Date: 01/03/09 12:10 am Title: Chapter 5- We need to talk
loved it!!! update plz
Author's Response: :3 Glad you 'loved' it! There should be another update tonight... I'm hoping.
Date: 01/02/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 5- We need to talk
Ooo I like it!!
:D
Please continue when you can!!
OH! And I love the banner!!
It's rad. :)
-Emily
Author's Response: XD Thanks so much! Glad you like it! I should be posting another chapter sometime tonight.
Date: 01/02/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 5- We need to talk
yeah, it's too short. i really like it, sad though. my only critique is LONGER, because it's really good =^.^=
Author's Response: Haha... thanks. I'm hoping on getting in another chapter tonight. : )
Date: 01/02/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 5- We need to talk
omg...plz update soon.i luvz u plz hurry=]
Author's Response: : D Thanks! There should be another update tonight. ^,,^
Date: 01/01/09 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4- Why?
Awww Bill...Tom has to smarten up. tisk. Cant wait for more! =D
Date: 12/31/08 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 4- Why?
loved it!!!
more SOON!!! (pleeeeeeease! :D)
fern xx
Author's Response: XD I'll get right on that! : ) Glad you 'loved' it!!!! : D
Date: 12/30/08 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 3- Die
AHHHH!!!!
FUCK YOU TOM!!
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO BILL!!
ASSHOLE!!!
Author's Response: XD This literally just happened to me with someone who I was in love with except... it wasn't a sibling, and I didn't end up in the hospital. Then, yippy! Today... I found out the person who left me that I was in love with is like totally in love with another person who I am (again) in love with!! YEY!!! I'm so... not happy right now. XD Sorry... didn't mean to uhhh... take that out on you or anything. I just... uhm... yeah. Sorry. XD thanks for reading!! :D
Date: 12/30/08 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 3- Die
Awwww Bill =( this so sad, i hope hes alright..more?=)
Date: 12/30/08 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3- Die
OMG! O_O What now? Continue as soon as you can!
Author's Response: Now... I have a writer's block! But I'll try and plow through it just for you! X D
Date: 12/30/08 07:19 am Title: Chapter 3- Die
I think it was good, the only thing wrong with it is how you descirbed tom as " the dreadlocked man" and bill as the " black haired man" or whatever. It seemed a bit odd to how you used it. I suggest not using those words to discribe the twins anymore. But overall it's a great story. I really like it so far.
Date: 12/30/08 07:19 am Title: Chapter 3- Die
I think it was good, the only thing wrong with it is how you descirbed tom as " the dreadlocked man" and bill as the " black haired man" or whatever. It seemed a bit odd to how you used it. I suggest not using those words to discribe the twins anymore. But overall it's a great story. I really like it so far.
Date: 12/30/08 07:19 am Title: Chapter 3- Die
I think it was good, the only thing wrong with it is how you descirbed tom as " the dreadlocked man" and bill as the " black haired man" or whatever. It seemed a bit odd to how you used it. I suggest not using those words to discribe the twins anymore. But overall it's a great story. I really like it so far.
Author's Response: Yeah. I was wondering if I was the only one who felt that it was wrong. Well, I'll keep that in mind next time. Thanks so much. I'm glad that you like it.
Date: 12/29/08 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1- I HATE YOU
erm okay
Date: 12/29/08 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1- I HATE YOU
i understand why you're saying, but i suppose different things appeal to different people. i never liked safety pin cutting.
Author's Response: Yeah. Neither did I- which is why I did it. XD It made me feel like I was getting what I deserved, you know what I mean? rn
Date: 12/29/08 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1- I HATE YOU
but a safety pin isn't even a nice hurt, it's just a 'shit this sucks' hurt
Author's Response: Exactlly- he's hurting himself because he thinks he deserves it. not to make him feel better. He wants it to hurt as much as he can make it hurt. He hates himself- he wouldn't want to make himself feel better. He just wants to make it hurt worse. Do you see where I'm going, or not really?rn
Date: 12/29/08 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1- I HATE YOU
Not full on sobbing but, yeah a few tears.
Tell her I said hi back!
Author's Response: Wow... I've never made anyone shed even a tear through my writing. THAT MAKES ME FEEL SO SPECIAL!!! XD Sorry I made you cry though.rnrnOkay. I'll do that.
Date: 12/29/08 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Emotional..very sad.. oh no whats Bill gonna do?! Stupid Tom..
Author's Response: I was hoping it would be. These situations usually are. Yes... Tom is very stupid. Only in this though.
Date: 12/29/08 09:30 am Title: Chapter 2
wow...Bill got mad... O.O
more soon!!
Bitte schreib mehr wenn du willst!
fern xx
Author's Response: Yup. He sure did! XDrnrnI plan on at least two new updates today- I'm not doing anything.
Date: 12/29/08 05:59 am Title: Chapter 1- I HATE YOU
Safety pin? Safety pins can barely draw specs of blood, trust me. It's an unnsuccesful cutting tool, same as a drawing-compass.. the end is too thin and it hurts >_> way more than a knife.
Author's Response: Yup. It does work, actually. I've done it before. : ) If you cut with enough force, you can use anything. That would be the reason why I had him use a safety pin- it hurts more.
Date: 12/29/08 05:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Ah, crap.
-more tears-
Either I'm to much of a softie or you are a great author.
Possibly a combination of both but I'm leaning towards the latter of the two.
And my gosh that was a quick update!
Author's Response: Nah- I don't really think I'm that good. It's just a bit easier for me to write, seeing as how I've been here before, so I kinda know how it would be. Anyways...rnrnMY BEST FRIEND SAYS HI!!!! XDrnrnOh... were you really crying?