Date: 04/27/23 09:48 pm Title: Moving Sucks
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 09/11/18 08:52 am Title: Back For A Second Round
this was a good story!!
Date: 05/06/12 01:21 am Title: This Could Get Interesting
Just one thing you should look at, for grammar =) When a character talks, you do have to make it a new paragraph. But when that character finishes speaking, you don't have to. So, for instance, your last three lines, "Okay, did you have...Florida," should be "Okay, did you have fun?" Cilia asked again.
Bill just smiled at her. "I think I'm really beginning to like Florida."
Anyway, I'm a grammar nazi, so I'll probably comment about something like that every few chapters or so...XD Other than that, well done =)
Date: 05/06/12 01:18 am Title: This Could Get Interesting
Just one thing you should look at, for grammar =) When a character talks, you do have to make it a new paragraph. But when that character finishes speaking, you don't have to. So, for instance, your last three lines, "Okay, did you have...Florida," should be "Okay, did you have fun?" Cilia asked again.
Bill just smiled at her. "I think I'm really beginning to like Florida."
Anyway, I'm a grammar nazi, so I'll probably comment about something like that every few chapters or so...XD Other than that, well done =)
Date: 09/25/11 10:28 am Title: Back For A Second Round
this was a really good story!!
an really sad at the end!
but u should add a sequel!!
Date: 03/25/10 02:33 pm Title: Forever Yours
In the morning!? They wasn't supposed to meet at the mall for lunch. Why it's sudently so late.
Date: 11/14/09 12:25 am Title: Moving Sucks
This was a great story with a good dose of everything =D
Kitten.
Date: 07/15/09 10:35 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
Dude, this story is so hot!!! I absolutly love it!!!
Date: 06/28/09 01:35 am Title: A Bad Start
oh my god my fav kind of car ever eclipse gotta love em'
Date: 04/13/09 02:05 am Title: Cant Stop Thinking About You
Wow, I really really like this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! You should read Forever Sacred as well!!!
Date: 03/28/09 05:11 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
LOL, I loved the last line. (: I liked this story. ^___^ Sometimes I get tired of reading stories where it takes FOREVER for the two people to kiss, and whatnot, but, this one was quick, and got right to the point. xDD I loved it(:
Date: 03/13/09 09:48 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
Absolutley loved it.
Author's Response: Thanx! I hope you read Forever Sacred as well!
Date: 02/09/09 11:52 pm Title: Moving Sucks
:( i live in florida
Author's Response: Aww im so sorry! I dont think it is the fact that it is florida i think its just the fact that Bill doesnt want to move so your good!
Date: 02/04/09 10:49 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
haha i love the ending, and i totally have to agree with eden (even if i dont like him) that would be AMAZINGLY HOTT!!! loved this story by the way, a little rushed but it was still good
Date: 01/27/09 10:33 am Title: Back For A Second Round
Yeah, that was indeed amazingly hot! XD
I totally like the story.
Really, good job. ^^
You rock. :]
Date: 01/13/09 01:37 am Title: Back For A Second Round
not bad at all
Date: 01/09/09 01:30 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
Great story, love it when tom is "not gay" if you now what i mean. Can't wait for the sequal :)
Date: 01/05/09 07:36 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
omg cant wait for the sequel but nice ending loved it
Date: 12/30/08 09:58 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
omg, that was awesome...i luvz u=]
Date: 12/29/08 05:24 pm Title: Back For A Second Round
That WAS amazingly hott... wow... can't wait for more! XD