Date: 04/20/25 08:37 pm Title: Epilogue
So unsettling, but it's just a good story
Date: 04/03/09 11:55 pm Title: Epilogue
I don't think it's wrong that you like the sheer cruelness of it, i loved the whole plot. If it is wrong, you and I can be wrong together (damn, that sounded creepy)! Oh, and one more question, which twin is the abuser,and which is the abused?
Date: 02/24/09 09:54 am Title: Epilogue
I've read this story three times and I think is about time for me to review!
I really liked this story! I love it when they get abusive or do drugs or... well die. Lol, I'm evil and I know!
Though I didn't get the last thing. Who died? Tom or Bill? Because Tom could've killed Bill just because he was unworthy to live OR Bill could've killed Tom because he finally snapped. So who died?
Lol, great story! And thatnks for the beta again!
Date: 01/12/09 12:36 pm Title: Epilogue
*grins* lovely and dark and mean and cruel. *big sigh* happiness is an abused Kaulitz.
Author's Response: *wicked smile* Thanks!
Date: 01/12/09 12:32 pm Title: Hell
It’s deliciously mean! *shivers* I love when the boys get abused. *grins* have you read ImNu? ImaginaryNumbers. She is a serious Tom abuser. If you enjoy Tom getting hurt look her up, she’s well worth the read. Well done!
Author's Response: Is ImNu the penname? I couldn't find her. Thanks for the review and the advice! I love reading your comments!
Date: 01/08/09 04:40 pm Title: Epilogue
it a good story, but i didn't really like it, mostly because i don't like the idea of the twins being anything near that mean to each other.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/08/09 04:15 am Title: Hell
This was very disturbing and very well written. Your writing is very different from most on the site, I look forward to reading more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I never expected to get such an illustrious visitor as yourself!
Date: 01/05/09 04:35 am Title: Epilogue
wow great angst. never seen so much anger and hate shown from the character like this. felt sorrow for the twin who got to be free from his tormentor in death such a tragedy. love the epiogue knew from the first part of story that there will be a tragic end
Author's Response: Are you sure the victim killed his tormentor?
Date: 01/04/09 09:36 pm Title: Epilogue
wow alittle disturbing but nice it was very sad it like left me with mixed emotions
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/02/09 03:02 am Title: Hell
there NEEEDS to be another chappie!!!! like seriously. or somethin as a prequel so we can see wat made tomi change. d:)
Author's Response: Sorry, there will not be another chapter!
Date: 12/31/08 10:31 am Title: Hell
I love (and kind of hate, haha) how open ended your stories are. They're the kind of stories I could never write because I need closure when I write. I went through and read your reviews and saw that you said it was up to the reader to decide who was abusing who, which to me is just...really intriguing. I had to reread it from both points of view, and it's just...wow, so powerful.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! You are the closest I have gotten to constructive criticism!
Date: 12/31/08 04:55 am Title: Hell
insane I thought in beginning that bill was the abuser because of nails and saying that ur nothing without me finacial wise.
but great detail and crazy thoughts this story brings me chills
Author's Response: I have my own preferences but your reasoning is as good as any! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12/30/08 10:59 pm Title: Hell
who abused who tom abused bill or ws bill abused tom im confused
Author's Response: That's up to the reader: whatever seems more likely to you.