Date: 02/01/09 07:17 am Title: Chapter Five
I really liked this chapter, and I'm so glad that Tom has realised his feelings for Georg. And also, I love Gustav in this story! How can he not notice two guys kissing right infront of him?!! Poor Gustav with his ignorance!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter - and it's about time Tom realized his feelings for Georg. There was only so much longer that could go on for. And I'm glad you like Gustav! I'm making him as ignorant as I possibly can, but for a good reason!
Date: 01/31/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ok, you uploaded really fast! Thanks xD, I read it yesterday, but I have a little problem and I couldn´t left the review, so I write it today, and to read the last part of the chapter again ;D. Wooa since I read it yesterday I have been thinking in the couple *o* I imagin george kissing Tom wooa *¬*. besides It was funny to read Bill xD -even though he’s in love with you it’s still Georg- Awww JAJAJA, poor George xD, but I can't deny that He has a GOOD body *¬*...BUT xD It was funny reading George suffering by Tom rejection...I'm so cruel...anyway your fic is every chapter more interesting :) love it!"!!!
Please more x.x I don't know If I'll be able to wait for soo long :_( Im gonna get crazy!! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you like my Bill so much...he'd probably be really funny to watch this type of a situation. And Georg does have a good body...and maybe it is kinda cruel to like watching him be heartbroken over Tom, but it gives him a bit more of a character. Anyway, an update is coming soon!
Date: 01/30/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Five
Awwwe. Tom opened up so much. That's incredibly sweet. That side doesn't come out often. :D Geo's a lucky man. ^*
Author's Response: No, Tom's sweet side barely ever comes out...but honestly, I think he's a lot sweeter when the cameras aren't on him. There's a nice guy under there somewhere...haha, thanks so much for your review!
Date: 01/30/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Five
This story is awesome.
Hands down, the best Torg I've read.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the compliment! And I'm glad you like the story so much! Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/30/09 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
ahahahaha, Gustav ignorance is the best XD
Really nice! Got me sooo waiting for the next chapter... ;)
Author's Response: I know! Gustav being ignorant = win. New chapter coming soon!
Date: 01/30/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter One
Got me here. Let's see what comes next... ;D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 01/30/09 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh boy! You put up another chapter! This was really cute. I'm glad Tom finally told Georg how he felt.
Write more!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you thought it was cute, because there really was only so much more time Tom could go with denying his feelings...and more is coming soon!
Date: 01/30/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter Five
Awwwwwwwwwwww ULTIMATE LOVEAGE
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Hehe, yes, it is much love on their part...
Date: 01/30/09 03:04 am Title: Chapter Four
xD I love it jojojo wooa that was hot...and Bill is really cute ._. always worry for Tom and caring him n_n This in one of the fics I have liked more in these days...:)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I'm glad you like Bill (he is cute, isn't he?) and he's being a good big brother! I'm glad you like the story so far!
Date: 01/30/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter One
;D great finc!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 01/25/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Four
Loved it *tries to hold in laughter* *failure* xD Lolz xD That was so great :) Tomi be in love w/ Georg, yes he be xP I hope you continue soon ^^
xx Chi
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Glad you like the chapter...and yes, Tom is in love with Georg...he's still being a bit stupid about it. Update coming soon!
Date: 01/25/09 08:21 am Title: Chapter Four
Wow. This story is amazing. I feel so sorry for Georg, but then I'm so happy when him and Tom are together. I don't usually read Tom/Georg stories, but I'm glad I decided to read this one. Update soon?
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm so happy you like the story, especially since you don't often read Torg. Poor Georg and his conflicted emotions, but when Tom's good to him they work well together! An update's coming soon!
Date: 01/24/09 06:59 am Title: Chapter Four
Uh-oh, there's going to be hell the morning after, that's for sure ;) God, I can really feel how torn Georg is, how he wants to just give in and let Tom do whatever he wants with him, no matter the consequence will be. But then there's the rational side him that knows that he can't, not when Tom act the way he does. It will only lead to even more hurt and heartbreak. I love your characterization of Georg in this story, or to be honest, of all of them. Keep up the good work and update soon please :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you're liking the story! And thanks so much for your insight on Georg's characterization. You totally understand the way I'm trying to portray him, because he really does want Tom but at the same time he just doesn't want to get hurt. Again, thank you so much and an update is coming soon!
Date: 01/24/09 02:47 am Title: Chapter Four
This is a really good fic! Please write more quickly! I need my Torg fix!!
:D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm happy you like the story, and a new chapter is coming soon, so more Torg is on the way!
Date: 01/23/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Four
really good story
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Glad you think it's good!
Date: 01/23/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Four
Humina humina humina .... *Huff pant drool convulses*
Author's Response: Tee hee, thank you! I'd react the same way!
Date: 01/23/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Four
I've never even read a Torg before but I love this story. I really do. I just wanted to tell you that. :D
Author's Response: Aw, you don't know how much it means that you love my story even though you never read a Torg before! That's a big compliment! And thank you for telling me. That also means a lot!
Date: 01/21/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Three
Gah! I loved Gustav's reaction. It was priceless. You're so amazing with your writing. Can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: Ah! Finally, some one actually reacts to Gustav! Thank you for the compliment on my writing, it is very much appreciated. New chapter coming soon!
Date: 01/18/09 01:30 am Title: Chapter Three
O_O
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/18/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter Three
This is a very good start to your fic. Three chapters in and I'm already wanting more, so I hope you're updating soon. LOL
The only issue I have--and it's just a personal one--I don't see Georg as being dominated. At least not by Tom. Every time I read that Tom wanted to show Georg who is boss in your story...well it just didn't seem natural to me. But I know it's a personal thing. It's just a story after all, so I'll try to get used to it. It's just...in interviews and such Tom is clearly harboring such a huge man-crush on Georg it's not funny. LOL And Georg always looks as if he is secretly amused that Tom is so gaga over him.
The way I see it: Gustav dominates Georg who dominates Tom who dominates Bill. So I have to get out of that mind-set in order for me to find that little bit in your plot believable. Other than that, your story is well written and thought out. Excellent job!
Now please update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Thanks for your opinion on the whole Tom-and-Georg-relationship. I personally could see Georg dominating Tom, and if anything like this was true he probably would, but while writing this story I've been imagining Georg as allowing Tom to have his way with him (and to me, the real Georg is very laid back so I don't think he'd really care who was after who...most of the time). I'm actually surprised that no one else has pointed that Georg should be more dominating because I was actually expecting complaints in regards to that matter...but whatever. I appreciate that you're willing to look past that for the story! It means a lot to me and I'll update with the next chapter soon!