Date: 11/18/24 09:44 am Title: Chapter 2
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 04/27/23 10:04 pm Title: The Date
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 09/25/15 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
i like it a lot, you rarely see stories where they just kind of fall into a relationship, where one of them isn't orchestrating the relationships start. The moment of hesitation on Tom;s part gave it a sense of realism that most stories lack, usually they just love each other undying and jump right to sex without a moments thought of how this is will affect them. His confusing and inability to think straight was a nice touch.
Date: 09/26/12 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
this was perfect, perfect! I can honestly say this is one of the best fics I've read and one of my personal top favorites! great great job!
Date: 04/10/12 03:16 am Title: Chapter 2
Very sweet. I loved reading this!! :) I have to say though- there were a LOT of grammar mistakes. Yikes. And they were distracting sometimes. But the story was good. Their emotions came across really great, and the way you built everything up, the way they moved from Tom leaving on his date, to wanting to escape that date, to getting back to Bill, the first kiss, and their sexual progression... all great. It was fast, no one could deny that, but it worked somehow. I think it was the fact that they tried to stop and hold back, and talk about it, what they were feeling. Their thoughts seemed realistic in a way. Oh, and the sex was sexy as fuck! Awesome. I love how they talk to eachother. Really well done w this fic. :) Just go back and re-edit out all the grammar mistakes, there's so many. :(
Date: 09/08/11 11:59 am Title: Chapter 2
this was a good story!
Date: 09/29/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ugh... *Thud*
*Drolls while passed out on floor*
Sooooo wow! I'm speachless.
Date: 05/31/09 08:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Awww... so sweet. The scenes are hot!
Date: 05/18/09 01:00 am Title: Chapter 2
jajaja, pinchi bill zorra bn k sedujo a tom XDD
y el otro bn rogado k sedioo ante la tentasion
Date: 05/17/09 11:47 pm Title: The Date
jajaja pobre tom teniendo k lidiar con la vieja esta franka k hablaba hasta x los codos xDD
Date: 02/22/09 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
One of my favorite fics on this site so far. :)
Date: 01/27/09 02:52 am Title: Chapter 2
*ORGASM*
HOLY FUCK!!
It's almost 3 in the morning and I woke because I couldn't sleep and decided to read fics; let me tell you, if I wasn't fully awake then then NOW am. ^^ *dirty thoughts*
Date: 01/26/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was an amazing chapter! way to go w/ the smut!
Date: 01/26/09 09:24 pm Title: The Date
Franka was nice, Bill's just better. Love the twin telepathy thing.
Date: 01/26/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved it, totally worth the wait and I never expected Tom to be like that it was really sweet and well written
Date: 01/26/09 06:05 am Title: Chapter 2
hot makes us sooo hot ;)
but a good story line think im gunna love reading more stories off you :D
p.s think there cute together hehe
Date: 01/09/09 10:53 am Title: The Date
I really liked this first part. Everything seems so realistic, not over-the-top or melodramatic. I can't wait for the second part!
Date: 01/02/09 08:28 am Title: The Date
gha...Tomi on a string.... looking forward to part two...
Date: 12/24/08 08:48 am Title: The Date
Davey sat in front of the television, phone in hand, when his brother appeared.
XD girls, this is not AFIslash. Very good so far =D