like i can almost touch them,see them...
good job
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! Glad you find it real!
Date: 04/19/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Nine
gustav is
sooo funny
lol
hmm....
i never would of thougth he would
watch lmao
Author's Response: Gustav was supposed to be the comic relief in the story, in a not so obvious way...and yes, he's also a dirty perv at the same time! Glad you like his character and thanks for the review!
Date: 04/19/09 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Eight
yeah finally
luved=)
that got me horny
lmao
Author's Response: Haha, glad you liked the sex scene! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/19/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Five
did gustav
notice is hard on
??
lmao
Author's Response: Yeah, he did...only he's so sneaky that no one noticed that he noticed. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/19/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter One
Wow, very good! I've never read Torg before (somehow didn't strike me as appealing), but this chapter is very promising. You portray them so well. :-) The struggle Tom goes through, his fatigue...it seems very realistic, in parts almost cynical. For example:
"Tom really doesn't care. He'd stopped caring a long time ago, because all they ever did was get dragged from show to show to show and they were never given even a moment's time to themselves."
I like that. RL doesn't tend to be a fairy tale, and I think the boys are occasionaly VERY fed up. So thumps up for not trying to prettify such details...
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you like my story so far and my portrayals as well. I do think they probably don't enjoy touring as much as they should, getting dragged around as much as they do. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/19/09 02:45 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Wow, amazing. Tom and Georg were very in character and their relationship troubles were very believable. Es ist toll! :) I really loved Tom and Bill's relationship in this story, where their roles were more reversed and Bill took care of his older brother. Very cute.
TORG IS LOVE!
-BRE
Author's Response: Yes, TORG IS LOVE! Yay, someone who agrees with me! Thank you for reading my story and I'm glad you liked it so much - and Bill and Tom's relationship, but I really do think Bill probably takes good care of Tom when no one else is watching. Thanks for the review!