Date: 04/28/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow... This story is good.
Author's Response: thanks. :)
Date: 01/21/09 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
what i think is odd about the twins is just their relationship, how they're not-so-brotherly. like, i'm not against that obviously, but it just seems weird, the way they act with each other. how they're almost having sex, and bill has to push tom to get going, but how tom seems to not want bill to go with anyone else, how he seems kind of disappointed when he knows bill isn't getting pretty for him, or whatever. is there an explanation for that?
Date: 01/09/09 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this, the smoking hot Billshido, I just don't quite understand what's going on with the twins. Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention, but it just seems like they're really off and it kind of sticks out like a sore thumb in the story. I can't quite picture Bill with curls, but the idea makes me all tingly ;)
Author's Response: I had an explanation of why the twins kind of were so weird when I first started writing this, but I've forgotten! xD But I guess maybe I should ask first - what was off about them?
Date: 01/07/09 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Fuck!! Who wouldn't be up for another go at fucking such a babe as Bill Kaulitz!!? Woot!! Bu's a lucky man. VERY lucky. *dirty thoughts* Soooo hawt.
Author's Response: xD I agree! Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/05/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Anise.. he's an addict.. but yummy YUMMY fic
Author's Response: Who is addicted to who? xD Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/03/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, I read Billshido smut. I feel dirty now. XD Gonna quote those things now:
His thumb rubs little circles on the tip of Bill’s fingers. It’s really a strange sensation, and Bill convinces himself he likes it. With a smile that could only be described as predatory, Bushido lifts Bill’s hand to his mouth, kissing each long nail. His lips are slightly chapped, and Bill can’t convince himself he likes that.
I love that: how he has to convince himself. Like, Bushido is not his knight in a shining armor or perfect or any of that bullshit. (God, I am reviewing Billshido... my mind can't quite grasp that fact.)
Bushido laughs, and, as always, Bill subconsciously compares his laughter to Tom’s.
*purrs in satisfaction* Compare it to Tom... Oh yes. :D
It’s not about kissing anymore; it’s about proving to himself, Bushido, Tom and anybody who could possibly be watching that he’s not afraid to do the unapproved.
Ah, so it's about proving something... Makes it more bearable. ;)
He leans forward until his forehead is touching Tom’s sternum. “I’m so tired,” he whispers, his eyes drifting shut. Tom intertwines their pinkies and kisses the top of Bill’s head, and Bill can’t stop the tears.
Girl, I can feel Bill's (mental) exhaustion, and it's so sad. And Tom, you're too sweet.
So... am I traumatized now? Strangely enough, not too much, maybe because you wrote it. The prose is exquisite, as always. And the Billshido... I was going to use the word "realistic" but then I really would traumatize myself and I don't want that. XD But you get my point, I'm sure. ;)
Author's Response: "Strangely enough, not too much, maybe because you wrote it." You make me so happy inside. I thought it was very important to show that Bill didn't think that Bushido was all that. But honestly, I'm not sure which is the biggest pairing in this fic, mostly because Bill won't make up his mind. Tsk tsk, Billa. And you can't possibly be traumatized, because you're still talking coherently. xD
Date: 01/02/09 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Hell, I LOVED it (L)
Just wonderful. The twins' relationship, Bill and Bushido's relationship... I think they're perfect.
Great job
Author's Response: Thanks! This was my first real attempt at writing Billshido and I was a little nervous. But everyone seems to like it! Thanks again. :3
Date: 01/01/09 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was good. The sex was delicious. You should write more Billshido, please and thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks! I will try to write more Billshido. It all depends on where I get the plot bunnies from, if you know what I mean, haha. But I'll keep your request in mind...
Date: 01/01/09 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I didn't get a chance to read this over the the comm, but I was just as happy to come read it here, instead.
I really liked this a lot. At first I was concerned about Bu's characterization, but you know, Bushido has a lot of characterizations, just as the twins do.
I loved Bill talking about his hair during the sex. That was genius, and seemed so Bill. This was just a good read, girl :)
Author's Response: You were concerned about his characterization? What were you afraid of, haha? rnrnI felt so awkward making Bill talk about his hair like that. I was trying to shove the perm thing into the fic as much as possible, haha, but I guess it worked out! :D Thanks for the wonderful review~
Date: 01/01/09 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
His hair always looks fabuloussssss... HeeHee, he just likes to take it up a notch! *gigglez*
Author's Response: Yes, Bill is always fab! Thanks for the review! :D