Date: 03/30/10 01:29 pm Title: How?
ah i cant wait till the next chapter!!
keep writing~
Date: 01/21/10 04:28 pm Title: Dirty, Yellow, Bus
im reading
Date: 10/29/09 11:03 am Title: Eyes of a Monster
Dude..i took it a one shot,i even have it printed.And read it before going or sleep.And then i read when you last updated...and shit-i hate when writers do that!Please update,if you need more reviews,just tell me and i'll post hudnreds of them just to make you continue!!
By the way why did you posted one chapter twice?
And um...love the way Bill rocked in Tom's lap.Pity the scene isnt longer.
The story is amazing,please,update sooner!
Date: 09/25/09 09:18 pm Title: How?
UPDATE!!! I'm your fiftieth reviewer for Christ's sake! UPDATE! *pokes with a stick* I will not stop jabbing you until you write some nice Bushidotwincest! Don't give up on this fic now you're doing such a good job with it! *poke poke*
Date: 07/15/09 05:45 pm Title: How?
AH dude you never told me you updated! Shame on you! You know how much I was looking forward to this chapter lol. Hopefully you'll update this one the most.
Date: 05/21/09 05:37 pm Title: How?
Ö It's great! *gives you a hugg* Just thought you'd like it :P I hope you continue soon!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 05/21/09 01:54 pm Title: How?
aaw, i liked this chapter =) for some reason i fancy captive stories.. too pity not many write them over here. just few... :/
Please continue with your story! it would make one more to the list of my favourites <3 ^^)
and try to feel better, depression can take your life, but it can be over powered, i am a living proof of that =) all my love to you to get better <3
Date: 04/30/09 07:34 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
haha T um this chapter is the same as last. But dang kid you can't just leave me hangin' there, you got anymore?
Date: 04/09/09 05:02 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
AHHHH!!!! I need more!!!!! I love it!!! But its sooo sad!!!! You cant leave me hangin!!!!!!!
Date: 03/12/09 02:26 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
oops same chapter as chapter 7
Date: 03/10/09 04:26 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
you totally have to keep going with this...pleases...
Date: 03/09/09 01:32 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
I'm here, i just discovered your story ^^ It's beautifull!
ps. 7 and 8 are the same?
xx
Date: 03/01/09 08:44 am Title: I'm So Sorry
Niiiice...Ö...Did you know that this chapter and the last chapter are the same x3 I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 02/28/09 09:09 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
Oh, don't stop! I read every update!
Date: 02/27/09 10:01 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
You just reposted the same chapter. Lame.
Date: 02/27/09 03:53 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
I am most def. Here.
Date: 02/27/09 12:12 pm Title: I'm So Sorry
i definitely just read this chapter lmao, it's the same as 7
Date: 02/22/09 10:24 pm Title: Get It On
he'd caught my glance but was too tortoise in my movements. – clever line
"Ah ha. Ready to join us, my dear? Come." – creepy!
I did exactly as I was told, jumping to my feet and taking the room in slow strides. The pain I felt in the melted flesh of my arm, red and oozing, as well as the permanent markings I would never be free of where the ciggarette had seared my skin, served as an excellent reminder of what would happen had I made the choice to refuse him again - or at least a mild approximation; I'd a feeling my punishments would only worsen. – *smiles an evil smile*
"On your knees." – blow job? *flutter claps*
"I want you to touch him. Do it as you were lovers. Give him pleasure; touch him everywhere." - *giggles* O.O awesome *she says with awe in her voice*
The intent was for show but in secret The dread-head relished the feeling. It had been a while since any contact he'd encountered hadn't resulted with pain or waterfall of blood leaving him faint. – awh sweet and desperate! Love it!
the strong will to discourage the blush from his cheeks due to the embarassment he felt, Bill flung his arms around Tom's neck and began to rock. - *grins and claps*
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No I’m still reading it!!!!! I’m still here. It’s good, I like it. Trust me if it wasn’t you hear about it and then you wouldn’t hear from me again. My strongest criticism is a polite note telling you where, how and why it sucks and then silence! Torture, pain, BDSM, and bondage are difficult for most readers. You only get the die hard fans for that… or the twisted ones *shifty eyes* I think I fit into both categories *grins* Don’t stop. Please keep writing it because I want to keep reading it. It’s delicious!
Date: 02/21/09 01:48 pm Title: Get It On
awe.
God, Bushido is a BASTARD.
*huggles to you*
Date: 02/21/09 01:11 am Title: Get It On
I'm still reading! It's good, but I just don't really know what to review about... I guess the plot's going a little slowly now, the last couple of chapters showing Bill's first experiences with his kidnapping and Bushido being totally sadistic, but it hasn't moved beyond that yet. You can't rush it tho, so unless you increase your chapter size, I'm just gonna have to be patient and wait for what comes next ^^