Date: 01/17/09 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Three
Thank you!
Can't wait for chapter four. Georg's resistance is really amazing, it makes me respect him. And Tom's an asshole. Pretty one)
Bill as wise advicer is an excellent idea, in opposite to such lidl fucker like his bro.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! And you're welcome! Yes, Georg has amazing resistance and Tom is just being his stupid self...and I'm glad you like Bill as the voice of reason (kinda). It's nice of him to help out. Chapter Four is coming soon!
Date: 01/17/09 10:36 am Title: Chapter Three
wow.. O_0
*new reader alert*
i'm like.. in awe at this point!!
i totally LOVED it!!! *squeels* really REALLY awsome and i can't wait for more!!! x)
i could totally immagine smg like this happening in real life and like.. wow..
please update soon? (A)(A)(A)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for your review! I'm so happy you're loving the story so far - and it's nice to know you can imagine it happening in real life (if only it did...haha!). An update is coming soon!
Date: 01/17/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter Three
This story is really good. I'm enjoying the leisurely pace of this story. (I wouldn't necessarily call it "slow".) You're taking the time to go through Tom's thoughts and feelings, and it's extremely fitting for this story. I can't wait to read more, and I look forward to the next update! This story is captivating. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! It's nice to know that you're enjoying the pace of my story - I really am afraid of making it go too slow but I guess I'm not doing that! I'm so happy you're enjoying and an update is coming soon!
Date: 01/16/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Three
Who-hoa! xD
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 01/16/09 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Three
Awwwe. I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! More will be up soon!
Date: 01/16/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oooooh. Tomi's being all seductive - I love it!!!!
Author's Response: Tee hee, seductive Tom = amazing!
Date: 01/16/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter One
Omg I fricken love it so far!! I'm a definite Torger girl so I'm happy to see some new Torg on here! WOOT!! *adds to favorites*
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for the favorite! Torg is awesome, and it's great when it shows up - but there needs to be more of it!
Date: 01/16/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
Uh...I don't know about you but I sure as holy heck would never tell my sister hey, this chick's in love with you and, anyway, you don't want to bang guys anymore so go for it. I know it's slash and it's well written but I'm a bit incredulous of the dialogue.
Nevertheless, I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! And I appreciate your criticism on the dialogue - I personally find dialogue a bit hard for me to write in general, but it's especailly tough for a character like Bill. I'm trying to keep him in character and when I think of Bill I sort of want to write about a girly boy who acts like he's six...which I'm trying to avoid. And I too would never tell my sister (I have one) to go after a girl because she doesn't want to sleep with guys anymore, but Bill's different so who knows what he'd say to Tom if a situation like that ever happened. I kinda was trying to make it seem like Bill knew that Tom unknowingly wants Georg without having Bill come right out and say it...maybe I should have explained it more. Oh well.rnrnBut I'm glad you like it anyway.
Date: 01/16/09 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
haha shit, I meant, get back AT Tom of course ;)
Author's Response: No problems - Georg will get back at Tom if he feels the need to!
Date: 01/16/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Three
Oh I love this! Go Georg, get Tom back!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! And yes, go Georg! He needs Tom!
Date: 01/16/09 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Three
I LOOOOOVED the chapter :D Hihi, go Georg ^^ And Bill xD Stupid Tomi, he's in love but doesn't know xP lolz xD *srry if my review is weird, just had a depressing moment* I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Don't worry, there's nothing weird about your review! Much power to Georg and his ability to sorta stand up for himself, and Tom will forever be stupid (it's a little known fact, lol). Thanks so much for your review and update coming soon!
Date: 01/13/09 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
*strangles tomi* HOW COULD U BE SO STUPID TOMI?! U IS BEIN SO MEAN TO MY GEO!
Author's Response: Tom doesn't mean to be stupid...that's just how he is! In complete denial...and poor Georg has to put up with it!
Date: 01/11/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
Hallelujah! You can write Torg! Torg is a seriously hard pairing to write and there's SO few that can handle it, so this made my day :) I love how extremely well you portray the way Tom craves Georg's attention and ends up losing his head, doing something out of line to keep it. Even though he can't even admit to himself that he actually wants it. Please update!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! You actually think I write Torg well? Thank you so much - I'm really trying very hard to make this story correct with characterization and everything! It's not that easy, seriously. An update's coming soon and thanks so much for your review!
Date: 01/11/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter Two
Damn this is good!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Nice to know you like it!
Date: 01/10/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter Two
awww i love this...there aren's many stories tom-georg..and it is one of my favourite pairings...please more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you like the story - and there really aren't a lot of Tom/Georg stories! An update is coming soon!
Date: 01/09/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter Two
ohmygott, I love this. This story, and you, are totally going into my favorites. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Really? Double favoriting? Oh wow, thank you so much! That's really sweet! I'm glad you love the story and an update is coming soon!
Date: 01/09/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter One
So, honestly, this is the first Torg I've ever read.. but I've always kind of liked the thought of seeing Tom and Georg together. And I loved this. It was beautifully written. On to read chapter two. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter - and don't be afraid to embrace the Tom/Georg love! I'm a twincest fan first, but Torg is very appealing as well.
Date: 01/09/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Two
I love this story :D Torgy it is ^^ Haha xD I really enjoyed it ^^ I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you're enjoying it - and an update is coming soon!
Date: 01/09/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter One
This is really good, I look forward to more. We need more Torg around here and I think you've actually inspired me to update one of mine that I've been having trouble with lately, so thank you. :)
Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! We do need more Torg - too many one-shots, not to say that they aren't good one-shots (most of them are)! And you're welcome with the inspiration, but to be honest I don't know how my story is in any way inspiring! It really is a compliment to me!
Date: 01/09/09 04:15 pm Title: Chapter Two
Another great chapter. Tomi just gets stupider and stupider, doesn't he? I loved it, update soon...you've definitely made a Torg fan out of me. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, Tom is a little stupid, isn't he? Oh well, I'll just have to take care of that somehow...and an update will be coming soon - and welcome to the Torg fanclub!