Date: 01/04/09 09:34 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Ooh, now that one was very, very interesting! I loved it, maybe because it was original... we don't get all the backstory, and yet you manage to create a world that sounds so real... You absolutely rule at AU, dear!
I loved the fact that it was all told from Tom's POV, and the descriptions of Bill... I could totally picture him swearing in french!
Great, great job! =)
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! I find AU easy to write, because I make the rules. XD Oh yeah, Bill swearing in French would be so hot. Thanks for helping me with the french, btw! And thanks for the review. ;)
Date: 01/03/09 08:52 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Very nice descriptions. Bill is intriguing. I like it.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 01/03/09 05:53 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Oh. Oh. I like this. Wow. o_o
My belly aches from punches, bruises littering my skin like ink marks pressed against my hips by dirty fingers-—like I’ve fucked an artist.
Genius! But based on story warnings and the first part of this chapter, I get the feeling that by the time I reach the end of this I'm going to be hurting. Like Bill. Ouch...
...Looking forward to it though. This is excellent.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! :)
Date: 01/02/09 01:27 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Damn girl. That built and built until it felt like we were going off the edge at the end. That was incredibly intense, and I loved every word of it. Some of the things you say, some of the ways you say it, blow me away. So well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!! You know how much that means to me. :)
Date: 01/01/09 01:34 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
O_O You have outdone yourself again!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. ;)
Date: 01/01/09 08:31 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Just wanted to tell you that I don't usually read Tom/Bill. The description sounded interesting and I was bored so I thought I could give it a try. This was just... beyond words. Even if I wanted to, and I didn't, I wouldn't have been able to stop reading. I can't wait for you to continue.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you gave it a try!! I myself don't usually read fics that aren't Bill/Tom, so I know what you mean, and I'm beyond flattered that you ventured into that which is twincest. ;) Thank you so much for the review, it means a lot, and I'll try to update ASAP!! =)
Date: 01/01/09 02:36 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
I don't think there's 'too much' of anything in this. It's just the right amount and it's very, very good.
Author's Response: Thank you!! ;)
Date: 12/31/08 03:11 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
this is wayy too good.
Author's Response: Thanks. ;)
Date: 12/31/08 02:26 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
it's the harsh words and the weirdness that makes it so amazingly good that i can't even find words to describe it
wow, i hope you're aware of how good you are with words. and in case you aren't aware, i hope my words at least helped you the tiniest bit on the way
ill def be waiting for an update, because this is no doubt one of the best things i've ever read.
this new years eve turned into something so much better all of a sudden, thank you!
Author's Response: I know I have a special way of putting things, but thank you so much for all your nice words. :) Your review made a sucky New Years Eve that much better, so I'll update soon, just for you. ;) Thanks for the review!!
Date: 12/31/08 02:23 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
woah....i liked this chapter. like really liked it. it was amazing and brutal and sexy and just perfect, if that makes sense. I can't wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: It does make sense. Thank you!! =)
Date: 12/31/08 12:33 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Oh my God I loved this!
Update fast!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'll try. :)
Date: 12/31/08 11:11 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
loved it , plz continue , very very good ,
xx
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I will. ;)
Date: 12/31/08 10:17 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
This is...wow. You have so many great, wonderful, unique turns of phrases, with this one being my absolute favorite: There’s no filling to him, he’s just an outline full of words that aren’t even about him.
This is edgy and it's sexy and it's creepy and man. I'm a detailphile and a firstperson-ophobe (haha) but you make this work. Please update soon, omg.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm a real fan of your work in a cautious kind of way (too little twincest, too much Billshido, if you know what I mean), so your review made me flail and giddiness. XD I'm definitely a detailphile as well, and I'm not really into first person, but nowadays I seem to write in first person only. Anyway, thank you so much for the review, and I'll update when I can!! <3
Date: 12/31/08 09:51 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
This was perfect because of the harsh words and weirdness! I seriously love how expressive and explicit everything was. It's like you painted this surreal (yet all too real) picture using words and phrases and metaphors. I'm totally in love with this!
Author's Response: You have no idea how much that means to me. Thank you so much!! :)
Date: 12/31/08 09:34 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Woha. You're wrong, you know? All the harsh words and all the horrible things you show... everything here has its own place.
I litterally loved this. And Bill's fucking amazing, with that eyes that don't leave you until you stop reading.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =)