Date: 01/07/09 12:25 pm Title: Straying
Go back home stupid Tomi!!!
Anyway it's gooooooood! :)
Update soon again! ;)
Date: 01/07/09 11:47 am Title: Straying
oh god, please let them find tom!
Date: 01/07/09 07:39 am Title: Straying
Ok wow. Now I love Bill in this, he's so sweet and loving and patient with Tom. But I think he's ticked me off now. That poor boy gave up the last bit of himself to save Bill and Bill needs time to go and laugh with his friends. That irks me. Because I would have thought the same thing that Tom did. I would feel like a burden and that Bill wanted to get away and would have left too. Bless his poor heart, I can hardly take it. But Tom doesn't realize how strong he actually is. He's been through sooo much and he's still trying his best to hang in there.
Ok now that I'm done rambling, please update when you can. I find myself worrying about your Tom when there is no update, lol. Which is insane, but testimate to your great story. :)
Date: 01/07/09 07:39 am Title: Straying
PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!! PUT UP MORE!!!
Still going to figure out how to steal your talent, Allie.
and YAY, now I get the whole 'leaky brainpan' thing!
I told you to go to bed.
repeatedly.
it's not my fault you didn't listen.
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg how could you do that to Tom!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!
Mental Institute... *shifty look*
Glenside.
XD
Glenside has prettiful grass.
you are 20 years old, Allie.
lol.
Rawr you're a lion?
well RARARA i'm a piranha.
Well written.
I like it.
Update again.
Im'ma annoy you endlessly now.
I'VE READ THEM BOTH AND COMMENT RAPED BOTH IN ONE NIGHT!! *is proud of self*
buhbai Allie.
Love ya.
Date: 01/07/09 01:54 am Title: Straying
BAH!!!!! He left!!! OMG!!!! He willl be hunted first, I SLEEP!!!
Greay update!!! Thanks!
Date: 01/07/09 01:36 am Title: Straying
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!
plz update soon...plz this is like my favorite story...plz update soon.....I luvz u=]
Date: 01/06/09 07:17 pm Title: In Two Weeks
aw i love it!
Date: 01/06/09 03:03 pm Title: In Two Weeks
*Waiting for the next update*
Date: 01/06/09 11:27 am Title: In Two Weeks
I liked it, I really do
Date: 01/06/09 09:36 am Title: In Two Weeks
don't lose confidence! lol
awww poor Tom T_T things will get better right??
Date: 01/06/09 07:54 am Title: In Two Weeks
oh my gosh, I read the first one, and loved it, and I actually nearly squealed when I discovered there was a sequel! I was sat grinning at my computer like a fool.
But anyway, on to the story, I love it, really I do. It's brought me close to tears a few times. I feel so sorry for Tom and think that Bill is incredibly brave and strong for sticking with him through everything.
I hope things start to look up for them both soon.
Can't wait for more!
Laurie xD
Date: 01/05/09 11:41 pm Title: In Two Weeks
oh poor tom! I just wanna huge him! keep it comin!
Date: 01/05/09 10:57 pm Title: In Two Weeks
awwww poor tom! he's falling apart in front of our eyes!!!! its sooo sad
Date: 01/05/09 10:46 pm Title: In Two Weeks
=) Im enjoying this story very much
OMG OMG OMG OMG TOMMMMMMMMMM NOOOOOO hes not getting any better :( its soo sad, poor Bill too...
Date: 01/05/09 10:07 pm Title: In Two Weeks
You write POV's differently, and I like it.
usually people right them in first person.
I hope tom gets better
Date: 01/05/09 09:56 pm Title: In Two Weeks
FEEDBACK
I'm crying this is so beautiful
Date: 01/05/09 09:35 pm Title: In Two Weeks
Eeh, Poor Tomi :( This was a good chapter though, I like how you put it together. I can't wait for more as always and hope it comes soon :D You're me heroine.
Date: 01/05/09 09:27 pm Title: In Two Weeks
This was was a good chapter. I know it's too early yet, but I really can't wait for Tom to start coming around. It's hard to see him like this.
Keep up the great work hun, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01/05/09 09:09 pm Title: In Two Weeks
O.o wow, a really hard part for Tom, and Bill ans simone and everyone... I just feel bad for the G's, it's feel horrible when you need to live because a friend can't stand u, makes your heart breack into mile of pieces.
I hope that Tom can live his normal life again.
Date: 01/05/09 09:04 pm Title: In Two Weeks
omg this is so sad...poor tom poor bill...plz update soon thx=]