Date: 11/01/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
first time always hurts, but you got through it very well, if I may say so.
Just a little bit of problems with time coordination, like switching between present and past in consecutive sentences and a few typos that maybe escaped you, but otherwise it's very nice, and typos happen to the best of writers.
Obviously I can't be trusted, since I read anything that's Bill/Gustav, but I thought it was cute. And Gustav's description is just perfect. Those arms get me too. Bill should really learn to be less conspicuous with the eye-fucking though. It makes it hard to deny the relationship.
Hope to see more from you soon. We need more Gusti love on the site!
Date: 01/03/09 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was a great story for your first time!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I really appreciate you reading and reviewing! Vielan Dank!
Date: 01/02/09 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Both of the videos mentioned in this fic make me love this pairing even more. It's becoming my favorite, it definately has the most evidence, especially with that clip of Bill...
Author's Response: Oh i know! There needs to be more billstav on here too. Im hoping to change that. Thanks for the review.
Date: 12/29/08 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much for reading and reviewing!!!!!
Date: 12/29/08 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1
it was super cute. Poor Gusti, he's MY fav so I just wanna hug him lol. keep up the awesome work (^_^)
Author's Response: hes my fav too! i think the guys are kinda mean to him sometimes too :(. thanks for reading and the awesome review!
Date: 12/28/08 02:00 am Title: Chapter 1
For your first fic, it's great! I got the DVD too, and I've watched all but the paintball scene, I love the part your talking about. I noticed too, at one point early in the 1st DVD, Bill "eye-fucks" Gustav again, and Gustav smiles LOL! It is so true. Great story :P
Author's Response: omg thank you soooo much! You made my day! or week even! Im so excited, you dont even know lol. THANK YOU!!!
Date: 12/26/08 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
i remeber i saw a vid of Bill right after the healing process of his surgery i think thats when it was but i couldnt help but notice that his cheeks were looking chunkier than normal and that he somehow reminded of my hamster linel when he has food stored in his cheeks lol, i thought bill looked so adorable that way haha but not as adorable as he does now
Author's Response: Yeah me too! And i thought he was just swollen from the surgery or something but it turns out it was a sausage addiction lol. Thanks for reviewing!