Date: 01/02/09 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
This just captures my attention more as new chapters are added. Now I'm REALLY curious as to what's the story with Tom.
Lovely banner, btw.
Author's Response: Yea, Tom's character sometimes freaks ME out!! LOL Thanks, I love the banner too!! ^_^
Date: 01/02/09 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is getting creepy, but in a good way. Tom is acting very strange, but I'm glad he keeps saving Bill. Is he like Bill's guardian angel or something?
(I really, really like this story =)
Author's Response: Aww thanks!! And yes, Tom is acting weird!! He's being a son of a bitch LOL. You'll find out what Tom is soon, so please keep reading!! :D
Date: 01/01/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it! You've got me. I'm very curious about Tom now. =D
Author's Response: Good...Now keep reading!! Mhwa ha, ha!! rnNo but seriously, it would be nice if you kept reviewing :_:
Date: 01/01/09 02:27 am Title: Chapter 2
I like it -- it's definitely interesting... the only advice I would give would be to make the chapters longer, but that's cause i'm greedy ;)
Author's Response: Yea I know. I keep trying, but I only make them up to 2000 words. rnDon't worry. I'm greedy too! 0.o
Date: 12/31/08 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will!!
Date: 12/31/08 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am very interested in this story! Why is Tom so concerned about Bill?
I am sorry I have no advice, but I like where this is going.
Author's Response: It's alright. I'm just glad you reviewed LOL!! So thank you!!
Date: 12/30/08 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Continue Please =D
Author's Response: OK!! ^_^
Date: 12/30/08 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
DONT DELETE IT!!!
PRETTY PLEASE!!!
I LOVE IT ALREADY!!
you have me hooked!
more please!
Author's Response: I won't delete it!! In fact, I'll upload a new chapter right now LOL
Date: 12/30/08 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
No dont delete!! MORE!! =D SOOO GOOD
Author's Response: OK, I'm not deleteing!!
Date: 12/30/08 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
it has a good plot and I inerested in where your going to take this story! so keep it comin!
Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha!! I will!! XD
Date: 12/30/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please contiune. It's good. I really like it. This is an awesome start.
Author's Response: Alright!! Thank you though. I will continue!!
Date: 12/30/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, don't delete it! It's a good start. I'm looking forward to the rest! =D
Author's Response: OK I won't. But I still hate it!! :@ LOL
Date: 12/30/08 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
So....You should not delete this.
I kinda really like it and the plot looks intresting, like theres something weird about Tom. I hope to see more. this looks like it has a lot of potential
Author's Response: I really hated this chapter that's why...I don't really like it, but some people do.rnHope it's OK so far.. :S
Date: 12/30/08 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the beginning, I'd love it if you write more. I'm a sucker for protective Tom =)
So yeah, loyal reader here, if you decide to continue.
Author's Response: Yea!! I'm just glad someone actually reviewed LOL. rnI know! I love protective Tom too! I promise the next chapter will be somewhat better ^_^