Date: 07/27/10 05:59 pm Title: Stitched Hearts and Pin Striped Vests
aww Tom tried to stick up for him even though he was insulting him
Date: 07/27/10 05:39 pm Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
poor Billa Tom just had to be a jerk on the first date
Date: 07/27/10 05:32 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Tom got bitch slapped :) XD , poor Bill
Date: 07/07/10 02:49 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
So I just want you to know that I just spent 6 hours reading this, all to end up with a broken heart! I feel like sobbing. It can't end this way!!!! I know there's a sequel and I probably will read it but now I'm just... depressed. Great work though!
Author's Response: well, at least you enjoyed it :)
Date: 06/18/10 02:14 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
that was so heart wrenching in so many different ways! but was so good can wait to read the sequel!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, dear :D
Date: 06/16/10 10:35 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
is there a sequel?
Author's Response: Yes, darling. It's called These Hearts. Check it out :)
Date: 06/12/10 11:33 pm Title: Damaged Tarts and Shocking Letters
My fave Tokio Hotel song is Forgotten Children because it's relaxing and it makes me appreciate my life that much more. that's why my mom likes it as well.My least fave is Screamin' cause it sounds to much like a dance club song.P.S. Bill doesn't deserve all of this hurt
Date: 06/12/10 10:53 pm Title: Chocolate Truffles and French Maids
I cried in the past 3 chapters
Jiro is pretty close to Chinese(it is japanese)
"You cannot fight ignorance"
Date: 06/12/10 09:44 pm Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
I'm keeping the jacket
Date: 06/12/10 09:33 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Bill IS the Queen Bitch.But when he says like hell you are, i laughed so fucking hard. he sounded black
Date: 06/11/10 12:55 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
OMG I want a bow!!! :D
But, anyway, I love this story so far!! Can't believe what poor Bill went through. You' think even TOM had the sense not to take someone to a strip club on a first date! XD
Author's Response: xD You know, some boys are stupid like that. Oh well, they're both cute~ :)
Date: 06/10/10 10:02 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Wow I seriously love the end just because it wasn't the whole cliche happy ending scene despite Bill and Tom having to be miserable.I was surprised that Tom actually went through with the wedding. It's gonna be tricky anyway I'm on to the sequel !
Author's Response: xD Thank you, hon. A lot of others don't agree that's particularly a GOOD ending, buuuut...I gotta say...I like it. So hah. Plus, happy endings are for sequels, right? :3
Date: 06/06/10 10:48 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
I loved the story till the end. I now officially hate you. that was the worst possible ending ever. You have had tom stop the plane or have him show up in new york, at bills door telling him that he couldn't go through with it. URGGGGGGGGGGGG!!
Author's Response: xD Sequel, dear.
Date: 06/04/10 09:20 am Title: Damaged Tarts and Shocking Letters
Considering you wrote that the story was "Just one of those funny, romantic stories you should read when you want to feel fluffy on the inside." one is lead to expect at least a happy ending which is not what one got. I get that the muse sometimes changes its course which is why it would have been nice knowing things were no longer heading where it was originally implied they were going.
I read about the sequel and I honestly don't know if I'll read it or not. May just skip more angst and read the end once it's finished.
Author's Response: That is mainly what the story is, right? It's romantic, light hearted and funny, in my opinion. The ending only leads to the sequel, and if it disappointed you so much, then I'm sorry it did. I still would think that it's still a spoiler to suddenly say "Oh yeah, by the way, the ending is NOT what you want to happen." It creates more suspense and allows you to anxiously wait for the sequel. Considering the fact that you don't want to suffer through angst once more, then skip to the end. I personally think that it's the drama and problems that makes the ending that much sweeter in These Hearts. Whatever you want to do, I suppose. But thank you for reading, though it disappointed you somewhat.
Date: 06/03/10 11:55 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Would have been nice to have some kind of warning about the story not ending well...
Author's Response: It wouldnt be as interesting if I just straight out TOLD you it was going to be sad. Never fear, though. If you want a good ending, the sequel shall supply it :)
Date: 05/29/10 09:37 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
awww, why must tom end up with bitchy McBitcherson from Slutsville D:
i hope theres a sequel! THERE MUST!
Author's Response: xD There is, it's called These Hearts and I'm actually trying to update it tonight, so you're lucky!
Date: 05/29/10 03:58 pm Title: Garage Sales and Complimentary Headphones
those 2 songs fit the story perfectly!!!
but now its stuck in my head :D
Date: 05/29/10 10:50 am Title: Twinkling Stars and Orange Creme Popsicles.
the ending was so adorable!!!!
Author's Response: I dont think I've ever had the ending described to me as adorable x) thank you!
Date: 05/27/10 05:23 pm Title: Annoying Radios and Security Scams
billl nuuu don't go in there!
Date: 05/27/10 05:10 pm Title: Rain Kisses and Barney Sing-Alongs
sad....upsetting and sad. a bit too sad that makes me want to break down and cry right now and scream in sheer anger. AHJWEBFWAHBG