Date: 01/19/09 05:23 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
i had to read it again. this is by far probably my most favorite thing on this site. everything is so vivid and so just like...THERE and it seeps in my brain and STAYS THERE for a long time. maybe it's permanent. i can only hope so!
Author's Response: Aw Jess... you're such a sweet talker. ;) But thank you so much!! It means a lot to me. (:
Author's Response: Aw Jess... you're such a sweet talker. ;) But thank you so much!! It means a lot to me. (:
Date: 01/19/09 01:34 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
I knew from the first few sentences it was going to be good, I didn't expect it to be this amazing.
Every detail was well written, down to the T.
I don't speak French, so I don't know what Bill was sayng.
Simply marvelous, I'm astounded, and breathless.
Author's Response: Aw, wow, thank you! The only thing you need to know about the French is that it's very rude. ;) Again, thank you so much!! <3
Date: 01/17/09 11:38 am Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Hey, I wanted to ask you, would you mind if I translated this to Greek? Full credit to you, of course, I couldn't ever write something this amazing.
It's just really, really challenging for me :) Would you mind? I won't do it if you don't want to, of course.
Author's Response: Of course I don't mind! I'm so flattered you want to. :) Are you going to post it anywhere? Hit me with a pm with the link in that case, thanks!! <3 (Gah, I'm so exicted, Greek of all languages!! XD)
Date: 01/10/09 03:47 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
*speechless*
That was abso-fucking-lutely amazing. I loved it, with a passion, and I'm so, so jealous and wish I could write like this...
This goes straight to my favs, because it was beautiful, so angsty and heart breaking... Congrats, my friend, you're really that good.
Write something else soon!!! Please!!!!
Author's Response: You could write like that that if not for the fact that you, missy, are on an official hiatus until June. But thank you once again, because your reviews always make me all giddy. XD
Date: 01/10/09 07:45 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
Perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks. ;)
Date: 01/09/09 09:45 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
I have to say you're a genius and this was so damn intense that my heart beat faster and faster with every sentence.
I just... ugh, I can't find the words to describe how amazing this was, I adored it. I'm just gonna add you to my favorite authors list, cause I don't wanna lose any of your shit, you know? And by shit I mean your fascinating, weird, full of nasty, distorted and amazing thoughts writing.
You're just pure gold. End of story.
Author's Response: Your reviews are pure gold. :) But thank you so much, it really means a lot to me. =)
Date: 01/08/09 06:47 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
Really great story. Like the last bit, about Tom wanting a break from Bill, so he goes to Berlin :)
Author's Response: Thank you. ;)
Date: 01/05/09 10:34 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
Oh god, this story made me miss London.
Gritty and dark, Tom and Bill were so perfectly mis-matched yet worked so well together. You are such a wonderfully descriptive writer, when Tom got shot, it was so vivid in my mind. Superb.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. =)
Date: 01/05/09 03:54 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
Knew it. ;__;
Man, this was just awesome. Powerful. So, so intense. I won't be forgetting this one anytime soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Date: 01/04/09 04:36 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
This was an amazing fic... I just don't know how to say that it was so well written that it gave me chills... This goes straight to favorites... thank you for writing something so awesome. I love that neither one of them was weak, and the personality you gave Bill was thrilling and something I don't get to read often... You are a really good writer... I'll await patiently for another of your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)
Date: 01/04/09 02:43 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
this is soooo 'Fight club' or Guy Ritchie movies tone- not meant 2 disrespect or compare what u write 2 other stuff, but damn it's bleak&grim! your style, though, I gotta say is unique, truly and unquestionably! almost a sort of aesthetical ugliness, wit surgical precision dissectin' reality 2 its core/gore, notwithstandin' any details, the more unpleasant&genuinely gritty, the betta! I've read all your fictions&they're intriguing, incisive, minutely distressin' cause of their hopelessness, still they do hint 2wards a silver aftershock of a linin', perhaps... I did my BA final paper on Chuck Palahniuk, howeva I can earnestly, confidently proclaim u took thangz futher, beyond! I'm mesmerized! keep it spicy, different, deep&stay funky... fresh!? nah:):) or maybe!
Author's Response: omg I love Chuck Palahniuk and Fight Club is one of my favorites!! Don't worry, no disrespect, I took it as a huge compliment. ;) Thank you so much for the review! :) :) :)
Date: 01/04/09 01:26 pm Title: l’étoile a pleuré rose au coeur de tes oreilles
Wow. I.. I am speechless. I'm a mess of emotions hurtful and hopeful and a little bit happy.
Charachter death usually turns me away from a fic in an instant. What I always do, I read the ending first and if it seems like I might survive the angst and sadness of the death, I'll go on.
And oh dear, I'm so happy I did. Even though this was raw, this was violent, this was all those things that make you feel like there's really not much in life to hold you back from jumping off the bridge, even this was all those things (and please know I mean those in a very praising way, in a very effective way of writing, very powerful), I still loved this.
The boys were so full of venom, but between the lines, so good together. I love fluff and a part of me would've wanted to see a big love scene, but it wouldn't have fitted. They were something more subtle, more complicated. I just absolutely loved how Bill was thinking in the end, that he'll probably need Tom to be completed.
Amazing story, thank you so much for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing it! I can't... write a proper reply because I honestly don't know what to say. Just... thank you so much!! =)
Date: 01/04/09 01:05 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
I really don't want this to be over D:
Start something new soon? I love your fics and I feel slightly down when they get done, I want them to go on and on forever D:
Author's Response: Aww, I'll see what I can do. <3 Thanks for the review!! =)
Date: 01/04/09 12:01 pm Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
I was terrified to read this story, with the title and the character death warning, but it just sounded so damn fucking good.
I'm not sorry I've read it, it was fucking brilliant.
I was crying slightly even before Tom died, since I'm stupid and read the reviews.
But when he did die, I started bawling, and I still am.
I hate that this is over, I'd have loved for Tom to still be alive and for them to live together for years, their relationship together was amazing.
If they had told each other that they loved each other how bad I'm crying now would be nothing compared to how much I would be crying.
I honest to God feel sick, I don't think something I've read before has made me feel like this, I bloody loved it.
I do want to leave a proper review, but I'm just hung up on the poor bastards death.
Before I move on though, is there any chance of a sequel, where Bill dies and joins Tom on the other side, even if it's only a few hundred words, it's better than nothing.
Both Bill and Tom's attitudes were incredible, Londoners and Brits down to the core.
At times, in the first chapter, when there was slang, I was like, we don't use that, but then I thought about it, we do, fuck everyone in England does. It worked so damn well.
It amused me in someways.
Everything that they did was perfect, in my eyes, being so rough and ready, blood sweat, booze and vomit is something that I wouldn't have associated with either of the twins, but now, in my opinion, it's one of the best ways to write them.
Something wrote in first person never really works for me, but with this, there wouldn't have been another way you could write it.
And God you wrote it so well.
Tom's descriptions of Bill made me smile, even though they weren't 'nice' the wildcat thing was brilliant. I smiled whenever I read it.
It was cute, in some odd way.
And Tom's protectiveness of Bill when he was drugged just made me aww.
Fuck, you've done me in, I can't get what I want to say out, there's so much I want to say and so many compliments that I want to give you, but I can't, my head's just one big jumble.
I know that I'm going to be thinking about this, and probably crying over it for fucking days to come.
It was just heartbreaking and beautiful.
I wish I could read it again, but I don't think I'd manage, I'd be in tears from the first time Tom called Bill wildcat.
I'm still crying now.
Author's Response: Oh my god. Girl, you just made my day. Seriously. I always read the reviews first as well, if there's something I don't know if I'll enjoy or not. And no, I'm afraid that I haven't planned on a sequel... But who knows? Never say never. OMG I'm sooo glad I got the Londoners part real. I've only been to London maybe once, but I like to observe people, so I noticed things. Like the slang. Hmm... well, there are many ways of writing the twins, this is just one of my favorite ways. I like comparing the twins to cats. ;) Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it. <3
Date: 01/04/09 11:51 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
I forgot to mention this in the part one review maybe because I didn't notice, but you are this is first story I have found written in first person POV that I could not only tolerate but actually thoroughly enjoy. Not once did it ever become jarring or lead away from the story, you stayed perfectly in that character's head the entire time and made it thrilling and dangerous and sad.
That being said, this is going into my favorites and will be cherished in the same sick way Tom and Bill cherished one another as you wrote it. It will most likely be revisited and reread again and again despite the fact that I just finished this and feel a strangle jumble of drained, destroyed and entertained.
P.S. I really wanted Bill to jump and join Tom in this. Like, a lot.
Author's Response: I'm not fond of first person POV myself, but I needed the challenge. I'm so glad it worked out! Thank you so much, I can't tell you just how much I appreciate it. P.S. I wanted that too, but it would've been OOC for my Bill. It was better this way.
Date: 01/04/09 11:40 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
dammit you nearly got me this time! i almost cried but i managed to push it away. i have no words for what this does to me, this story is fucking amazing, fucking genius and perfect.
Author's Response: Aw, Jess, thank you!! =)
Date: 01/04/09 11:35 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
You know that feeling you get after finishing a really, really, good book? Like, you're sad that it's over but you're still so overwhelmed over how good it was?
well, that's me now. This is so incredibly amazing, what else can I say?
you're going straight up on my list of favorite authors, in case I haven't already put you there, I don't remember if I have yet.
So thank you for posting this and making one more day so much better! I love being amazed by people's writing, because it rarely happens.
Author's Response: You people keep making my day. XD Geez, I can't stop grinning. Thank you so much for the review, and the fav!! <3
Date: 01/04/09 11:25 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
“I’m not, s’just... sometimes things are distorted, you know?” Bah, I don't even know why I like this, it just. Ah.
The music is electric through my veins, burning my tissue and smoldering at the papery skin separating my heart from space. I choke on it, this delicious aroma of beats and melodies and gyrating bodies grinding against me. Just felt so hot and heavy and wonderful and I could almost taste the sex. xD
And the zombie description just made me rofl so hard! Haha, but it was perfect and a very accurate description.
shave my skin off and show Bill just who I really am, a quivering little bitch, just as frightened of guns as the rest of the world, was pure fucking brilliance. It shows that Tom is well aware of what a poser he really is and it's heartbreaking that he still keeps it up.
He looks at me then and the universe is crashing in his eyes. Favorite. Description. Ever.
Just. Bah. My brain is thoroughly melted. This is so bitter I can almost taste it, and the ending. It's one of those endings that tell you everything and nothing of how the character really ends. This was pure perfection. Ahhh. *favorites*
Author's Response: Girl, you always blow me away. I don't even know what to say... your reviews are perfection, and I love them to pieces. You just seem to get it. Thank you so, so much. =)
Date: 01/04/09 11:04 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
Well, this completely broke my heart. *sighs* I really did love this story...
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. But thank you!! :)
Date: 01/04/09 11:04 am Title: l’infini roulé blanc de ta nuque à tes reins
WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. It hurt that Tom died, BUT somehow it fit and it was perfect and I absolutely adored it. As I said before it's brutal, and sharp and jagged, and it's edges are nowhere near perfect, but it makes readers go O.O wow by hitting them square in the gut by going "fuck you. here i am, as brutal as I can be, and you're gonna read me, like me a review bitch!" xD I hope that makes sense, and I thank you for writing something that is officially one of my fav. AU fics ^_^
Author's Response: Girl, I love this review to pieces. XD Yes, that makes perfect sense, and that's what I was trying to accomplish with this fic. Thank you so much for the review, it made me grin like an idiot. <3