Date: 02/01/09 03:31 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
I LOVE THIS!!!
It's so cute how Tom has a huge crush on Bill.
:DDDD
Okay, you SRSLY need to update more soon!
And you are definitely my MOST FAVORITEST AUTHOR EVER.
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Author's Response: Ahh, I wish I can. I actually would've updated earlier, cept my laptop hates me and wants me to FAIL AT LIFE ._. It's awful. But yes, I will update soon! I think. Normally, I update every Saturday at night. Soooo, that's the time span xD Sorry. AHH. I'm your fav? I feel special ;)
Date: 02/01/09 02:23 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
hello Julia! und i do not blame Bill for being tense und all of that! wouldnt you if you were almost molested? especially by the creepy pedofile security guard! *shudder* yeah, oh maybe for one of the dates or something it could be at Toms super rich house or something like that xD und nice rhyme saying Toms a rich bitch xD
Author's Response: Tchh, I'm thinking of bringing Bill back to Tom's house in later chapters xD It's going to be amazing! Personally, I think Tom molesting a willing Bill is really HOTT :)
Date: 02/01/09 01:47 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
i actually thought that this chapter was pretty good, it had humor, serious moments, sexy, and moved the story along! so dont worry about it! and yay i was so happy when i saw that you posted this chapter, i was wondering when you would post again xD now we gotta see if Bill loosens up and if Tom isnt as big of a bastard as hes been, and where the hell did he get that much money? xD but i luved it none the less! oh! and just cause, ill introduce myself, hiya i am Amber :]
Author's Response: Haha, I'll introduce myself also. Hello, I'm Julia :) Bill is probably even more tense now that he's almost molested by a big, hairy security guard. Tom, well, Tom's just a rich bitch. I guess I'll explain his family situations next chappie, since I don't think many people believe me when I say he's LOADED. Thanks for the review~
Date: 02/01/09 01:45 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
Good. My bear doesnt have any bows. I love this story! And wow, Tom fucked up
Author's Response: Yes he did xD Now he's gonna pay! *Hands you bow* Here you go! Have fun!
Date: 02/01/09 01:42 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
that chapter was AWESOME
I was laughing throughout the WHOLE thing. Tom was hilarious, I especially liked the bow part, but i feel so sorry for Bill! he must have been so embarassed >.
Author's Response: I know, I felt bad for Bill. Then I felt bad for Tom. Then I felt bad for both of them. xD It's like a cycle.Hah. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02/01/09 01:23 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
I'm so in love with your tom character. he's a hilariously vulgar manwhore. everything he says or does has me in fits of giggles. he is defintely my favorite character in this story. I love how his mind is one track he truly think with his smaller head.
I can't believe the things that come out of tom's mouth he is so dilusional about him and bill. and I thought he was taking bill on a nice romantic diner but I thought the strip joint was classic. I can so see him thinking that's a perfect place to take him.
the bow was so cute and thoughtful so cudos to gustav.
oh a poor bill probably worst date ever. and having to degrade himself at the stripclub. I still think he probably was the hotest person in the room wonder why all the men wanted him back.
oh and tom had is night in shining amor moments with the rescue on stage and handing bill is coat. but it was his fault that he had to be heroic.
can't wait for next date. two different things can happen.
your story keeps impressing me. I am constantly surpise with how things have gone. eventhough I should know better by your character's personalities how they would act but I still didn't expect what you come up with. I like that you keep me on my toe and you always make me laugh. you never cest to amaze me. more more can't wait to long for more comedy.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Wow, comedy isn't as hard xD I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, this was actually quite hard to write. I didn't know how to create perfect 'crappy' first date.So I was sitting there, chewing on gum, when I was like "STRIP CLUB! Yes!" Also, this was really... lame. I think. Now, Go read my new story called "Circus". It's not popular, but I just posted it so... I don't know. xD I'm having doubts on it, so please review and tell me.
Date: 02/01/09 12:53 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
nice
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 02/01/09 12:42 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
yay~~ an update~~ :DDD *cheers*
ah..Tom..so cute but stupid... XDD going to a strip club as a first date?? not a very good way to impress Bill.. XDD the pink bow gift was super cute~~ :33
i hope their next date will be even better XDD
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I promise, next date will be AMAZING~~
Date: 02/01/09 12:28 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
0.o
... Tom is SO freaking CREEPY!!! XDD I loved it!! But seriously, I just can't get over how freakishly creepy Tom was! It was hilarious!
And poor Bill, almost burned on the stage! Didn't anyone ever teach him that you don't dress in drag until the third date? Geez! What's his problem?! XD
I can't wait for the next chapter. If they're getting into this much trouble on the FIRST dat... then I'm almost afraid to see what'll happen on the second date! And I'm shaking in my boots for the seventh!
But really, this story is so wonderfully funny! And of course it's good, are you serious? It's amazing! I can't wait for the next update! :D
Author's Response: Aww, you're so sweet! Tom IS creepy, but he's makes creepiness extremely cute for some reason xD Poor Bill, I really didn't want to do that to him, but it was amusing anyway. Boo, I suck ._. Haha. The next chappie, Tom will probably kiss Bill's feet. Probably :)
Date: 02/01/09 12:19 am Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
I was laughing the whole time. Puss-y in Bootz? We are gentlemen, I like bars, therefore I thought this would be the perfect place.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Yes M'am! :)
Date: 02/01/09 12:15 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
There are mistakes throughout but it's funny enough to ignore that. I think this is a great little fic!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Oh my, I really need to go fix those. Thanks for telling me, I'll go reread and correct them right now :)
Date: 01/31/09 02:16 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Great Chapter! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't go away though, I'm updating this tonight :)
Date: 01/27/09 11:05 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
ha! i dont know why i love this story, Tom's character is so obnoxious. But I do love it and I hope he becomes a good guy and then he can win Bill's heart. =) keep up the good work!
Author's Response: He IS quite obnoxious isn't he? xD Ick, he's going to learn his lesson, no doubt about it
Date: 01/25/09 10:40 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Ooh, I can't wait to see the drama. Actually I just want to see Andreas and Tom have a big fight over him, but I can be patient. Excited for an update!!!
p.s. Bill's last name changes in both chapters
Author's Response: Are you the only person who caught that? xD I was waiting for someone to say it, good job! I'll go change it right now.
Date: 01/25/09 09:32 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Damn...
*tries to pass the time writing a new fic*
Author's Response: It's UPDATED! :) Go Read Chappie 3!
Date: 01/25/09 09:22 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Welcome! Wheeee! *rubs hands and waits impatiently*
Author's Response: I must say though, I usually update on Saturdays at night. So I'll most likely update next week on Satuday. :) I hope it's not a long wait.
Date: 01/25/09 09:11 pm Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
XD I like this! It's very amusing! and made my bad day a whole lot better =] update soon! please? ^^
Author's Response: Aww, really? I'm glad. *Gives you cupcake* Feel better, dear! I'll hurry, I promise.
Date: 01/25/09 09:06 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Well, seeing as Tom is sooo desperate to get into his pants, I'm sure he's gonna run over lots of scenarios on how to get there faster, not taking into consideration how much Bill despises him, perhaps still thinking that he will break down those barriers just by being all smooth. Which in fact will probably make Bill even more pissy, lol.
Who knows. Maybe he even offers to drive Bill to school every day or something equally desperate, lol. It would be funny if he starts acting all possessive with Bill, making Bill look at him and go, wtf is wrong with this guy? Can't he take a hint?
Author's Response: Oh my, great ideas kidd! I think I'll actually go by those lines, OHH~ Inspiration just hit me. xD Thanks!
Date: 01/25/09 08:08 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
HAHAHAHA, can't wait, can't wait!!
Love Tom, but I LOVE torturing the poor dear.
Author's Response: Ohh, I know :) He's just wonderful. I dunno where they're goin to go though ._. My mind's shooting up blanks.
Date: 01/25/09 07:43 pm Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
All I know is that Bill will make Tom regret betting on him before the first day is over, but in the end hopefully it's all gonna work out in each party's satisfaction. ;-)
But first, Tom has got to stop his whorish ways, lol.
Author's Response: YesYes! Bill's gonna be simply bitchy on the first date, hah xD Good job!