Date: 02/11/09 08:33 pm Title: Epilogue
Well, they're happy. Very sad and more disturbing than I expected, more disturbing than some of what I write.
Date: 02/11/09 08:19 pm Title: Epilogue
damn this was great i love it its going on my favorites
Date: 02/11/09 03:25 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
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ilovethisstorysoooomuch.
Date: 02/09/09 07:22 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
This was so sad, I practically cried through out the whole thing. Very good though.
Date: 02/09/09 06:31 am Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
I'm really fighting so hard not to cry right now, I'm in the middle of class and yeah.. xD Oh my god, this entire story was just so sad, heartbreaking and beautiful. I've been thinking of the same idea for a while, but you wrote it so much better. My hat is off for you! Beautiful, capturing story. A real emotional roller coaster.
I don't know if a sequel is needed, it might ruin the lovely feel of this story, but who knows, it might be good! But I'm all for an epilogue.
Date: 02/08/09 09:40 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
Well, I'm glad that they're finally together. Good job! It was a beautiful and bittersweet story!
Date: 02/08/09 08:46 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
this was so enexpected 5 stars i loved it
Date: 02/08/09 07:30 pm Title: Death is a cruel thing.
This first chapter was so intense already. I like it so far, and I'm curious as to what will happen from here.
Date: 02/08/09 07:29 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
I love it!
Date: 02/08/09 06:37 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
wow it was very beautiful ending. eventhough bill killed himself he did what he felt was right for himself. they found eachother in afterlife which I thought was the rightful place for them to always be together. I was worried that bill would never find tom in the abyss. I like how things were described as bill was wondering the abyss.
I would like to see you make and epilogue.
but I like the idea of maybe an sequel. maybe show how their life is like in the afterlife. what happened to them when they go on.
oh I really love your ending with love knows no boundaries. it's something the twins have said many times that they would do anything for eachother and to be together forever. you sumed in up well into your story about their relationship.
Date: 02/08/09 06:31 pm Title: The Light Is the End of Both of Us
ok if you did anything i would love to read it.
Date: 02/08/09 05:00 pm Title: Death is a cruel thing.
Well, I might add some things about a heart attac;
1. it starts with a pain in your llft arm
2. the pain spreads to you chest
3. it feels like your going to be crushed
4. unconcius
5. dead
it can actually take over 46 minutes, from the heart attac starts to, you'll be aclaimed dead, and the doctors, would, at a person as famuse as Tom Kaulitz, probobly work for over 2-3 hours...
Date: 01/20/09 12:17 am Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
Aw, Bill can finally see Tom! Update soon so we can find out his reaction!
Date: 01/19/09 10:18 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
I want the next?
I really love your story, it's awesome nad I have a smaile across my face at this point. Keep writing ^^
Date: 01/19/09 07:38 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
Ohhh soo sweet! But ... i didn't like soo much the "perfect woman's" part. cuz...Bill would be soo jealous! xp
Date: 01/19/09 05:59 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
ahhhh bill is so adorable awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that is just so adorable omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg plzzzzz update soon plzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzz :)
Date: 01/19/09 03:32 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
OMG TOMI CAN FINALLY BE SEEN.. omg yay.. hugs
Date: 01/19/09 03:15 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
OHMYGOD!!!
YAY!!!!!
i love this so much!
finally, bill gets to see tom!!!!
you have to update soon(:
Date: 01/19/09 03:02 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
oh at least bill can see tom now. hope he could help him.
Date: 01/19/09 02:27 pm Title: Suspicions and Happy Squeals
keep it comin!