AHAHAHA! There's nothing worse than hearing your mom and dad hear you and your boyfriend doing it! LOL!!!!

They got pwned by failing to make less noise! aaaaaaaaaaaaand.....I need this moment to say. SMUTSMUTSMUTSMUTSMUTSMUTSMUUUUTTTT!!!

Okay. I think I'm good. This chapter was like God to me, especially since I JUST woke up!

I'm going to be completely honest with you on this...I don't know if you'll get mad because of this, I hope not.

Personally I hope that Tom will get better soon because I feel like it's the same in every chapter now.
He gets better, then worse and then better again. It's not that interesting to read anymore. I understand that you don't want to rush things, and maybe you're not planning on ever letting him get back to how he was before his father did that last thing to him, but there are limits for how long it's fun and interesting and captivating to read.
This is just my opinion though, but I felt like sharing it.
I'm not saying this to be mean to you, because I like the story and the consept and I think you're a really good author.

I really liked this chapter though:D
And I'm waiting for the next one^^
Hopefully Tom will get better soon

Author's Response: *Sighs* Yup. I know its awfully repetitive but there are things that need to get done before all the court stuff...I really am just trying to draw it all out as much as possible really.

That was a great smut scene! (Though, it was written with so much emotion and intimacy that I hate calling it "smut".) I'm so glad for this update!

Author's Response: I read a lot of romance novels and I've noticed and learned that when writing out a sex scene the emotion plays a key role in it, lets the people reading know the things that the characters are feeling emotionally and physically as opposed to just explaining all the gory details of what goes where and what kind of fluids comes out of said place...lol. But I'm glad someone is getting the point of the 'smut' that I write. Thanks doll!

Well I definitely enjoyed it! Lol. I'm glad you're back too, I was missing this story. I'm glad Tom's getting better, but those kids at school are pissing me off!

And I'm sorry you're upset about your response for this story, but I'm definitely still here for all it counts lol. :)

plz update soon.thx.i luvz u=]

awe...

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Wow.
Lol.
Didn't really expect that...
haha.

IT DOESN'T SUCK, YOU'RE NOT THAT BAD AT WRITING IT!

Bahaha, totally enjoyed it. Lol.

TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH TO UPDATE! DON'T DO THAT AGAIN!!

i hope they feature your story:) its really great.

i love this but im sad about tomi. . . i wish he would get better:)

poor Bill I can picture him freaking.. stupid therapist -_- hate him.. I hope tomi gets better :( its making me sadd..
Woot 200th review! ^^
Amazing storyyy