Date: 05/26/09 03:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow... I can already tell that this is going to be one epic story, haha. I may or may not have spit out a mouthful of water at the Jonas reference.
:)
Date: 05/24/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jonas?!?!??!?! As in, the brothers Jonas? :)
Tell Bill I wouldn't advise setting fire to his own eyebrows. I shaved mine off once for kicks and I looked like Pinhead from Hellraiser for three weeks.
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! Did I mention that before? I love the thoughts and the funny comparisons and the hillarious dialects and oh my god. It seems like a Tim Burton movie! :)
Date: 05/24/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
"It reminded Bill of a very sad zebra. It felt like a comrade in arms."
I read this line and I fell in love.
Also also also, I felt very sympathetic towards B and T, trying to tune a guitar to an awful piano. I just re-strung mine and I couldn't fine an in-tune piano to tune it to!!!!! All the pianos at my church need cement galoshes.
Also also also, La Boheme is my second-favorite opera. La Traviata is my first, and Carmen is the third. :)
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE your story and the banner is FREAKING HOT!!!!!! :)
Date: 05/24/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, it's the banner that made me click the story.
This is kind of crackish, but I'm curious to see how happens. So please write on.
Author's Response: Oh man, if this is crackish, just wait until the plot starts to thicken. ;)rnrnBelieve me, I'm going to. ^^
Date: 05/24/09 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm definetly going to like this one. *.* Ah! I hope you update soon, because I really want to know more about the situation that got Bill in a dress.
Date: 05/24/09 03:09 am Title: Chapter 2
So, when the story was first published, I contemplated whether I should read it or not. Eventually I decided to wait until there are a few more chapters up before I get to it. Now I'm sitting here kicking myself for not reading before, for not reviewing or anything. Seriously, your writing is remarkable. You make me go from positively interested to slightly puzzled, and then into hysterical fits of laughter, all in a matter of seconds. And I still haven't wiped the chocolate chip ice cream I snorted on the screen at the Paul Kevin Jonas part.
I'm really looking forward to your updates. So you should definitely update soon. You can have my chocolate chip ice cream! (what's left of it in the bowl, not what I'm about to wipe from the computer screen)
Date: 05/23/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
*_* I love you. Thank you thank you thank you!! I love them all in their cranky glory. Poor bored Bill. I especially liked his just repeating the sentence to make it so. Poor put-upon Mr Black. And I must agree that footnotes are love.
Date: 05/23/09 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
maroon.
sweater.
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*more coherent review later.
Date: 05/23/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
hahahahahahahahahaha*
*footnotes are love.
Date: 01/12/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Will you post more soon if I bribe you with a banner? 
Author's Response: *-* Okay, I know how they say a picture is worth a thousand words, but this deserves a book or two, easy. *writes*
Date: 01/02/09 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
What is Bill going to do? Get a job? Well he should, lazing around in a dress all day ;p
Anyway, I'm most intrigued -- I'm also reading this as period piece tho I'm probably wrong as the dialogue doesn't quite fit ^^
Author's Response: He's getting a job, yes. :) Don't worry, it *is* a period piece - in a sense. (It's a period piece that wants to be steampunk but has read too many Discworld-novels, if that makes any sense.) I thought about making the dialogue fit the era - it's vaguely Victorian - but I decided not to because, firstly, I don't have a clue how they talked in Germany at that time, and I don't really have a frame of reference for England, either; secondly, if you try to pull off dialogue like that, and you don't do it right, it feels artificial, and it really drags the story down. Thirdly, I'm not sure how well that style of dialogue would fit with the rest of the story. I'm glad you're intrigued. 8) (sorry for the tl;dr.)
Date: 01/02/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmmm. I wanna see where this is going :D
Author's Response: Don't worry, you will. 8D
Date: 01/02/09 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I was trolling the recent updates and saw your name between Banana's and Haylz's. That is not bad company, so I clicked even though the character death thing worries me. What I found intrigues me very much. So many allegories that had me snickering and smiling, I really can't choose to quote my favorites. Basically, my eyes look like this -> *_* and I'd really like more ASAP. Please.
Author's Response: Thank you! 8D Don't worry about the Character Death thing - chances are it's not someone you care about.
Date: 01/02/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I love you. I love this fic. I love you. I love this fic. I need an innocent flower I can rip the petals off of because I can't decide which I love more but - oh, who am I kidding, fic, all the way.
This chapter was so vague it would've been annoying if I hadn't been hacking up a lung laughing at unfortunate yeast infections and sad zebras - also, what, prison? o.o I thought Bill was small time, man.
I can't wait for Bushido to make his grand appearance (hopefully without the unicorns and fairies. ...seriously. I'm watching you.) and I dunno what you were freaked over Tom for, you got him just fine. This: “I mean, I know you do. But still.” made me coo "d'aw, twins!" and this: “I got it from some girl,” made me chuckle, "Tomi," while shaking my head in an exasperated yet amused manner. -pet-
Um, update. Now would be good. Also no more scraps for chapters, because this is nowhere near enough snarky material for the wait you've put me through! I want somewhere around 10k next time kthnx.
...and okay, but seriously, I have to grope you for that sad zebra line. -shifty eyes-
:D
Author's Response: THE ZEBRA IS THE POOR MAN'S UNICORN. (Or so Merlin tells me.) But it's probably the only unicorn-ish thing you'll see in here. I think.rnrnUm. I'll try? *shifty grin*