Date: 06/22/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
pfft, don't sell yourself short!!!!!! this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what i wanna know is: will there be a sequel??????? coz there should be!!!!!!!!!! a story this good can't just be left like that!!!!!!! ok, but still, great, great job!!!!!!!
Author's Response: .......Seriously?... Oh my gosh, thank you so much! This comment just made my day! Whoo hoo!rnOh, and about the sequel. There might be one, not quite sure yet. I wanna develop my writing skills about more (I'm still a work in progress) But if there is one, I want it to be perfect, or close to perfect! Thank you for the support!
Date: 04/25/10 02:59 am Title: Chapter 9
meh, it wasn't the happy ending I was hoping for. it was hopeful though
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you for all your reviews and helpful criticism! ^_^
Date: 04/25/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 8
if simone's so woried about bill why didn't she stick him in therapy or something?
Author's Response: I don't know... To me, that just seems a bit.. sudden. Plus, it wouldn't really help solve anything in the long run.
Date: 04/25/10 02:51 am Title: Chapter 7
how can he be in love w/ tom there's really not much of a relationship there? And simone is a really annoying mother, like oblivious and just awful really.
Author's Response: Uhh... The heart wants what the heart wants? That's all I can come up with.rnAnd sorry about Simone's character.. I usually only focus on the main characters.
Date: 04/25/10 02:44 am Title: Chapter 6
Bill's not dead huh?
Author's Response: Nope!! (don't really know if that's a good thing or a bad thing..)
Date: 04/25/10 02:39 am Title: Chapter 5
these dreams are annoying and there's no basis for Bill and Tom's relationship other than Tom's desire to protect bill.
Author's Response: Ohh... Once again, I will try to improve! I will prove myself one day!
Date: 04/25/10 02:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Tom's people skills suck. And those jocks are terribly under developed characters.
Author's Response: I know, I don't really want to develop the jocks character traits, because they're not all that important.. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/25/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Bill's getting a little obsessed and having crazy dreams, you better clear this up. lol
Author's Response: It will get cleared up! Please continue to read!
Date: 04/25/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom's mysterious and Bill's life sucks.
Author's Response: Yup. Just a typical day for them!
Date: 04/25/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
a little rough around the edges but it's got a good idea.
Author's Response: I know, I know.. I'm still a work in progress. But thank you for the criticism. I will improve!! ^_^
Date: 02/07/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
You have to make a sequel! Please please please!!! It's a great story!!! If you are going to write a sequel good luck with it and I can't wait to read it!!!!
Author's Response: Uhh... Yeah, I've tried writing a sequel (isn't really turning out so well...) But, who knows? I might one day! But I must warn you, I procrastinate a LOT.
Date: 02/07/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
It's beautiful!!! I love the story!!! The ending is kind of sad but the story is awesome!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! You're a very dedicated reviewer and reader, so I thank you for that!
Date: 02/07/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!!
Author's Response: Ahehehe!! Thank you so much!
Date: 02/07/10 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't like it...I L-O-V-E IT!!!!
Author's Response: Alright!! ^_^
Date: 02/07/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don't you dare delete it!!! It's awesome!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I won't delete!
Date: 06/15/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Please please please make a sequel. I love this story. You should make the sequel and have Tom come back after he has earned his wings.. Please?
Author's Response: I will probably make a sequel...Just wanna come up with some good ideas first is all!! ^_^
Date: 02/15/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
wait wat/???????? this better not be the end=[
Author's Response: It won't!! I'm probably gonna make a sequel, but not right now!
Date: 02/15/09 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
youre story is so good. i love it. plz make a sequel to it. :)
Author's Response: I'll try. But for now, I'm gonna concentrate on writing a different story, so please be paitent!
Date: 02/14/09 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
This was a great read. Not just this chapter, but the story as a whole. I would love a sequel. . .
Author's Response: OK, I know for sure now that there's going to be a sequel!! Thanks for your opinion!
Date: 02/14/09 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aaaw, such a sweet ending :3
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)