Date: 08/02/10 02:34 pm Title: Alternate Ending
It's a way better ending =) great story =)
Date: 08/02/10 02:18 pm Title: Stories and Make Believe
Aww =(
Date: 08/02/10 02:15 pm Title: For Who Am I to Judge?
I'm glad things are getting better between the two =)
Date: 08/02/10 02:08 pm Title: School
I understand Tom, it must be hard for him too
Date: 08/02/10 02:04 pm Title: New Beginnings
Interesting beginning, I'm curious now =)
Date: 05/20/10 10:42 pm Title: Alternate Ending
I've read the whole thing, and I really enjoyed it. Such a raw, and different writing style. The only thing I wasn't a big fan of was the lack of emotions that were described.
Date: 03/07/10 11:56 am Title: Alternate Ending
wow I love this story! It's so sweet. It made me cry as well :') I love the Ø's are you a fan of UnderØath by any chance?
Date: 12/04/09 02:51 pm Title: Alternate Ending
Glad you uploaded the happy ending-it would be too sad without it
Date: 08/27/09 12:59 am Title: Alternate Ending
I think I can barely brgan to imagine what must have been like to write this story.
Though it's really sad and terrifyingly real, I really like it. Your writing is really good.
About the Alternative Ending, I really have to say it was really touching. Thanks!
Date: 08/12/09 04:23 pm Title: Alternate Ending
I love, I love, I love, I love it!! It made me cry and.. i don't know what to say, I just LOVE IT!! ;((
Date: 07/21/09 01:39 pm Title: Alternate Ending
I always liked this one very much.
I was very happy to see that you were on here after you got booted off of Fanfiction.net (look of anger!)
did you add more to this?
Idk, maybe its just been a while since Ive read it.
As always, one of my faves.
thanks so much for writing.
Hannah From TokioHotelObesessionx100
Date: 02/10/09 11:31 pm Title: Alternate Ending
awwww xD Now it just leaves me wanting moar!!!! lol
Date: 02/10/09 08:10 pm Title: Alternate Ending
XD
oh my god, I love it.
I seriously just got chills.XDDDD
Date: 02/10/09 06:23 pm Title: Alternate Ending
Please keep going on the new ending. I know it is complete but maybe a sequel on the new ending. I want to know what happens. What was it that Bill was going to say? Or how will Tom react? What about Gordon and Simone. Please keep going. I love this story.
Date: 02/10/09 06:17 pm Title: Alternate Ending
oh shit love it better then the other ending
Date: 02/07/09 05:24 am Title: Epilogue
I must say I like the alternate ending better. I like happy endings :] Fantastic none the less.
Date: 02/06/09 10:05 pm Title: Epilogue
awwww
is this the end?
that sucks
i honestly thought that was beautiful
Date: 02/05/09 02:31 am Title: Epilogue
i liked the story up until the last chapter, i was a well written story dont get me wrong, but i just didnt like the ending....
Author's Response: There is an alternate ending that I will likely post. It's just too short right now.
Date: 01/30/09 10:54 pm Title: Epilogue
Nice story =] No fair they couldnt see eachother again tho D: