Date: 01/25/09 01:42 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Lol. I was actually laughing out loud and my cousin looked at me like I was a weirdo....Anyways nice chapter.
Author's Response: You should give a weird look back at your cousin. xD Thanks for the review~
Date: 01/20/09 09:25 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
ya, this definitely has a future! this is a great premise, please keep going! =)
Author's Response: I kinda need to update this soon, hah xD
Date: 01/12/09 09:11 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
I love the plot you wrote for this story. I'm excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 01/04/09 07:31 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
wow
i already love this
Tom obsessing over Bill is a nice change, I like this loads and I cant wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'm working on the next update!
Date: 01/04/09 07:29 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
wow
i already love this
Tom obsessing over Bill is a nice change, I like this loads and I cant wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Aww, you're too sweet :)
Date: 01/04/09 01:02 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
WOW, this is fantastic! I really hope that you continue... and soon!!
Author's Response: aww, thanks so much :) I'm working on chapter two already.
Date: 01/01/09 07:53 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
btw, I think you should hurry and update also :)
Author's Response: hah, alright. I love your name btw, that's my favorite song.
Date: 01/01/09 07:52 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
oh my.
very cute :)
Author's Response: Thanks babee!
Date: 01/01/09 10:38 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
My chance love it
Author's Response: i thought it sounded a little 'serial killer stalker', but thanks :)
Date: 01/01/09 07:33 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
well really like the idea...:D:D
now all i want is moreeeeeeeeeeeee
so update soon please :P
Author's Response: haha, i will i will :)
Date: 01/01/09 03:41 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
BWAHAHAHAHAAH. ok, so psycho girl was hilarious....it shames me that i know a couple of people like her....they scare me like a lot xDDD and Tom's reaction was hilarious....i LOVE when he was talking about Bill lol...so cute and and and...i can't wait for the 7date thing. this is an awesome concept ^_^
Author's Response: Ahh, you totally made my day :) Thanks so much~
Date: 01/01/09 02:31 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
aw...come on you HAVE to continue
Author's Response: Haha, I promise I will :) But I wish there were more people interested in this story..
Date: 12/31/08 08:18 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
ooohhhhhh!!!!!!! i looovvveee ittt
Author's Response: thanks! :)
Date: 12/31/08 07:25 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
AHH MOREEE i lovee it
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Author's Response: thank you so much~ :)
Date: 12/31/08 06:59 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Formula 17 LOL XDD love that movie ^___^
ps you need to change genre from twincest to twincest - not related
Author's Response: I like that movie too :)rnokay, thank you so much. rnI'm super new here, I didn't know the difference o.o
Date: 12/31/08 06:19 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Oooohhh =]
There were a few **small** mistakes, but other than that...
-whooo!- I think it sounds good so far ;) You should deff keep going! =]
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)rnI don't know if there are any Beta Readers on this site...rn
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)rnI don't know if there are any Beta Readers on this site...rn
Date: 12/31/08 06:17 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
this is really cute post more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)