Date: 06/25/11 08:17 pm Title: Tom Says It All
this was a good story!
Date: 02/24/09 05:53 pm Title: Tom Says It All
awww im soo glad bills okay i was soo scared
Date: 02/24/09 05:53 pm Title: Tom Says It All
awww im soo glad bills okay i was soo scared
Date: 01/30/09 02:21 am Title: Tom Says It All
awww how cute ending on the first kiss. what's next for the two love birds. I guess I just have to wait and see.
bill throw a temper tantram when tom just ask a question. gesh I think I see drama queen coming out but I guess since bill did get brutally beaten up for tom. he has room to get histerical.
ohh funny when bill keeps interupting tom's confession. and I love when he says does this story have a point.funny this banter seems realistic for the bro's. love love the whole confessional talk.
Date: 01/29/09 11:27 pm Title: Tom Says It All
Aw....cute! keep it comin!
Date: 01/28/09 02:29 am Title: Kept Alive By Wires and a Breathing Tube
finally tom's going to tell bill everything.
its sad to imagine bill the way you describe.
so suspense at the end. bill has ask the million dollar question dun dun dun. what's next
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yeah, some people on my other site said there was a lot of suspense, too. I didn't really think so but I'm the author and I know a little bit more about what's going on. The next chapter'll be up soon!
Date: 01/25/09 09:24 pm Title: The Slut's Revenge
I hate her so much. bill is the best brother ever. he knew what was to happen and he wanted to protect tom. I hope tom makes it up to bill for everything he took for him. so sad hope the ring gets fixed so tom can tell bill everything. keep it up
Author's Response: *beams* You'll see. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/25/09 05:57 pm Title: The Slut's Revenge
Poor Bill! keep it comin bitte!
Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/21/09 04:29 pm Title: The Ring's Tale
I didn’t think that the ring was left on purpose *shrugs* but you never know?
If you're wondering what Marietta said, it's something that would shoot my ratings up to NC-17. – ha ha you should have just set it up to NC-17 and just plain said it *shakes head and chuckles*
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!rnYeah, sorry, there aren't a lot of plot twists in this fic. Just a lot of miscommunication. NC-17...have you ever heard the song Old School Pervert by ICP? If you could shove that whole song into one sentence, that's the effect of what Marietta said. Besides, it's more fun if you make something up- you might very well have a dirtier mind than me, ha! but I doubt it.
Date: 01/21/09 04:23 pm Title: Schlampen sind immer Schlampen (Whores Don't Change)
“I want you inside me,” she whispers, licking his ear.
Marietta groans softly, tightening her hold on Georg.
“Do you want to lick my pus-” – OMG Maretta is a HUGE WHORE!
Gustav watches everything. – what other kinds of things does Gustav see?
Author's Response: Nooooo, really? I don't like Marietta very much, either, isn't that sad? I created her and I wouldn't mind pouring concrete on her feet and throwing her into the ocean. *lqtms* Gustav does sound kinda creepy.rnThanks for the review!
Date: 01/20/09 09:31 pm Title: The Ring's Tale
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/20/09 11:01 am Title: Intermittent
It's a transistion chapter. It is what it is. I enjoy that Bill goes along with Tom even though he doesn’t know where their going and is clearly confused.
Author's Response: Agreed. They're just kind of at that awkard stage of not having really talked to each other for a while. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/12/09 01:57 pm Title: Confusion
“And in the next chapter, P’tero and M’leng get attacked by this pride of lions. So the Weyrwoman’s and the Weyrleader’s dragons go between without them to save the two guys and-” I know this book…um Pern? The Dragons of Pern. Am I right? Do I get a cookie?
He eats a roll with Nutella – yum Nutella…I like the Italian kind better then the American kind!
Author's Response: Dragonseye or Red Star Rising, depending on where it was published. One of the few creditable series in which homosexuality is a dynamic part of society. Georg has a very shallow personality in this story. I haven't decided if there's something in the background with him and Gustav.rnThanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/12/09 01:52 pm Title: Die Maike
Was that ring meant for that bitch? I don't think so? Uh drama, mess, yuck! I want her gone!
Author's Response: Sorry, I'll get back to the story soon! I've been working on Foster Child and have not had the time to finish this one.
Date: 01/12/09 01:45 pm Title: The Girlfriend
Tom is already drawing up a plan to dump her. – good she’s driving me nuts already! I just want to slap the shit out of her face!
Author's Response: lol, Marietta's supposed to be annoying! Thanks for all of your reviews!
Date: 01/12/09 01:41 pm Title: In Which Bill Talks to Georg and Gustav
What an odd way to break this to his friends...in a Burger King. *shrugs* But I suppose you break weird news a weird times?
Author's Response: Tom's too classy to go to Burger King? I have no legitimate reason why they'd be there. *shrug* Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/12/09 01:37 pm Title: Mistake?
Oh! *scoffs* and *squeaks* oh! God! You are awful! Fight and then the start of twincest and suddenly halt! That’s it! The end! *scoffs* *sighs* OMG!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/08/09 08:59 pm Title: Confusion
AH! This should be interesting...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/05/09 09:56 pm Title: Die Maike
omg
WHAT!!!???!!!!!?????????
Author's Response: Check for updates!rnThanks for your review!
Date: 01/05/09 07:53 am Title: Die Maike
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! That's... HORRIBLE!! I mean, the writing itself is great but... NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! NEIN! NON!!! Sheisse!!
Author's Response: :} Sorry, I will update soon!