Date: 05/28/20 01:31 am Title: Chapter 2
this was a good story!
Date: 09/25/12 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
aw it was cute for a first x3 well done :D
Date: 01/10/09 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lovely! Thank you for the sequel :D
I liked how you used this chapter to get things straight about Bill's hair.
The twin time was HOT !
Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/06/09 09:51 am Title: Chapter 2
my name's tom not God..my favorite line..that was wonderful...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/05/09 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nice. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 01/03/09 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think I like Bill's new hairstyle.
But I'm sure I like Tom's torso more. :P
-making him seem more feminine.-
As the cock in Bill's mouth twitched, Bill grinned - thankful that his brother wasn't all that feminine.
-> yum :P
Nice story for being your first attempt at smut.
Sequel in which Tom gets Bill off? :P
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, but I don't think I'm gonna write a sequal. It's just too hard to write one when my parents could walk by at any minute.
Date: 01/03/09 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I FREAKING LOVED IT.
but love could you PLEASE tell me if your banner photo is real? :D omg! If it is where is it from and where can I get these pics? xD PLEASEE!!
love love love your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, the picture is real - and it's sad because he took them out because they weren't actual dreads, but that's a different problem all together. :) I just looked and looked and looked until I found them - they're probably on photobucket by now though.
Date: 01/02/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT! XD absolutely adore it! ahh i knew great fanfics would aris from his hairstyle and my wish was granted. the smut was perfect, not too much but just enough. and my fave lines were when tom was teasing bill bout having a pale vampire butt. usually poeple say face/skin/etc. but ur reference was better and funnier. loved this! :D
Author's Response: Thank you and I'm glad your wish was granted. I think this is the first one of the dreads, so I'm glad you like it. And thanks about the smut, it was my first time writing it.
Date: 01/02/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
xDDD
that was funny... and really intresting
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/02/09 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh that was exactly what I was talking about!
brilliant xD
Bill was every man's vampire wetdream. favorite sentence, bet every guy has at least one Bill Kaulitz Vampire Wetdream before they turn twenty!
Author's Response: Yes! Thanks so much! :D And that was my favorite sentence to type, so much laughter.
Date: 01/02/09 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nah, I'm all out of constructive criticism with this one :)
Well liked! It's about time we have a dreadcest fic in our hands. This was very cute (with lines that made me go awww, like the last one), funny with their snapping and all round good.
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I feel loveded. :D
Date: 01/02/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/02/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hot.
:D
I'm glad Bill didn't really get them. ):
Author's Response: You think it was really hot? It's my first time writing smut.rnrnAnd so am I. Even though he did look hot in them. :)
Date: 01/02/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
you should write more to this story i could see it becoming a big hit =] and i think your the first to have wrote about them =] which is soo cool
Author's Response: I thought I was the first. :) I feel proud at that. I don't think I'll expand on it, I don't really like writing smut that much - that was a first and possibly last time thing. But who knows?
Date: 01/02/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha, I know what you mean with the "Parents can just waltz right by." Hahaha. I liked it though =) I love Bill's dreads, too. A lot of my friends hate them 0.o
But I liked your story!!! yay!!!
Author's Response: I know right? My mom almost found it. I'm lucky that the computer doesn't like her, or else she'd be reading it. Thanks!
Date: 01/02/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
hm it was reallly good =] though does he really have dreads cause i heared on the news that bills just had his hair braided not dreaded??
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! And yeah, I found about about them not actually being dreads once I had already submitted it. It was only for their vacation, but it kicked my mind into gear and I had to write something about it. :)