Date: 04/24/23 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 12/20/13 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awh I love this story! ^_^ its such a perfect AU ^_^
Date: 07/17/13 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful story! Seems like a very realistic build-up of the relationships that would make sense with these boys. I love how Tom said "You are the only Bill I have". This is what defines these Tom and Bill: they are destined to be together.
I love your writing style. All emotions of all characters come strongly through.
Brilliant story!
Date: 07/17/13 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
my heart aches for Tom here. Poor boys...
Date: 07/07/12 12:57 am Title: Chapter 8
Very well done, Terror-san. This was really good. Watching Bill come to terms with Tom in the first few chapters, and watching Tom come to terms with Bill in the rest of it... It was brilliant. It was obvious they were in love with each other, and that Bill had accepted it (at least, by the time he told Tom he was gay, he'd accepted it), and that Tom knew it, but couldn't accept it because he was afraid. It was just so... so PERFECT!! Amazing job, Terror-san. Truly wonderful ^-^
Date: 06/22/12 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
This was the epitome of perfection.
Bravo darling!
Date: 10/18/10 05:54 am Title: Chapter 8
This story is beautiful. I've read it so many times now. It's one of the firsts I ever read here on THF and it never fails to amaze me. It sets a very high standard of writing and for what twincest should feel like. It's really powerful because you wrote it so it feels so incredibly real... everything about it.. the way they evolved, the time it look them, the way they kiss, and stumble with other relationships, the G's role, the way Simone really feels like their mother, their lives on tourbuses, etc... most of it has been done so many times, but this story is exceptional. They feel like brothers, real people, real emotions. The hurt and drama and hesitation and wrongness is all there, but so is the amazing connection that propels them into such a relationship. Very few stories have made this feel so real. Sorry, I can't stop saying it. You've written this so well, and I love how you tie everything together. There are so many beautiful scenes and phrases and motifs.
I have to stop blabbering now.... just, really really amazingly well done. :)
PS- its really fucking sexy too. Damn.
Date: 09/08/10 09:24 am Title: Chapter 8
I was very impressed with this story. I enjoyed the memories... the way things fluidly moved from past to present. Even the angsty bits were good. Thanks for this little gem.
Date: 08/28/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's always weird when Tom is crying.
Date: 04/01/10 11:44 am Title: Chapter 8
something terrible has happened to the site!!!!!! it says that it is now the Justin Bieber website...oh wait. i just remembered it's april fools day. Wow, i feel dumb, Sorry.
p.s. i like your stories.
Date: 03/13/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 8
I´ve rally enjoyed reading this story. Love all the angst..looking forward to reading more of your fan fic. Thank you!!
Date: 01/15/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is so hot and so beautiful :) I've fallen in love with your writing, it's incredible.
Date: 01/15/10 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ohmygosh, the end had my heart racing. It's absolutely amazing!
Date: 01/14/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh god, it's so close, it's always so close. Amazing :)
Date: 01/14/10 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh please be ok...
Date: 01/14/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow, beautiful but ever so sad.
Date: 01/14/10 08:03 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow, this is pretty intense. I love it :)
Date: 01/14/10 07:41 am Title: Chapter 2
This is so incredible. I really and truly love how it's written.
