Date: 01/25/09 07:17 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
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*reads again*
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next! Keep it coming cause I can't wait. This is gonna be an amazing ride, innit?
Author's Response: Indeed it is :) I'm glad you find this story so amusing!
Date: 01/25/09 05:42 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
OMG!! it is updated~~ *__________* yay~~ :DDD LOL!! i love how this chapter ended!! XDD oh Tom.. anything he gets from Bill is lovely to him. XDDD i hope you update soon~~ :] *gives cookies*
Author's Response: AHHCOOKIES!*Spaz* Sorry for the super long wait ._. I am ashamed xD But yeah, I'm sure next time it'll be much faster!
Date: 01/25/09 05:21 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Omg i laughed so much at this..! More soon! :D
Author's Response: Of course! :)
Date: 01/25/09 04:54 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
wow I saw your name and I was like what's this?
first I was this can't be her story, but then I read because I love you as a writer. I thought I would check out the story since this was I first time I saw it.
I love love love it. as I read the chapter's I was reminded of Not Another Teen Movie. I was pleasantly surpised that you write other types of stories. you capture the essence of every sterotypical character in your story not to mention that I was cracking up all the way through each chapter.
tom is the sterotypical
"popular kid" everyone wants him and wants to be him. he's a bigtime playboy. he's like a sterotypical boy in highschool with amplified behavior. love how he kind of resembles tom's personality to a t as well. which is scary considering its kind of making fun of extreme personalities which I guess he is. I love how he's so obsessive over bill. Love the parts that have him dissing the whores and his manwhore ways.
so bill what's up with teddy. I find it cute though, eventhough I know he's smart it makes him crazy. but every genius is crazy right? well back to character analysis I get sidetrack so easy. he I assume is the sterotypical the" perfect "" person ". He's a fantasy of what everyone wants.
Well I like the blonde pun. It's so sterotypical plastic barbie doll. Not a braincell in sight. Love your jokes and everything that they do and say.
I like georg and gustav's character's but not so keen on andreas yet.
Can't wait to see how tom tries to make bill give it up.more more faster than before but I don't know because I love your oneshots too. So just write something just don't forget this story is halarious. Its dramatic cliches are very enduring. Everything reminds me of Not Another Teen movie so it's going to be a nasty and major hilarious. so don't drop it please I love funny stories.
Author's Response: This is my very first story on this site actually, and I just got to updating it xD The horror thing just came up accidentally, I didn't know I'd be good at that. Tom's just a man slut, and Bill's extremely cute. The teddy bear came from the rumor that Tokio Hotel always has a teddy bear up on stage with them for every show they star in :) I'll update also, but I also want to write more oneshots. So much to do! xD
Date: 01/25/09 04:18 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Oh! I love it! I was wondering if you were ever going to update! For a while, I thought that you'd decided to drop this story :O So imagine my delight when I found an update! It was excellent, and I'm looking forward the the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I thought I was gonna drop this too xD But I don't like giving up on stuff, I'm much too stubborn. Update is coming up!
Date: 01/25/09 04:06 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
write soon then as you see everybody is interested even me :P write soon really love it *smack* xP
Author's Response: Abusive! ._. I'll get on it right away master! *Bows and slaves away on computer* Thanks for the review~ :)
Date: 01/25/09 03:08 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
please more i love it!!!! MOREEEEE
Author's Response: I'm glad you LIIIIIIIKE! :)
Date: 01/25/09 02:37 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
love it!!!!! :o:o:o MOREEEEEE PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Update coming your way VERY SOON~ :)
Date: 01/25/09 02:15 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
this is SO cute i like it a lot and i am picky so yeah keep going!
Author's Response: Picky Picky xD I'm glad you like! I'll update soon, I promise.
Date: 01/25/09 12:56 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I love the smack. No, like teuly LOVE the smack. I know those smacks all too well. I've given a couple in my high school years....and a couple more now that I'm in college xDDD And awwww Bill like Andi, but NEIN....bill is tom's fur immer und immer xDDD great job on this chappe ^_^ I can't wait for next chappe ^_^
Author's Response: It's weird, I can actually see him smacking Tom xD It's a really funny sight indeed. I feel bad for Andi though, he's needs hot boy love too :) Ahh, I'll figure something out. Thanks for the review~
Date: 01/25/09 12:04 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Lookin' good! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Cool, stay tuned!
Date: 01/25/09 11:38 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Tom is obsessed and im so much lovin it...
looking forward to next one
Author's Response: Tom's obsession is so amusing :) I'll update soon!
Date: 01/25/09 11:12 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Oh no...This should be quite interesting. I can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response: Wait and see, my friend. You won't be disappointed! :)
Date: 01/25/09 10:53 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Uh oh, I think I know exactly what he's planning. I like it so far!
Author's Response: Haha, perv Tom! :) Thanks~
Date: 01/25/09 07:50 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
This story is so cute!
I love ur writing style!
I hope you're gonna update soon :)
Thank you and Bye Bye!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll update once I actually figure out where they're going for a first date ._. Haha.
Date: 01/25/09 04:46 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
roflmfao love it
Author's Response: Thanks kidd xD
Date: 01/25/09 02:43 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
What high school student has 100,000 dollars?!
Author's Response: A super duper rich dread head in an alternate universe :)
Date: 01/25/09 02:16 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
ohmigod this chapter made me laugh like sooo much i fricken love it! you are amazing and once again make the part so interesting and cool and wow that sucks for the girl Tom left in the middle of their fuck xP but thats what she gets, shes not the perfect Bill! i hope your other readers liked this as much as i did and that your next chappie is as entertaining and hilarious as this one! much luv!
Author's Response: I like you. You actually review for each chappie xD You're simply amazing darling, thanks for the review!
Date: 01/25/09 02:09 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
ooh, Tom's a playboy, i would be in the two thirds hes screwed xD i am amazed at how you describe details, its awesome and really gives readers a clear vision of whats going on! i dont this will sink like the Titanic, it will soar like...whatever flies xD i cant think of any famous flying things, its too late xD
Author's Response: Believe me, I would be in the 2/3 too xD It'll soar like... a hot air balloon? I hope so! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 01/25/09 01:42 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
O.O IM IN LOVE -worships-
Author's Response: Oh My xD My Fanfic is expecially flattered. I'm glad you like :)