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Reviewer: Lahven Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 11:29 pm Title: Just

..ahm...i guess there was a mistake while updating this, so i'll just wait for the real 12th chapter to upload ^_^' crap, because i wanted to keep on reading it...update soon, pretty please! muah!

Author's Response: All technical problems are solved! There was a chapter 9 or 10 that did not upload properly but the full story is uploaded!

Reviewer: cynical_terror Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 06:33 pm Title: The Letter

Was this listed as GEN before? If you've listed it now as slash and you're saying it is subtly slash, why would we be on your ass for labeling it correctly?

Author's Response: Sorry, I had a story rejected because it was mislabeled. Thanks for replying!

Reviewer: xxlessthanthreekaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 04:49 pm Title: Stories and Make Believe

awww :[
the last part made me cry :'[

Author's Response: Thanks for revviewing!

Reviewer: xxlessthanthreekaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 04:41 pm Title: For Who Am I to Judge?

amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: xxlessthanthreekaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 04:37 pm Title: Life Revisited

omg! this is amazing!! im addicted lol

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: xxlessthanthreekaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 04:33 pm Title: School

awww, poor bill :[
this is amazing!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 02:38 pm Title: For Who Am I to Judge?

Oh Tom is wise beyond his years. And I love watching him crack and learn that it’s easer to care for someone then to hate them.

Hum so Bill is now stuck with Tom for better or for worse. *smiles* I think it will work out ok.

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 02:32 pm Title: Life Revisited

Tom climbs the stairs, his anxiety growing with every step. Is Bill hurt? Has someone said something mean to him? Has he been beaten up on the way home from school?
Tom reaches his room. He leans into the door and knocks softly.
“Bill, are you okay?” – It’s hard to not care for too long when you live with someone. They become yours even if you didn’t want them there in the first place. Especially if you are a good person.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 02:11 pm Title: School

Tom is feeling usurped. Like there won’t be enough love for him. Poor Bill has to deal with a crapy bio family and a now a boy who is afraid that a little lost boy will take all the love away from him.

Author's Response: Good thoughts. Thanks for your many reviews!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 02:05 pm Title: New Beginnings

This is delicious, and painful, and lovely and makes me want to become a foster parent already!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 07:41 am Title: The Letter

Real stuff, not some fluffy(not that that's bad!), overdone, cliche story line. You put us right there inside what's going on, and that is sorely needed sometimes. Fantastic job. 10 stars out of 10(on my scale!)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Lady Tiadalma!

Reviewer: extraORDINARY Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 01:48 am Title: The Letter

this story has captured my heart, truly.
i know nothing about what it feels like
to be a foster child, but this story gives
so much insight on it and it's so real.

i love your work. keep it up. =]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 01:12 am Title: New Beginnings

err i think its because they were singing disney songs, that i thought they were younger >.< lol

Author's Response: They're just immature. Thanks for commenting on that!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 07:11 pm Title: The Letter

aww plz update soon...and cant u make it a bill and tom pairing...i luvz u so much thx=]

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 10:59 am Title: The Letter

I've been all should I? shouldn't I? about reading this for a while now and my curiosity finally gave in. And to tell you the truth I'm glad it did. I don't usually read stories without romance but this story keeps me interested even without any. Bill and Tom are so real in this, I love how you're writing it from personal experience, it makes it seem much more realistic and you can actually imagine it happening. It really is awesome, you totally deserved the feature. I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Oh, well then thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Billcest Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 07:52 am Title: The Letter

THIS IS GREAT!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 07:45 am Title: The Letter

I feel so bad for Bill. I am now curious to find out what the letter is about.

Author's Response: Keep reading. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: eiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 03:46 am Title: When All Becomes Mundane

Cordula is scary O_O.I know someone who is exactly the same,she looks like a boy because of her body.She works at Mcdonalds since forever and dresses like a man really.Never smiles.I think she never bullied anyone but her cool attitude suffise to make you think that she can make your time hell if she wanted to.
Cordula is just furious because she's ugly and bill's not.It's cool that you update often since your chapters are rather short. I like this story.I'm gonna be honest,i think the summary is compatible only with the three first chapters,the rest seems something completely far from that.
I read your reply to my review and i laughed at your version of frère Jacques XD.I am french(which probably explains my weird english lol)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! She is a little stereotyped, though, but she's wonderfully unpleasant.

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 03:37 am Title: When All Becomes Mundane

lol wasnt the lines that tom said in the movie shrek? XD

Author's Response: Not on purpose but Tom is kind of annoying...TomDonkey- hmm. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/09 03:34 am Title: The Next Day

heheh i always fight with my sister that way (you look like a something) but i somehow end up losing -.- anyways good chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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