Date: 01/07/09 10:43 pm Title: Four Doors and Four Men
This is good so far. Very sad and bittersweet. I feel so bad for Bill and Tom!
Update soon!
Date: 01/06/09 01:23 am Title: Four Doors and Four Men
I like your quotes at the end of chapters.
poor bill will he ever get a break seems like trouble and sorrow follow him everwhere.
tom seems so helpless in afterlife.
Date: 01/05/09 10:18 pm Title: Four Doors and Four Men
Awee Tomi can't leave Bill ):
"Well, I'm off to hell."
Ahhahaa i cracked up at that (:
more please!
Date: 01/05/09 10:05 pm Title: Disbelief and White Boards
awee poor bill ):
don't leave him tomi!
Date: 01/05/09 08:46 pm Title: Four Doors and Four Men
oh but you beat up little bill. :(
Date: 01/05/09 02:11 am Title: Disbelief and White Boards
No! now that tom and andreas prove to bill that tom's ghost is still around and bill believes and wants tom to stay with him tom is trying to leave. poor bill fate is really against him.
why can't tom be like his gardian angel and spend the rest of their lives together. well only in my happy ending.
love like that they are connected but still can't truly communication fully still have obsticles keeping them apart
Date: 01/04/09 01:15 pm Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod!
hehe this just keeps getting better!!
i almost stopped breathing when Bill tried to kill himself ),:
but now he knows it's tom! yay (:
More please (:
Date: 01/04/09 09:33 am Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
OMFK, go on!!!!!!!
Date: 01/04/09 07:10 am Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
omg i love this you do so well messing with my emotions
Date: 01/03/09 08:08 pm Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
Wow. Tomi is really scaring the shit outta Bill! This is still insanely good, and it's getting better each update! I can't wait for the next one, not at all! =]
Date: 01/03/09 06:51 pm Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
more story please
Date: 01/03/09 05:26 pm Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
hahaha. Bill finally gets it and he freaks out about it!!!!
but that was so cool that Tom actually found a way to let Bill know that he was still alive...
though i am kinda ticked that you tried to kill bill of..
Date: 01/03/09 05:24 pm Title: Unwanted Children and Attempted Suicide
oh gosh ! that would be freaky if that happened! keep it comin!
Date: 01/02/09 09:28 pm Title: The Broken Television and Realizations
ohhh!!!
Scary Tomi!!!
Me likey!
Author's Response: ^^ Thanks!
Date: 01/02/09 08:46 pm Title: The Broken Television and Realizations
Ohmygod, I am so hooked on this!
Go Tom for discoveries! (:
& i love how he kissed Bill, I screamed :D
More please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 01/02/09 07:38 pm Title: The Broken Television and Realizations
keep it comin!
Date: 01/02/09 04:54 pm Title: The Broken Television and Realizations
Woah. Tom's reactions...I love it. I love this, you're an amazing writer and I can't say that enough! I can't wait for the next part, you have no idea! :)
Author's Response: This means a lot to me, thank you!
Date: 01/01/09 10:45 pm Title: The Breakdown and the Ouija Board
Wow. I'm so so so sorry I can't even write a decent review for this right now- I'm speechless. Seriously. This is insanely awesome, and the reactions...amazing.
I really love this, and I'm definitely leaving a hell of a lot of love, even if it doesn't seem like it. I just suck at getting my point across in reviews. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I've never made someone speechless before. =)
Date: 01/01/09 08:36 pm Title: The Breakdown and the Ouija Board
Great chapter! Ahh i need to see Tom's reaction.
More :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/31/08 09:30 pm Title: The Breakdown and the Ouija Board
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Sure thing!