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Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/11 09:28 am Title: CHAPTER SEVENTEEN: Scream 'till you know what you feel is real

Ok I have just rad this whole thing all today. I was confused, on the edge of my seat, angry at Riley, well angry at everyone. Scared Outta my wits and felt pain. This story is so enjoyable! I am enjoying it and cannot wait to see what more you have in store. Some bits made me cringe in thought like Riley leaving her son and drowning in her misery than for the sake of him, I found that irresponsible and my respect for her fell down. But I guess through bill she was able to heal, maybe in ur words she was suppose to be portrayed as someone torn and not perfect. She is just human. Jackson sounds like a gem! I feel sorry for that little tyke. But I shall be waiting for more :)

Author's Response: This comment made my day :) I'm glad you enjoy my little story, and you're right, I have to make characters imperfect, it makes them seem more realistic.

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 10:25 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Ich liebe Dich

Aww congrats :)

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/13/11 09:03 am Title: CHAPTER SIXTEEN: A Father's Prayer

wow long time lol

Author's Response: I know, I feel bad, I moved into my own apartment, and we have internet now, so I decided, you know what I haven't done in a long time? I promise it will never happen again. :)

Reviewer: Emokjeks Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 03:11 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN: This Love of Mine

Moore !!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: destined2bebossy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/10 12:31 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: Ich liebe Dich

cool

Reviewer: Mennyei Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 12:14 am Title: CHAPTER ONE: Ich liebe Dich

THIS IS AMAZING.
The whole story's made me laugh, cry, and everything inbetween.
Please, Riley/Bill can't be dead. D':

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/09 02:46 pm Title: CHAPTER FIFTEEN: This Love of Mine

noooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! omg noooooooo

Author's Response: It's not over yet, I promise ;)

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/09 12:23 am Title: CHAPTER FOURTEEN: Hope it Gives You Hell…*Three Years Later*

longer! draw it out! more! never ending! does this answer you quesion or should i keep going?? oh yeah keep going! haha

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Silence is a Virtue

AWW this is a beautiful chapter

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Silence is a Virtue

Awww this chapter was so sweet!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/09 04:08 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Silence is a Virtue

I love this cahpter.
I was a little bit in shock because of the suicidal thing but I hope it's over for real now

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/09 07:11 pm Title: CHAPTER ONE: Ich liebe Dich

Sounds good thanx lol!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/09 05:40 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Everything We Had…

Beautiful story
So complicated when it comes to feelings but beautiful
I LOVE IT

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/09 02:56 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Everything We Had…

omg what a good chapter! i loved it. omg update soon pwease....?

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Everything We Had…

Great chapter. Oh don't take so long to update lol

Author's Response: yeah, sorry about that, but school is killing me, and so is a play that I'm in. I promise It'll get better,lol. Besides the play is over in a few weeks,I'll have tons of time to kill.

Reviewer: tokiohoteloveforlife152 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/09 08:05 am Title: Chapter Eleven: I Hate This Part

AHHH
i freaked out when i didnt see a next chapter button!
pleeassseee add more soon!
like one of the best stories i have ever read!

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: I Hate This Part

omg i fuckin love this story. andi has no chance of get jackson. he abused riley. more importantly he did it infront of the kid. and besides it bill and rileys kid. he has no blood with the kid. so in a real court case he would have 5 to 10 years in prison if charges are pressed for abuses. 3 to 5 year without charges for the abuse and a child taking notice in the action. and if both parents of the child are clean and can take care of the kid. they'll get the kid. i know alot about this kinda stuff. im 17 but all this shit goes on in my family so yeah.

Author's Response: If he hadn't touched her, he would have had a pretty good chance of taking Jackson, because of the joint custody already being in place, i decided that I didn't want to write a court case, so I messed up his chances :D

Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: I Hate This Part

andreas is an ass. poor riley and jackson. i hope shes ok. thanx for the update!! the next one should be very inetresting.

Reviewer: bubbles47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/09 08:05 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: Yesterday’s Feelings

Was that JACKSON who said "NO"?!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: faerygrl69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/09 06:25 pm Title: CHAPTER TEN: Yesterday’s Feelings

Very Exciting girl!!!!!!!! So can not wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Love it!!! =)

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