AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!NO WAY! OMG THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU TIMES......INFINITY!!!!! maybe that was a little over dramatic but who gives a shit!!!
ok so before i say anything, well, i wanna say that i'm not kidding, but less than 20 minutes ago i got out of bed and me, being the freak that i am, went on THFic first thing. i havent even ate breakfast yet. but moving on. so i did my normal thing checks for authors responses and went over favrites and all that shit. and then i saw that you had another chapter for this one. so i was like, alright it's about time she gets her tom obssessed ass of the couch (jk, i wasnt that verbal) and then i read the new chapter.
and i swear to god that was when i finally woke up. when i saw you dedicated this chapter to me i felt sooooo soooo happy i, just...i was, like, i was just soooooo happy.
no lie, i'm still smiling right now. teehee thank you!!!
aanyywaaayyyy...
on to what i'm suppossed to do (write a review) ima say this is the best, and dont forget longest chapter you've written. and if it isnt the longest and i just have bad memory, then i'm sorry. but i doesnt change the fact that this chappie made me LMFAO!!!XDXD honestly, i felt like i was gonna pee in my pants when bill was all like "tom." "tom!" "TOM!" and tom was all like makin' out w/ his couch pillow and stuff. i felt so sorry for tomi boy that i actually started to blush myself. you may think thats a little wierd, but thats what i did.
i just wanna say thank you for starting my morning in such a pleasent way. danke!!!
oh!ich vergessene, mein gott, um... ok you might wanna duck and cover but uh....YOU WERE IN THE HOSPITAL?????!!!! A GOD DAMN HEALTH FACILITY CRAP HOUSE, ARE YOU OK NOW???? dude you better not be lying or someting cause i'm taking this seriously. fuck, i hope youre better now. hospitals scare the living daylights outta me. oh! shit i keep forgetting things, but last time, ok...last time you like gave a responsee for uh prostitution is revolutin you like said your name was tara. i like it:) and i'm sorry if that sounded obssessive and stalkerish, but i just wanted to say so. it's very pretty!!!welllll... cant wait to read your response!!!

Author's Response: WOOOOOOOOOOOTTTT!!! I HOPE YOU MEAN FOR THE UPDATE!! THAN... YOUR WELCOME!! :DrnOMG! thats what I ALWAYS do! I love checking for updates :D ( i get yelled at a lot for doing this lmao!) rn:D! Yeah I know, I agree, it was REALLY about time to get my tom obsessed ass off the bed! I've been so lazy! :Drnwhy, your welcome my friend! Of course! because you last review (on my other story) made me want to update so I can read your NEW review! so I'm like, I should thank her for getting my lazy butt off and start writing again :DrnrnYeah it IS the longest chapter I have ever written! I hope I will keep them long.. like 2000 words each from now on. :DrnAHAHAHHAHAHA! this actually came from a true story! It happened to my friend.... He was over at his friends house.. and exactly what happened with bill and tom :D Nah! I dont think thats weird! I do that too! :D I blushed my self when I was writing this :Prnanwyays! *DUCKS AND HIDES FOR COVER* YES I WAS!!!!! AHHHHH! LMAO! no seriously I was! Because I lost A LOT of body fluid because I was throwing it all up! and it was just so horrible! So My parents took me to the emergancy room because, I was weak and pale and was about to pass out... and they like made take IV... so I had this needle in my VEIN! and they were like inserting fluid through it... and than changed to three other types of medication.. and it was just so HORRIBLE!!! hospitals scare me too! especially needles :| I really felt like a druggie because of all the drugs and medication they were shooting up my veins! :D rnYeah I did say that! That is such a small detail, I'm surprised you actually caught on :D ( I actually have an another account called ttara .. which has two stories :D) but yay! thank you! I actually never got that before! My name is so... so... plain.. so its like... bleh! but THANK YOU!!! for the review, for making my day, and for being awesome!!! p.s YOU NEED TO TELL ME YOUR NAME! *pouts* :D

Loved it :) *laughs at Tom* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, you had a very hot dream about Billy boy *hipes tears away* muahahaha xD I hope you continue soon !!!
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: :D! LMAO!! Yeah. That was pretty hot :P... but so so embarrassing! This is actually based on a true story... It happened to my friend... He was at this guys house for a project.. and when he went to the bathroom and came back... That what happened :| :D and I had to write it :P thank you! I will! as soon as I finish my project!rn<3

Haha Tom's such a loser. I love it. I love this story and I agree that it should be featured. And you poor thing, being sick AND food poisoning? I actually had that today. Not enough for the hospital, but that was next. Anyways, keep writing!

Author's Response: ahahahah! lol thank you!! :D :D yeah I know!! its horrible! not fun! *shudderes at the memories* yeah I had to go to the hospitital because I lost like 4 pounds of body fluids :| but yeah sucks! ahah I will! :D

awwwww!!!! y it have to wait?!

Author's Response: :D!!rnmuhahaha <3

oooohhh that's soo sweet how tom carried bill "bridal style".
update soon(:

Author's Response: yeaahhh :D rni will! rn<3

guess who it is....?
me!
its good to write a review for you a agin. but first things first.

this chapter was simply...OMG so great. i dunno what to say about it. "i'm uber excited for the next chappie!". maybe that'll sum it up.

secondly, your co writting proposal.
this is kind of a bad news good news situation. but before i say anything, well, if you feel at some point like i'm putting you down or anything. I'M NOT!!! if you ever feel like you wanna blame someone or otherwise kill them, do it to ma parents. i dont care.

good news first? guess so.
HOLY TWISTED METAL BATMAN ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!! like seriously are you serious? like WTFOMGMOTHERFRAPSICKLES. i am absolutly beyond happy right now and even more so willing to co write even anything you want w/ you. even if it mean tom/OFC (now would be a time to tell you billa is my favorite).
when i first read your suggestion to co writting, i would assume it`s "Room service", i litterally forgot how to breath. jebus, tryin' to kill me?
but all in all, i'm a happy little 3 year old w/ ringlets in a land of sweets.

yet, we still have to cover the bad news. and remember...DONT NOT FEEL LIKE I'M PUTTING YOU DOWN OR LYING TO YOU IN ANYWAY.
everything i'm saying is the truth and nothing else. please dont hate me.

my parants( like i said you can gladly hate) are simply over protective.
wanna know how over protective...
i dont even have MSN. ontop of that everyone in my family has to share one email account and if they were to see what you could be sending me(i.e.- twincest stuff which they have no idea i like),i bet you 1000 bucks, that i would never see a computer agin in my life by my parents doing.
it's to my luck they havent found out i have this THFic account (thank you oh blessed lord!!!).
i can only hope now that if my finals please my parents, i can ask for my own computer of have MSN and so on.

i hope to dear god you dont feel too terrible about this and like i said, BLAME MY MOM AND DAD!!! poin the finger at THEM. pleasae not me. i`ll feel terrible.

and remeber, i`m not saying NO to you, i`m saying YES. i just dont think now is one of the best times to do a story.
the furture is a big fat in your face yes non the less. and i`m sorry if i`m making a big dael about this. but being offered to co write a story is really meaningfull to me.

i love you kettlecut, i really do and dont you be forgeting it! your my girl!XDXD

Author's Response: it good to read your reviews! they always make me happy!rnrnahahaha that sums it enough to motivate me :D I hope to get it done by tonight <3rnrnaahhahahahaha! of course your not letting me down! rnrnACTUALY L-O-L-ING!! thats amazing to hear! im glad you are happy about it! ( dont worry tom/bill are my fav too =* )rnnever! lmao I'm happy that you are! I didn't know it would be such an impact on your happiness lmao.. if that made sense! :Drnrnlike I said!! of course you are not letting me down! We could wait. Because I wanted to do it after I finish this (which I am MORE than glad, if you have an idea for the next chapter, just post it in your review? I will not mind!) but yes lets hope they do indeed, please your parents! And please, do not feel terrible, it can wait. I just wanted you to know that I WANTED to co-write with you for this story, so We have all the tim to do so :Drnrnokay as long as its a yes! I am fine with it! because yes, the future is when i was planning to write the story as i explained above! :Drn<3rnrnILD2!! <3rnrnrn

I really like this, I can't wait to read more ^_^
I feel sorry for Tom u.u
But it's AWESOME!

Author's Response: :D!rnthank you!rnwell next chapter is on its way!! rn:)rn<3

i can think of a couple things they could do...*eyebrow waggle*

Author's Response: ohhh.. umm got it *cough* LOL!!rnthat has to wait! :)

*tugs ure sleve* is he gonna die?

Author's Response: god no! not so early in the story, that would be horrible of me :)rn<3

are you kidding? why would this story fail. someone just tried to feature it.
dont worry.
anyway, this chappie was great!
i cant wait to see who will be in the park with tom (though i have a slight idea as to who it may be. lol.)
BtW, i'm still slightly giggling 'bout the fact that we are both in grade 10. i know thats kinda gettin' old but still...
keep it comin'
i'm lovin it!!XDXD

Author's Response: yay my favorite reviewer!!! (YOU) :Drnyeah! i was soo happy when i herd about it!rnSo i have some news! (dont you love it that we are having a convo here? :P ) I have an idea for a story, and I was wondering if you wanted to co-write it with me later? if so ill email you the summary and we can work something out :)rnaahahhahaha *cough* you dont know anything...*looks away nervously* >.> lolrnahahhahah me too! its amazing to find someone MY age. it feel gooooooood!rnof course! <3