Date: 02/14/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
I started too cry! I love this story! You have to write a sequel! I'll chop you're head off if you don't xD Seriously, this story is so adorable! It's one of my fav.! I swear! Please please please write a sequel! And btw, thank's for writing such a lovely story :')
Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry if I made you cry!! I didn't mean to make it that sad! But a sequel sounds good, I just have to think of an idea first...But please continue to keep watch!!
Date: 02/14/09 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
^^ sweet fic! :) And it was really funny when Tom saved Bill from the jocks jijiji -->Tomi is pretty strong =D
Author's Response: Yea. I'm pretty sure Tom is like that in real life as well ^_^
Date: 01/27/09 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
lol i llloved itt u gotta update
Author's Response: I will. Promise!!
Date: 01/26/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
plz update soon..guyz? do guys read these?
plz update soon..i luvz u and this thx=]
Author's Response: LMAO I don't really know. But in case any are...In which case, that is really awkawrd!! ^_^
Date: 01/26/09 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't know that I can tell if you're going in the right direction - I feel only you can know that. However, I would like you to know, that I really enjoyed it. I like what you did with the chapter. Know that I plan on following this story through, wether you keep going this way or the characters decide the want to take a different path
Author's Response: I'm glad it was OK so far. But I don't really know what I'm gonna do next!! 0-o
Date: 01/26/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will...If you say something DIFFERENT for a change LOL
Date: 01/20/09 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Much better!! Very good progress!! Love this chapter. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: LOL. Thanks. I'm trying, but my vocabulary is very small...And sometimes it's hard to describe things!
Date: 01/18/09 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
wow i lovedit plllz update
Author's Response: Uploading right now!!
Date: 01/17/09 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
plz update soon.thx..i luvz u..........
Author's Response: LOL. I already know you do!!
Date: 01/17/09 09:24 am Title: Chapter 7
Huh, the chap was so nice before the end :( I'm sorry for Bill... is it like in that movie, if angels fall in love with a human then they become human again and live their life until they die but they don't return to heaven..?
Author's Response: Hmm. I don't know. I've never heard that before... That's a good idea though!! But I'm not gonna use it. I have a better idea in mind!! ;)
Date: 01/17/09 08:53 am Title: Chapter 7
stupid Tom for doing that.
poor Bill...
DD:
I LOVE this.
please update more sooooon??
:))
Author's Response: I will!! I just need to think of a good idea for the next chapter first. 's'
Date: 01/16/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Yea!!
Date: 01/16/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
*Gasp* Oh no!
I liked Tom's story, by the way, even if it was rather movie-like
Author's Response: I know. I'm such a fan of movies, I couldn't come up with a better idea. LOL!!
Date: 01/16/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 6
Yeha... what the hell had just happened? XD I figured Tom was an angel :)
Author's Response: LOL. I'm glad your prediction was right, but wait til the next chapter!! o.0
Date: 01/14/09 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
plz update soon..thx=] i luvz u=]
Author's Response: I will!! And I luvz you too!! ._.
Date: 01/14/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well I personally love the story line. U need more detail about everything. Like the sound of waves crashing. Or you know how bill felt when his 'saviour' left him. Or be more descriptive. And try to find other ways people commit suicide. Ur kinds runnin in circles. U wanna have a beginning which is bad, a problem which is worse, then an ending of ur choice. The problem that u r at seems that bill can't die because of tom. If that's what then great job!!!
Author's Response: I know!! I was so pissed because I was trying my best to be more descriptive, but I was too damn lazy!! Next chapter'll be ten times better. And thanks for the advice!! You're the only person who has given me advice so far!! ^_^
Date: 01/14/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
keep it comin!
Author's Response: You already know I will!!
Date: 01/14/09 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
loved it!!!!!! plz update
Author's Response: I will update today so get ready!!
Date: 01/14/09 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwwww i love this story plzzz update soon u r an amazing writer
Author's Response: OMG *Sniff, sniff*. No one has ever called me that before!! Thank you so much!!! XD It means a lot. And for that, I will upload another chapter!! .-.
Date: 01/14/09 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
As terrible as it is, the simplicity of the line "And he died" made me giggle.
But it was a great chapter, especially the end. It was just . . I don't know, but I loved it. More?
Author's Response: Ha, ha, ha!! It is kinda funny I guess...In a sick twisted way. Nah, I'm just kidding!! ^_^ Glad you liked it and yes, more is on the way!