Date: 02/25/09 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
“Merry Christmas Billa. I’ll always be your Santa Claus.”
^^ *melts*
Omg, I totally loved it! It's hot and sweet, and I'm in love with it xD
Author's Response: awwww. i'm glad i could make you melt xD
hahaha. that sounded so wrong
and i'm super happy that you love it and thought it was hot and sweet ^_^
Date: 02/15/09 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
that was smut and fluff at the same time. kudos to you, brilliant as usual!
god i love this!
Author's Response: awwwww, i'm glad that i made you aww this *grins*
and yay for saying that my work is brilliant as usual ^_^ and thank you for loving this. hahahahahaha.
Date: 02/08/09 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
It’s not a candy cane Elf. I said to make it wet. I don’t need you taking all day.”
“Sorry baby brother. Santa’s gone and I’m afraid the only name you’ll be screaming is mine. You’re mine. Absofuckinglutely mine, and I think it’s time I remind you of that.” those two sentences are EPIC XD
Author's Response: hehhehehe
thanks for reviewing and calling those two lines epic xD I love those lines just as much ^_^
Date: 02/02/09 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
"I’m afraid the only name you’ll be screaming is mine. You’re mine. Absofuckinglutely mine, and I think it’s time I remind you of that."
Gott..that was the hottest thing i`ve ever heard in mt life...
Author's Response: heh.
blushes
I'm glad that you liked that line that much *grins*
Date: 01/31/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Oh merciful Lord this was yummy! And wall sex! *dances*
When Tom picked Bill up and slammed him against said wall? I think I fainted. A bit. I ended up on the floor so something must have happened.
You need to write more smut. :DDD
Santa's gone, indeed. *sighs happily*
Author's Response: Omg. *flails* Nightshade has reviewed my story! xD
And yay for dancing for wall sex xD if you haven't noticed, it's my favorite type of sex to write about xD I gotta stop doing it so much
pouts....nein, i'll keep on with the wall sex xD
but anyways, you fainted? omgish xD yep, something happened, but that's the power of being slammed up against said wall xD
and umm, i promise that i'll work on my smut *coughcough* for example, my new story Point Blank will have much much much more. especially wall smut since both guys are soo agressive.
anyways, enough story whoring xD thanks for reviewing and i'm glad that i could make you sigh happily ^_^
Date: 01/21/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
As unbelievably fucking HOT as that was, my favorite part was definately the ending. It was so completely sweet!! I love it, really!
Author's Response: i'm glad that you think that this story was unbelievably fucking HOT, and yea, the ending was my favorite part too *grins* that's the only fluff i can handle xD
Date: 01/21/09 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Loved this!!! It's great :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: awwwww *grins* thanks for loving it and calling it great and all that jazz xD now go out and read/review my other stuff xDDD
Date: 01/18/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
(Sorry I'm using the review box to reply) I know, I wanted SMRM to be pure smut, but it got some fluffiness in the plans for later chapters, and I was like, "Crap. That wasn't supposed to happen."
Author's Response: lol. xDDD it's okay. I reply in review boxes all the time xDD i can't help it. I enjoy talking xDD (if you ever wanna say anything to me, you're welcome to IM me on AIM...my sn is *goes to look for it xD* ah yes, it's parallelheartz i'm always on, cuz I'm a computerwhore xDD) ANYWAYS....Omg, yea, things never go as planned xD at least not in my case, and I'm glad SMRM is gonna have a bit of fluff. fluff rounds stories out, and I'd lvoe to see Bill und Tom all cute and shit (but still smutting it up of course xDD)
Date: 01/18/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Aw... I like the end, it was yay. ^_^
Author's Response: lol. awww, I'm glad that you liked the end. I was TRYING to go for straight PWP with slutty Bill, BUT some fluff found it's way in xDD I LOVED writing Bill as a naughty Elf, I was DYING from laughter while writing it. I guess that's what happens when I try to be sexy xDD
Date: 01/05/09 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
OMG!
I think I just DIED!
That was so fucking hot, I mean seriously!
This year, I want to be the Elf...Tom is more than welcome to play Santa xD
Loved it, and you :)
Author's Response: Bwahahaha. NOOOO don't die. otherwise who will entertain me? xDDrnrnAnd awww thanks for calling it hot xDD and if you wanna be the Elf, you're gonna have to talk to Tom about that xDDDrnrnLoved your review and I love you ^_^
Date: 01/02/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
i totaly killed myself laugthing after Tom putted up the suit and u said that he almost run to the livingroom. The ideia of Tom in a santa's suit runing to the living room it's just amazing.
nice going
and i have to agree with ur most orgasmic thing ever!
totaly! ^-^
Author's Response: lol. i loved that you killed yourself laughing at Tom in a Santa suit, running to the living room xDDDD thanks for liking this and reviewing and for agreeing with my most orgamsic thing ever xDDD
Date: 12/30/08 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
O///O
oh...my...God...
*falls down and passes out*
*still out*
*still out*
*opens eyes slightly, and sits up wiping nose*
t-that had to have been the BEST christmas smut I've read yet. Just the thought of Bill as an elf and Tom as Santa is... EEEEEEP!! >.< *FLAILS* xD
that was just...amazing.
*glomps*
great christmas present. lolz
xD
*goes to read cold and blue*
(I've missed many updates )
*kills computer for not working right*
Author's Response: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. j'adore your reaction to this story ^_^ you are just way to cute xD and I sooo hope that you didn't get too hurt when you passed out and fell down xDDD and AWWWW thank you for calling it the best Christmas smut you've ever read. You absofuckinglutely made my day ^_^ and awww *GLOMPS YOU BACK* lol. you're making me aww a lot in this response lol. and yayyyyyyy for you reading cold and blue. it is VERY VERY VERY recommended lol.
Date: 12/29/08 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
AAAAAAAAAAH *nosebleed* lol i loved ur story ! *heart*
Author's Response: lol. awww. *hands you tissues* gawd, btwn the nosebleeds for this story and the tears for my other story Cold and Blue, i'm running out of tissues *goes to call mom and ask her to pick up a new box* xDD nah, i'm glad that you loved it ^_^ thanks for hearting it ^_^
Date: 12/28/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
bill is a nuaghty elf and
tom is a nuaghty santa
thay are made for each other gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
i wuv this
damn o think i got i boner
so hawt.
Author's Response: lol. bwahahaha. your review definitely made me laugh ^_^ i'm glad that you loved it and woa, a boner...NICE xDDD
Date: 12/28/08 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Yep. You were right. It did make me feel a lot happier and hot as well...I'm so thankful Tom took of his fake beard though. Much sexier with dreads than beard if you ask me. love
Author's Response: awwww, i'm super happy that i could make you feel happier...and well hot xDD ^_^ and yea, Tom taking off his beard was all part of that "I'm in charge" thing he had going on xDDD a take-charge-Tom is always a pick-er-up-er lmfao... ^_^ thanks for reading and reviewing and yay for feeling better ^_^
Date: 12/28/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Steamy!
I like it very much XD
made me 'awww' at the end ;)
Author's Response: lol. AWWW. thanks for reading it and reviewing and calling it steamy and liking it AND awwing xDD ^_^
Date: 12/27/08 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
My god this was hot! Definitely going to the favourites...shit i cant believe how good it was. Ahaha good on Bill for his foward, yet brilliantly planned way to get Tom to fuck him.
Now, im going to go read Cold and Blue, somehow I managed to miss 3 updates. So now it's on the top of my list to read.
I'm sure I'll be leaving good reviews when I'm done.
But shit, great job on this Gorgeous.
Author's Response: Oh gawd...i knew i was missing SOMEONE'S review xDDD...thanks for favoriting this you made my day ^_^ and thanks for all the praise and adoration. I'm so glad you liked the plan. I was grinning ear to ear when I thought of it. grinning and doing that evil laugh that scares everyone in my house xDDD it sounds something like this BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...xD even my co-author for Under Where is scared (scared of what Bill is gonna do to Tom) when I make that laugh when we're rpging/writing xDDrnrni love that evil laugh. it usually means something SEXY-HOT-TWINCEST-FUCKING-OMG-MOAN-MY-NAME-BITCH is gonna happen xDDrnrnanyways, back to the review, yea...GO READ COLD AND BLUE....it's gotten...FAR....well go read that, and Dazed and Confused AND...if you haven't read the first chappie already, go read HOLY FUCKING...yea, I've been writing like crazy lately (even if the chapters end up being so spaced out xDD)rnrnthanks for the reviews and for telling me i did a GJ AND for calling meh gorgeous xDDD
Date: 12/27/08 04:32 am Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
O_O those poor santas...LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: lol. I KNOW...Bill is so naughty for teasing them...and omg, thanks for loving it ^_^ you guys reviewing this makes me feel loved and like I'm actually a good writer xDD
Date: 12/26/08 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
*It wasn’t that Bill still believed in Santa, it was that Bill took some perverse liking to sitting on some fat guy in a red suit’s lap and wiggling around until he got the guy so hard, he had to go and relieve himself in the bathroom before coming back out and letting the next person sit in his lap.
-> best paragraph EVER ! xD Naughty Bill!
*I'm curious about the contents of that bag :)
*Oh no! Fan girl spotted! Run! :P
*“You’re so vulgar. I can’t believe our fans think that I’m the perverted on.”
-> I changed my mind about who's the perverted twin quite some time ago xD :P
* I can so imagine Tom running off and going for a shower and jerking off as fast as he can :P
*Haha, Tom in a Santa-suit :P
I think Bill must be pretty sexy in that Elves-outfit :P
*What a naughty conversation :P
*“Sorry baby brother. Santa’s gone and I’m afraid the only name you’ll be screaming is mine. You’re mine. Absofuckinglutely mine, and I think it’s time I remind you of that.”
-> I love the switch from Santa to the real Tom :)
*That was HOT !!
*Their first kiss .
Tom wrapped his arms around Bill and whispered. “Merry Christmas Billa. I’ll always be your Santa Claus.”
-> Those last 2 lines made my heart melt :)
*adds to favorites*
I really enjoyed reading this!
Great story!
I hope my review made your sucky Christmas better, your story made mine better at least :)
Happy holidays!
Author's Response: woahhhh....I love that your review is so detailed HUGGLE-GLOMP-TWINCEST xDD I have a fetish for details. ANYWAYS, thanks for reviewing so awesomely and for loving SO MANY things about this fic ^_^ you make writing it worthwhile and yes, your review DEFINITELY better ^_^
Date: 12/26/08 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: How to be a Naughty Boy.....On Santa's Lap
Oh my... O_O this fic is just so hot haha
I absolutely love you for writing it and it got me in a way better mood seeing as I had a pretty shitty day xD so thank you ;)
Author's Response: lol. awwww, thanks for calling this fic hot ^_^ I'm glad I could write something that put you in a better mood. ^_^