Date: 03/13/10 11:56 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Hello
I am sorry for the mistakes that there will be in this comment, but I am French and my English is not very good.
I discovered your fanfiction on a French blog where the first chapters are already translated in French. The translation is not finished yet and is on Hiatus for the moment. I decided to read the continuation directly in original version. And I finished it, a few days ago.
I really liked your fic. I just can’t stop reading. (Which is not convenient when we have to get up early)
To tell you everything, I really rarely cry by reading a fanfiction, only 3-4 times … But I was literally in tears during the reading of the last chapter. On the beginning of this fic I was sure that it would finish cheerfully. Then after what takes place during Prom, I began to doubt slightly but more I advanced in the reading and more I began to think that it couldn’t be a happy end. After Bill's plane took off I still hoped a little that Tom would follow him in New York... I hated Andreas at this moment to have convinced Tom not to make it. ^^ And when Tom said "I do" in the wedding I said myself ‘it is finished’. I had to stop to read while I had a third of the last chapter, because it was already one o'clock in the morning and I had classes the next day... I had difficulty in falling asleep and the next day I thought a lot of the story… I almost cried in the college. Lol. . And by reading the end I really cried. So … It is the first time I cries like that for a fanfiction…
I was relieved seeing that there was finally a sequel.
I read the four chapters already posted. I hope that the fifth will be soon posted, because it is torture where you stop the last chapter. Lol
And I wondered if Andreas had said to Bill that Tom had come to the airport the day of his departure. ^^
Goodbye.
Salut !
Laura.
Author's Response: x) You are so sweet! Your English isn't bad at all; in fact, it is very good. I'm so glad you enjoy my story, and I will try to update just for you~
Date: 03/11/10 09:21 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
I've just started reading today and this story is so cute! Keep on writing, I would love to follow this story XD
Date: 02/24/10 06:41 am Title: Stitched Hearts and Pin Striped Vests
awwwwww
Date: 02/20/10 05:48 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Wow.. that was.. like.. yeah, wow. I cried. A lot. Could have filled a bathtub with my tears.
Fantastic, by the way. I hate that it ended that way, but gotta love it anyway :D
Author's Response: The sequel will make all the sappy readers happy :) It has a great ending, I hope you enjoy that one as well!
Date: 02/20/10 05:33 pm Title: Burn Books and Caramel Apples
I was actually going to write this the first time I read this chapter, but I had to read the next one. So I'm doing it now :D
I actually do live in a hole. No, I LIVED in a hole. I heard the song, and it became the soundtrack of this story :D
God, you are such a good writer! KEEP WRITING :-D
Date: 02/19/10 06:11 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
ahhhhh....the end! if i could, i would cry [but i can't because i have very stubborn tear ducts, who love to supply tears at the worst times and are selfish at the best ones]
that said, i enjoyed this story very much and i'm looking forward to the sequel :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, hon! :)
Date: 02/19/10 04:30 pm Title: Twinkling Stars and Orange Creme Popsicles.
aw, the ending was so sweet :)
Date: 02/19/10 03:19 pm Title: Sticky Notes and MSN Messenging
this was cute:)
Date: 02/19/10 11:25 am Title: Rain Kisses and Barney Sing-Alongs
ohembee nuuuuuuu -__-
and i think Tomi's the cutest
Date: 02/18/10 10:53 pm Title: Burn Books and Caramel Apples
:'( awww....
grr...Alana is really getting on my nerves..
Date: 02/18/10 10:32 pm Title: Irritating Invitations and Gorgeous Strobe Lights
holy..wow..
for the first 95% of the chapter i was all giggly and happy..and then...*boom* SHE arrives.
Date: 02/18/10 08:12 pm Title: Orgasmic Biscuits and Music Boxes
insanity in the next chappie? eep! can't wait :)
Date: 02/18/10 07:43 pm Title: Stitched Hearts and Pin Striped Vests
aw i loved this one :)
the badly sewn heart =
Date: 02/18/10 07:24 pm Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
at the ending: no words, just "d'awwww"
Date: 02/18/10 07:13 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
*sigh* oh, Tomi..
fabulous chapter :)
Date: 02/18/10 07:00 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
ahh. this is awesome :)
the part where Billa kisses his teddy bear is too cute :3
Date: 02/16/10 08:01 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Wow. Seriously, wow. The sequel better come along soon, thats all I can say. You have talent! x
Author's Response: The sequel is out already :) Have fun reading!
Date: 02/04/10 01:29 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
i didnt know it had a sequel so i was like 'what! is that all, just left them sulking O.o'
even though i wouldnt mind THAAAT much 'cuase i like it when is not like the typical ending, all mushy blahblahblah
sooo reading 'these hearts' cant wait to find out about toms marriage life (or the lack of it DX) and bill at juilliard
what happened to the g's relationship and to andreas and jiro
and...ladjsnlsdnglksdfngdlfkg im so excited XDDDD
Author's Response: yay, i'm so glad! i hope you enjoy the second part :)
Date: 02/04/10 12:54 am Title: Garage Sales and Complimentary Headphones
i think ill make a t shirt with an 'i
Date: 02/04/10 12:10 am Title: Damaged Tarts and Shocking Letters
i KNEW it
fuckin' alana, i knew she wouldnt miss any chance to fuck it all DX
but to be honest, i think, this one time, tom was the one that fucked it the most :S