Date: 01/10/09 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
this chapter is hilarious omg!!! xP
i was crackin in my room reading it ova nd ova nd ova again
Date: 01/10/09 10:12 am Title: Chapter 3
This is really cute ;) I like how secretly possessive he seems over Bill.
More, soon!
Date: 01/10/09 07:22 am Title: Chapter 3
I like this story a lot but i'm just a little bothered that our little gusti is the antagonist XD
Date: 01/10/09 07:05 am Title: Chapter 3
lol. SOOOOO i loved the little bit of insight we got into Tom's head and I died laughing when i imagined Bill tripping on air and screaming "oh shit" i've done it before so i know it hirts and its kinda embarrassing xDDD
Date: 01/10/09 07:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh I love Emilie Autumn *_*
She's so sweet! Lol, she even kissed my phone when I met her xD
She is truly a sweety, and her voice is really amazing!
Date: 01/10/09 05:14 am Title: Chapter 3
gawsh this was new side ... the part about his mother coming back reminds me of the way I want my grandfather to come back like not as a zombie, but and whatnot... just the part walking through the door with grocerys. T..T
Anyways Great chapter...
TOM SHOULD CONFRONT GUSTAV... >.> or Come on to Bill
Date: 01/05/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
i liek x3
Author's Response: thankies ^^
Date: 12/31/08 12:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww! This is cute! I can't wait for more :D
Author's Response: tank youz! I workinz on itz! ;3
Date: 12/30/08 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't think you're using their names to much at all and I loved this chapter. I'm a bit worried about Gustav though...but its a nice change in the jealous friend gig. It's usually Andreas who's like that .-. So this is nice.
Author's Response: Oh good I was worried about the name use o-ornrnAnd yeah I didnt really want Andreas in the story much if at all...nothing against him, i just don't know enough about him to make him seem real DXrnrnThank you, your review is loved! O3O
Date: 12/30/08 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
You just made my night. Photography is the love of my life and to have Bill as a photographer is kinda sorta really amazing. I'm glad you decided to continue this, too. I'm off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh goody! I'm so happy I could bring a sense of personalness to the story for you :)
Date: 12/30/08 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Its really good you should write further on!I'm really exited what will happen in the future ^^
Author's Response: Aww so sweet, I'm glad you like it ^--^rnthankies.
Date: 12/30/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
i really love this story so far, its different. most of the stories are mpreg or the cliche high school story but yours brings something different to the cliche and i think thats cool. i cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Ahh! you just told me what every fan fic writer wants to hear! Thank you :DrnrnHope you keep reading :3
Date: 12/30/08 07:09 am Title: Chapter 2
awww^^
i thought it was cute =)
actually, i haven't thought much about how much ur using their names, but i guess that's a gd thing:P if i haven't thought about it, it means i haven't gotten annoyed by it, and i do that quite quickly, so no worries ;)
please update soon?
Author's Response: Thanks!!! and good, last thing I wanna do is annoye my readers XDrnrnand I'm workin on it...but for a lack of a better term "I'm just pullin this story outta my ass!" so bear with me XD
Date: 12/30/08 03:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom is so smooth! He had Bill blushing like crazy LOL! And P.S., you're not using their names too much.
Author's Response: lol yeah, i always kinda saw him as a smooth criminal ;)rnrnthanks for the review!!
Date: 12/30/08 02:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! That Impala seems to fit Tom! I think Tom was jealous of Gustav for playing with Bill. Or he just hates Gustav! XDDD
Author's Response: lol as much as i want to say its the later just to be mean, your first guess is correct...sorta.
Date: 12/30/08 12:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Haha loved this chapter.
Author's Response: thankies!!
Date: 12/29/08 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
keep it comin!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/29/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
i LOVE it!!!! poor bill all tomato around tom. and tom acting all smooth. i REALLY enjoy reading this chapter, update rapido
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy that you enjoy my story!rnrnUpdate soon!? But I'm so slothful! However I think I can try, just for you ;)
Date: 12/29/08 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is Cute I cant wait for an update.. and the name useage is okay I guess I really cant tell.
Author's Response: thanks! Much luff! :D
Date: 12/29/08 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I got a tiny bit confused when it came to Bill's thoughts/inward rants. I guess I'm just used to seeing them in italics xD
But I reeeally like this! I think it's cute ;) And no, you aren't using their names too much. I didn't expect Tom to know about Bill, but it's cool =] It was kinda cute, actually :) Keep going!!
Author's Response: Yeah, italics are a good idea. XD