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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/17 10:42 am Title: Chapter four~ Mommy

this was a good story!
i cant wait to read the sequel to this

Reviewer: binda15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 10:26 pm Title: Chapter four~ Mommy

I loved it =D
Tom's really slow XD

Reviewer: binda15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter three~ Snookums

I love that song ^_^

Author's Response: I do too. its one of my favorite my grandpa would sing. T.T I miss him so much.

Reviewer: binda15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/09 09:50 pm Title: Chapter two~ Out shopping!

It's really nice of you to base a character off your grandfather =)

Author's Response: I know it is. He was the best man ever. If you met him you'd know.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/09 10:43 pm Title: Chapter four~ Mommy

um... that's not a very satisfying ending. Denny's still kinda stuck.

Author's Response:

I know its not .... T.T sorry. My explination is in the other response.

 I know he is its what I planned for just this part on the holiday times and what not.T.T 

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/09 10:40 pm Title: Chapter three~ Snookums

Poor kid. How'd he end up in the dogs body? hope he gets out.

Author's Response:

I will explain in the sequal. :D

It needs a name though I need a name my mind is blank

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/09 10:38 pm Title: Chapter two~ Out shopping!

Leo was kind really friendly. It was nice.

If I was the twins though I don't think I'd be too happy w/ a dog.

Author's Response: I know but as explained Simone and Gordon could not think of anything so Gordon went for the dog option and Simone followed.

Reviewer: Hekki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/09 10:34 pm Title: Chapter one ~ What to do for Christmas gifts

Ok first chapter, sort of set the tone more than anything else. Like the way Tom's mind works.

Author's Response: Me too. :D 

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter three~ Snookums

O_o

Author's Response:

hehe did I stup you..

on Bringing in the chid? 

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 02:11 am Title: Chapter two~ Out shopping!

d:)

Reviewer: killingallthatisreal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter one ~ What to do for Christmas gifts

sounds good...

Reviewer: BillaLover13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter three~ Snookums

This is awesome! Fantastic work indeed!

Author's Response: Thanks ^///^

Reviewer: dubblebubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter three~ Snookums

I still luv it, I can't wait for the next chappie. Your doing an awesome job.

Author's Response:

Really?I am?

Thanks. :D 

Reviewer: dubblebubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/08 12:59 pm Title: Chapter two~ Out shopping!

I love it, please update soon. This fic is awesome.

Author's Response: thanks I will :D Working on it right now. -nods-

Reviewer: BillaLover13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/08 11:31 am Title: Chapter one ~ What to do for Christmas gifts

This is great, but since I'm not that bright, what did Tom want for Christmas??

Author's Response:

Oh well Tom wanted a Whore, that is that lol...

Thanks, :D 

Reviewer: VanceElena Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/08 10:56 am Title: Chapter two~ Out shopping!

PUPPY!!!PUPPY!!! I WANNA SEE THE PUPPY!!!!!

MORE POR FAVOR!!!

PWEASE

*mimics puppy eyes*

Author's Response:

You do??? well Next Chapter I shall do the folowing...

make a really bad banner with the puppy and discribe her :'D

I am almost there soon finished with the chapter, I guess then the Christmas part is over and onto a new that brings in more charcters :D  

Reviewer: dubblebubble Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/08 12:34 am Title: Chapter one ~ What to do for Christmas gifts

I love it I can't wait for the the next chapter. This chapter is soooooo cute. Update soon. please...

Author's Response:

:D -hands cookie-

Thanks!

I willupdate soon I promise you that!

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