Date: 03/22/09 06:53 pm Title: Find Him
Is Bill going to be ok? O gawd!
Date: 03/22/09 06:50 pm Title: No One Home
this is going from bad to worse.
Date: 03/22/09 06:47 pm Title: Guilt Ridden
Not good at all, I hope he got through to tom's mom.
Date: 03/22/09 06:41 pm Title: Harwood Mental Institution
His mom's an idiot, at least Bill might be able to help. I hope Tom doesn't make thing bad for himesf, and I hope they understand.
Date: 03/22/09 06:38 pm Title: Troubled Thoughts
Oh NO! I know she thinks she's doing what's best, but oh no! NO NO NO!
Date: 03/22/09 06:33 pm Title: The Visit
Aw, Tom's mom seemed ok there for a while. she'd be stupid to keep them apart...
Date: 03/22/09 06:26 pm Title: Seperated
his mom is in way over her head, where has she been anyway?
Date: 03/22/09 05:20 pm Title: What is and What might Be
keep it comin! I hope that tom "dad" gets his ass handed to him...
Date: 03/22/09 04:43 pm Title: What is and What might Be
awww! you're back! yay! *Gives you a cookie* Please write more!
Date: 03/17/09 06:39 pm Title: Compromise
I do hate them!!!!
sowwiee for not writing in the others chappies n past storie... i just simply loved it and was dying to keep reading! so now that im done, im gonna talk...
Tom in this storie is the cutest thing i've ever read! really even in the first one! whatever u wrote bout tomi brought goosebumps in my skin a feeling of sadness n worry in my whole body! gosh! wow the way u write! then he was a quiet guy, awww how cute n it was amazing how everyone got to understandhim with just his facial expressions! i express myself a lot with my face so teehee...
Bill here is a strong kid! way to goo! fighting 4 the one he loves! n yup we tend to ve waay too overprotective ^^'
Andreas... i feel bad about him, he was a good guy at the begining but now... he just.. idk... hope he can know about tomis condition so he can be good with him n regret all he said and did
...and i feel bad bout myself cuz when u said u added a warning i was hoping it was tomi raped n not bill D: "bad girl bad girl" *talking to myself* but yeah now tomi talks more, though i miss his quiet style too :D he is just so amazing here, hope he can get fixed! T^T wanna read he laughs hard...
-G
Author's Response: Wow. lol. Thank you very much for such a long review. It definitely makes up for not reviewing the other stuff. lol. I just want you to know that I LOVE your story Mockingbird. It made me cry when Tom lost his daughter to that witch! I actually tried to get that story featured but of course, not all good stories get featured on this site...Frustrating as all hell. And I wanna add that you are very pretty! Thank you for the very long and detailed review and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of Mockingbird!!
Date: 03/15/09 02:12 pm Title: Compromise
i actually loved this siller, it was productive to the story...i aboslutely love this story and i definitely cant wait to read more!!
Date: 03/11/09 11:09 pm Title: Compromise
I actually enjoy this filler chapter, it gives me hope that Tom could get better. I can't wait to read more of this story.
Date: 03/11/09 10:06 pm Title: Recovery?
Great chapter, I'm glad that Tom is making a bit of progress.
Date: 03/11/09 08:03 am Title: Find Him
omg omg omg this chapter was short but OMG.... I swear as soon as I read:
“Well, well, well…Look who we have here…”
I freaked, I still have the nail marks on my palms lol
Really well written.
Date: 03/11/09 07:53 am Title: No One Home
OMG he is out of jail? This is getting more and more intense.
Date: 03/11/09 02:05 am Title: The Visit
Oh no, there is something about Bill Anika doesn't like. I hope she doesn't try anything against them.
I'm already hooked to this story.
Date: 03/01/09 11:19 pm Title: Compromise
Hey, I only just found your story wie alles brennt this morning, and that was it I was hooked. I read the whole story and this one all in one go. I am really impressed by your writing style, it's a skill to be able to pace a story well, without seeming to have the relatioships and such seem too rushed and unrealistic, but you really seem to have that under control... I seem to be rambling... therefore in summary. I love your story like a fat kid loves cake, and i ran out of cake so update soon so I can carry on enjoying please... XD XD much love Miss K x
Date: 02/07/09 10:11 pm Title: Compromise
I will personally hurt you if you do not continue the story :] Ive enjoued reading and finding a new chapter every night.. and now nothing.. please write soon. Danke
Date: 02/05/09 01:23 am Title: Compromise
I LOVE this story! :) I spent late nights reading your stories. Please write more!
Date: 01/26/09 01:21 pm Title: Compromise
new reviewer here. i think this chapter was important, especially the end! looking forward to the next one.