Date: 03/16/25 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 12/29/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute, I really liked it :) But, I wished it was longer..it would've been 1000x better
Date: 09/24/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
...oh, this was beautiful x]
I stumbled across this from the random story thing, and at first I was iffy about reading it because it was rated G xD I'm the kind of girl who takes guilty pleasure in reading sex scenes and smut and general weirdness like that, but I'm getting a bit more into the innocent stuff like I used to be and this was written well enough to make me really like it again.
I loved the scene in the rain with Bill and Tom. That was so sweet x] You gave me some inspiration for writing again. Not that I'm not writing, but I'm in a bit of a rut with some of my stories and this helped me out a lot :]
So yeah. Wonderful, very sweet story.
Author's Response: Oh, that's the sweetest review I have ever received! Thank you for reading, glad you got inspired! It's like every one of my fics a few sentences come to mind and I continue it ;]
Date: 01/09/09 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, great 'story', and cute finish.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/28/08 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
It developed a little fast in the last couple parts, for me anyway, but I'm probably weird. Other than that it was awesome, very adorable. :]
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the fast pace...
Date: 12/27/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, very sweet. Did I mention that I love Metallica and their new album? Gotta admit that The Unforgiven III surprised me though... Anyway, a little thing I've got to point out: in one sentence Tom uses the word "fuck", and in the other "Gosh darn it". What's up with that? XD Anyway... feel sorry for Bill, though I love that he called Tom "kitten". That was just too adorable. :)
Author's Response: Surprised you in a good or bad way? It's my favorite song in the album along with The Day That Never Comes. And about Tom XD I didn't remember putting in fuck when I wote that XD And I actually got "kitten" from your one-shots I thought that it was adorable too!
Date: 12/27/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
the meetings and the the whole story is beautiful I love how the little snips of their meetings went and how he still loved him for who is was because of his flaws. as I said beautiful. and it was be especially great if continued
Author's Response: thank you for the lovely comment! but I don't think to continue it as the whole story was thought of as a one shot.
Date: 12/27/08 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
um can you please write a sequal or continue this in any way!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'll think about it. Thanks for reading! You made my day! <3