Date: 02/03/09 06:18 pm Title: A Welcomed Stranger
Nyeh, Horrible place to end it, you know! >_< I wanted to read more... Ah, well. It was so suspenseful and just a very good chapter - curse my habit of reading too fast for my own good. That would suck to have to do all that cleaning, cooking, and whatnot. I'd rather be hunting! =D Update soon!!
Author's Response: haha! i should update as soon as i can! but life is so busy at the moment but ill try.... he hernyer i would too! more adventure!!!! =D
Date: 01/25/09 10:54 am Title: Reoccuring Intrusions
Ooh, and so the plot thickens! Great chapter; update soon! =D
Author's Response: Thanks! i hope you keep reading =)
Date: 01/25/09 10:51 am Title: Expected Concequences
I think it's a good beginning. =) It's a pretty good plot. Don't worry if you think it's rushed(it doesn't appear to be), I rush on chapters for my story allll the time... And my friend's story... Ha-ha. =D
Date: 01/01/09 11:32 pm Title: Expected Concequences
Very good =) and not too rushed =P
Date: 12/27/08 11:28 pm Title: Expected Concequences
i liked it!
i really enjoyed your descriptions!
Author's Response: Danke! Viele dank for being my first reviewer X