Date: 02/08/09 09:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Quite an amazing story. I love the way you wove the plot together - not making it obvious why the Emperor was obsessed with his doubles and all that. Also loved the way you avoided a massive sex scene - it made the story way more poignant. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you very very much!!
Date: 02/08/09 03:15 am Title: Chapter 8
A.MA.ZING!
I never noticed this fic before.I'm so glad it was featured and it certainly deserves it.This has to be one of the most original work in here.You did an amazing job,seriously.It was so moving,I feel so sorry for the emperor.Him losing his Bill was...and when he came in the room with the roses,i felt like hugging him.I would be nice,if the emperor get to meet Bill lol,if Tom introduced them.But when i think about it,it would be painful for him maybe?He would feel more alone and miss his Bill ten times worse.Thank you for writing this,i love it!!In my favs right now ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! In like...5 or 6 spots in that comment. :)
Date: 02/07/09 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
And yet again Tom’s cuteness renders me speechless and I’m left calling him cute yet again.
I feel like I’m repeating myself a little too much here, cause you just made my heart break again, with Tom missing his twin and all.
It’s so sweet how Tom’s become accustomed to the Emperor kissing him that he doesn’t even react anymore. I’m wondering when Tom will remember the previous night though ^^
And two Tom’s having a makeup session naked in the bath…I could have sworn you were trying to kill me!
Okay, so I want Tom to go back to Bill, and I wish Bill hadn’t died and I don’t want Tom to leave Tom and I feel so sorry for Bill missing Tom and it’s all confusing me A LOT!
Oh, that last scene was so alike the one with Tom and Tom, amazingly perfect ending!
This story was just so…I don’t even know how to describe it. Everything about it took be by surprise. I think the only constructive criticism I can give you is that it would be nice with a larger description of what the place looked like. But other than that this story was pretty much perfection in my eyes. I’m not saying I like it better than Tom/Bill, but Tom/Tom is definitely not half bad ,p
Much love
Author's Response: Wah ha, I brought you back to cute.
And then sad again.
That was such a confusing sentence about Tom and Tom and Bill and Bill.
I fully agree that I need to remember to put in more environment description into things. I always seem to have trouble with that.
<3 Thanks for all the reviews.
Date: 02/07/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh dear, intertwined dreadlocks, that’s just hilarious xD
~ "There can't be two of me walking around in there. It would be confusing. Most royal types aren't all that bright, you know."~ I don’t know how you do it, but I’m so amazingly glad you do, your humor is amazingly good
~ "O...kay," Tom stammered, giving him a nod .~ Is little Tomi getting hot and bothered? Endearing (see, I’m not using cute!)
“another face in the crowd” lol, he’s wearing a mask xD
~ "Lead the way and I shall...stumble along with you." ~ You’ve got a beautiful eye for good dialog!
Fuck. Tom is amazingly hot straddling himself and making out with Tom like there’s no tomorrow!
Author's Response: Dreads EVERYWHERE!
*beams!*
;)
Another masked face in the crowd?
*beams again!*
Tom/Tom ain't so bad after all, eh? :D
Date: 02/07/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
That was so poignant! Beautifully written. You surely had a muse poised on your shoulder when you wrote this...
Author's Response: Thank you! I think the muse did come back for this one.... :D
Date: 02/07/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, Simone’s a bitch!
God, I feel so sorry for Tom. But why hasn’t he told anyone about the mirror yet?
Oh, creepy with that guy assassinating Jorg and then pretending to be him, nice touch.
OO Bill’s room. Yeah, I’m reviewing as I go and you keep surprising me.
Okay, Bill with long brown hair, no that’s creepy!
You’re breaking my heart, oh god, you’re breaking my heart. That scene in Bill’s bedroom is just so sad, I’ve got freakin tears in my eyes, girl!
TOM IS SO CUTE !!! Jesus, you’ve narrowed my vocabulary down to one word and that is CUTE cute cute cute cute cute…and adorable of course, one mustn’t forget adorable!
Author's Response: She is.
The doubles are always a worry. But now we also know why Tom wasn't hugely surprise. Someone who looks like the Emperor wandering around? Is it Thursday already?
Bill's room....
If Bill wasn't all laden with the dye, his hair would totally be kinda mid-rangey brown. SO hard to visualize, isn't it?
*tissues*
Tom is a sweet, cuddly little bunny, isn't he? <3<3
Date: 02/07/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hihi, Amara likes his music, huh? Not the monster she thought he was, is he ^^
Oh…he misses Bill…you break my heart you know!
God, why is everyone obsessed with his moles? Myself included…
Did you just say Tronheim? That’s a city in Norway… well, when spelled with a d anyway
Did I tell you how much I loved the random kisses and touches from the Emperor? Oh and Tom being a sneaky little bastard and getting himself a new girl was quite clever of him ,p
I’m waiting anxiously for the moment where Tom slips up and mentions Bill to the Emperor, that’ll get him angry I suppose.
Ooooh, is the Emperor finally losing his patience with his little boy toy?
His mobile works? He can call Bill? Then why on earth hasn’t he before?
Author's Response: *heart snapping!*
E just doesn't get why Tom won't give in already. Especially when he REACTS, gets E's hopes all up, and then shuts down again.
His mobile KINDA works. There's no connection to ANYTHING, so no calling out or in, but he can poke at whatever is saved on it.
Date: 02/07/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Bill’s favorite color was red wasn’t it?
The interaction between the characters in this is amazing, you’re so talented. Especially liked Tom’s conversation with the guard in the hallway. But I’m getting a feeling all these guards are mean little men with no souls!
Hm, you said the hallways were marble, and here I was picturing dull stone. Well, this changes things. I’m really missing a thorough environmental description here xD it’s driving me nuts.
The Emperor’s got mood swings that are out of this world oO but so adorable when he’s hugging Tom from behind.
Hihi, I’m having so much fun reading the way the Emperor’s always touching Tom and being affectionate with him, even as Tom’s so reluctant and dismissing. I can’t seem to use the word ‘cute’ quite enough for this story ^^
Oh no *sniffs* Bill’s chair :’(
~ "Well, it's a little creepy to randomly meet yourself," Tom said, slouching heartily. "It's even creepier when they keep trying to molest and kill you." ~
That has got to be…the best line EVER !!! You make me laugh so much, I’m in love with your sense of humor!
I’m laughing my ass off and it’s all your fault! And yes, Tom’s cock does have magic powers ^^ of that I’m sure!
Oh god, he misses his guitars *face palm*
Tom Kaulitz in a hedge maze…somehow I can’t picture it xD well I can, but in my head, the hedge maze is black with white streaks and talking non-stop ,p
Author's Response: You know the answer to that one now. :
Some of the guards ARE mean.
Cute again. :)
Bill's chair. :(
*snicker!* Glad you like that one.
You're mental hedge maze is TERRIFYING.
Date: 02/07/09 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
I’m in love with Tom’s moles! Both of the Toms’s moles actually!
He’s not so nice, that Emperor, is he.
Oh, but he is rather hot being demanding and all.
~ Tom blanched a little. "Can't I get a third choice?" ~ I lol-ed at that, your Tom is cute ,p
Wow, I love the name Amara, very fitting!
I get a serious giggling fit every time she says ‘doppel’ xD
And Tom slicked up in oil…panty burner!
LOL did I mention Tom is cute in this? I can oil ‘him’ for you…priceless!
I think you wrote Cralotta’s character really well, how she’s half mother-henning Tom, half making him embarrassed and bothered ^^
~ And I'm not gay," Tom said, pushing a few pillows between himself and the Emperor. ~ And here I thought he couldn’t get any cuter. A pillow fortress? Awww
I find it strangely sexy to have Tom nuzzling Tom’s neck!
Oh dear, I feel so sorry for him now. Poor little Tomi. He should definitely have let the Emperor have him! And not only because that would be freakishly hot…
Author's Response: God, same. I don't know why, but the moles get me. Especially the neck one.
E is demanding :)
:D I like that you like the name Amara and Carlotta's character.
Pillow fortresses: protecting Tom's virtue for probably longer than we would think. ;)
Date: 02/07/09 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay. So, Mel convinced me to read this and so here I am, despite my reluctance to anything not Bill/Tom and anything containing a dead twin. So you can blame her for having to put up with my reviews ,)
So cute how you replace Simone’s name with Mom instead of writing their mother or something like that ^^
Lol, since Mel already told me it would be a mirror, I could already see the irony with it being for Bill, awesome xD
So the scenery is old time? Like…arab inspired? With the marketplace and all.
Hm, I’m getting the feeling this person Tom looks alike is not a very loved man.
~ various lumps of vegetation ~ lol, brilliant!
OO she drugged him? What the…?
I think Tom took it all very well, not much panicking there ,)
That last part really got me, I’m intrigued now, gonna read on.
love
Author's Response: So...many reviews.... *fires up email to Mel* ;)
The scenery is old time, kind of a jank mix between arabian and olden English. Not ALL sand, but not really grassy and reaking of contaminated Thames, either.
Next!
Date: 02/07/09 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
That was an amazing and interesting story. I'm glad I read it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you read it, too.
Date: 02/07/09 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
I have just read this in one go, and really I have no words ...
This fic blew me away, and I actually thought I was gonna cry when Tom had to go back! It's so beautifully written and the plot itself is just amazing.
Please tell me there's going to be more?? It can't end here, it just can't!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you!
There already is more. 'A Little Visit' is the next part of the series. :)
Date: 02/07/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is just magnificent. One of the best I've read so far.
I'm sorry I didn't review the other chapters, but I got so lost in it and looking forward to read more that I've forgotten. :)
Author's Response: :D
No worries about not reviewing each and every chapter, I'm glad you were sucked in.
Date: 02/07/09 04:39 am Title: Chapter 8
...prying one of the metal ribbons out of his hair... - yup, the perfect souvenier =P
...You have 136 unheard voice messages... - i'd put 483, get it? ^_^
...I'm not risking having you disappear on me again while I'm sleeping... - you bet!!
*owh, finished already??? do u have more or is this the end???
*erm, i ended up putting my silly reviews on every chapter... hope u dont mind...
*before i forget..i loved this fic!! ^__^
Author's Response: A fantabulous souvenir. :D
136 messages is one message almost every hour for 7 days. I think Tom's phone would have exploded if he got 483 all at once. ;)
Bill's not letting Tom out of his sight for a goooood while after this.
There is more! Basai is a series now, so 'A Little Visit' is the next part. :)
I don't mind at all! Comments are fun!
<3
Date: 02/07/09 04:25 am Title: Chapter 7
...Not since Bill died... - i seriously hope that doesn't happen in real life
...and I can never apologize enough for trying to take yours away... - i'm on the edge of tears now
..."It's where you belong," he said sadly... T__T
Author's Response: Same. :(
*tissues*
*more tissues*
Date: 02/07/09 04:07 am Title: Chapter 6
...You aren't here to hurt me. I can see that now.. - finally
...You'll be, by far, the most beautiful, though... - priceless ^__^
...So tomorrow, if you still want me... - can't wait =P
Author's Response: Took him long enough to get it.
Tom IS his mirror image, so he would totally think he was the prettiest. :D
The next day....
Date: 02/07/09 03:54 am Title: Chapter 5
...Would you show...Tom the way there?... - he's sweet ^__^
...skin against skin. Just together... - 0__0
...He was everything to me; my brother, my twin, best friend, confidant, lover, companion... - aha, i thought so ^__^
Author's Response: Isn't he just?
E misses skin. *pets*
Caught on to that one, eh? ;)
Date: 02/07/09 03:34 am Title: Chapter 4
...He couldn't play that song, not here, not with his brother so far away... - aaawwww...*sniff, sniff
...It's the polite thing to do... - and he's the emperor!!
Author's Response: In Die Nacht is all about the twins. No twin? No song. :'(
The Emperor is a polite fellow, all things considered. Well bred chap, that one.
Date: 02/07/09 03:19 am Title: Chapter 3
...You intrigue me, little doppelganger, and I'm not quite ready to consign you to the flames... - that;s a relief... i think..?
...Tom standing shirtless and irked... - haha, sexy combination
...It's even creepier when they keep trying to molest and kill you... - got me thinking if Tom could be any more blunt than that
Author's Response: No death for Tom! *confetti!*
Tom shirtless and ANYTHING is a sexy combo. ;)
Tom probably COULD be a bit more blunt, but he's not really wanting to tread on that thin ice too hard.
Date: 02/07/09 02:54 am Title: Chapter 2
...Here, shy little doppel,you can hide yourself with this... - Tom? shy? this is gonna be interesting
...I find you sweet, and you're different from the others... - *melts hehe
Author's Response: Shy Tomi. <33