Date: 01/10/11 09:51 pm Title: Forced Truths and Smoking Death Sticks
Awww this was very sweet, and I'm proud of toms friends for stepping in to try to rescue Tom from alana. And his little frustrated rant/love confession was too cute. 'cause it was tho opposite of toms normal calm-cool-collected self. Which makes his confession all the more believable.
Date: 01/10/11 08:53 pm Title: Irritating Invitations and Gorgeous Strobe Lights
Oh no! Alana! And poor bill just tossed his cookies. Actually Tom should be thankful for the interruption because what if bill had like puked into his mouth while they were kissing. eeew!
Date: 01/10/11 08:20 pm Title: Orgasmic Biscuits and Music Boxes
Omg that was very interesting.... I'm so curious as to how Tom and the wonderbitch broke up. Maybe he caught her cheating on him? I mean that would hurt a guy who's used to being promiscuous but has been monogamous for 9 months.
Then again you gotta wonder if maybe he knocked her up and ... Maybe HE wanted to keep it but SHE didn't? Who knows... Onto the next disaster ( I mean DATE)
Date: 01/10/11 07:35 pm Title: Stitched Hearts and Pin Striped Vests
Aww that was solo like Tom to land them in jail, which is possibly worse than the first date. But yet again Tom stands up for bill ( for his virtue in a backhanded manner no less ) and gets the crap beat out of himself for it. But he did get a grateful hug from bill, so all was not lost.
I like how possive and protective of bill Tom is being, now if he can just shut the hell up!!! His mouth ends up undoing every nice, meaningful thing he does.
And that corky heart was sooooo corny and sweet! It's just the opposite of what you'd think a studly guy like him would do so, its even more meaningful.
Date: 01/10/11 03:40 pm Title: Little Pink Bow and Smelly Old Security Guards
*snicker* somehow I have a hard time believing Tom didn't pay that guy to make bill get up there and strip, and yet the possessive way he rescued him warms my heart. And poor bill!!! That HAS to be one of the WORST first dates ever!
But at least he's giving Tom a second chance.
Date: 01/10/11 11:21 am Title: Lovely Motel Bedrooms and Gay Chinese Indie Films
Omg... SERIOUSLY filthy rich kids! And 100G for Bill! Boy Tom really wanted him? And way to go Bill for smacking him! (makes me kinda wonder if Tomi boy will like getting spanked, since he seems to be a glutton for punishment!)
Date: 01/10/11 10:17 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
Mwah hahaha..... Having accidentally bought a hottie at auction once.... This story sooooo got my attention. Too bad I was a virgin and too shy to take advantage of the situation. Tom however has no such problems. Except foe perhaps that ginormous ego.... It will be so much fun watching bill put him in his place!
Date: 01/03/11 09:52 am Title: Orgasmic Biscuits and Music Boxes
This is too much like Hana Yori Dango
Date: 12/29/10 12:33 am Title: Rain Kisses and Barney Sing-Alongs
i want gabe as my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!! i claim him as my best gay friend in the entire world! just kidding, but he's pretty awesome. the last half of the chapter was so sad though. i started crying when bill said he had waited for tom for 3 hours. such a good story, can't stop reading it
Date: 12/17/10 03:03 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Been reading this story for the past 3 days at night. This last chapter made me cry so much. I'm 17, not looking forward to graduation. I totally balled my eyes out reading this chapter. New York is scary when you're on your own, I am in fact sleeping in a hotel right now in New York. It's now 3 in the morning... Oops. No joke. How ironic. ;D You're an amazing writer. I very much look forward to "These Hearts". Thank you for this story, thank you for these chapters that have
changed my life. Sorry for this late review, you've probably been done with this story for a long while. I'm going to go find "These Hearts" and stop blabbering on with this review. I will Defintly review "These Hearts" a lot more than I did with this story. Thank you again for this journey. Now I will stop talking. Goodbye.
Date: 12/08/10 10:33 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Ok, it's 2:30 in the morning and i hav not stopes reading this story since u started. Such an amazing story I am actually crying right now! As soon as I hav written this review I am going to read the sequel!
*hugs*
Date: 12/05/10 06:26 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
Oh woah, I literally cried all the way through that. I managed to compose myself towards the end, but then the last little bit undid all my hard work. I've turned into such a huge, gigantic, mega wuss. :''( That was so amazing though. I'm going to favourite it right now, and read the sequel as soon as I can. I would read it now, but I should probably get a grip and go to sleep, seeing as it's pretty late. Seriously though, that was AWESOME! :DD ...but sad. :(
Author's Response: Aww, darling. That's so sweet of you :) I hope you go sleep, get rest, then read the sequel because I'm SUCH a bitch with updating D:
Date: 12/04/10 08:11 pm Title: Orange Balls and Chocolate Covered Cherries
Tell you what, Viviane needs a good slap. Alana too. They irritate me so much! I may just cry if they ruin things between Tom and Bill again. Which they clearly will! :| :P As for Tom and Bill's hair styles, I'm definitely a fan of Tom's dreadlocks...I kinda miss 'em, although he does look super hot with cornrows. For Bill its got to be the spiky Sonic the Hedgehog look with the bright blonde bits (the look I thiiink he has in this) or the mohawk with the fringe. I love both of those looks loads. :D
Date: 12/04/10 05:44 pm Title: Rain Kisses and Barney Sing-Alongs
Bill is definitely the cutest, but I love him and Tom equally - I could never choose between the pair of them. :D And awwhhh, that song. :'DD I was signing it under my breath and it was insanely cute. I loved the line "you are the music to my rave." Can you believe that I wrote a song to my friend to Hey There Delilah too?! Except mine wasn't as romantic/cute as that...I think I wrote something about him getting a boner...HA! ^.^ Anyway, I absolutely love this story so far and I can't wait to read on! :)
Date: 12/02/10 10:02 am Title: Dirty Underwear and Teddy Bear Kisses
My name's Bella. lol..
Date: 11/25/10 09:41 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
I hate you
Author's Response: That's nice, dear.
Date: 11/13/10 04:01 pm Title: Sticky Notes and MSN Messenging
omg me nd my friend were reading this story at the same time and apparently, im the girl version of andi (only straight) XD which is a good thing cuz i LOVE his charactor :D awesome story!
Date: 11/13/10 11:48 am Title: Burn Books and Caramel Apples
:O POOR ANDREAS! awh bless :( he could own my heart anytime ;] lol joke, im loving the story and cant wait to finish it! *happy clappy jumpy dance* :D :D
Date: 11/12/10 09:46 pm Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
OMFG.....Write soon!!!!! This is sooooo good and im dying to know what's gonna happen nexttttttt!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The sequel's out already :)
Date: 11/01/10 06:36 am Title: Paris Blues and New York Times
WHAT THE FUCK! FUCK YOU! NO FUCKING HAPPY ENDING!! YOU COULD HAVE ATLEAST WARNED ME SO I WOULDN'T READ IT!
Author's Response: Darling, breathe. Sequel will have one. In and out. Relax.
