Date: 12/31/07 06:05 am Title: Chapter 4
OMG ! O.O ! Jeez, brilliant!
Date: 12/10/07 10:35 am Title: Chapter 3
what what what??? what happened?? O.O
moreeeeeeeeee
Date: 12/06/07 09:41 am Title: Chapter 3
no, u didnt kill it! carry on !
Date: 12/06/07 07:24 am Title: Chapter 3
MORREEE !! Don't stop here O_O !! Very good
Date: 12/05/07 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
MORE MORE>. MORRRRee
Date: 12/05/07 03:09 am Title: Chapter 2
That was getting hot! Remember to add Bill/OMC to pairing categorie.
Author's Response: Oh yeah! thanx =)
Date: 12/05/07 03:07 am Title: Chapter 2
You definitely did NOT kill it!
Its getting better and better (:
I'm curious about Bill and the OMC...More soon please!!
Date: 12/04/07 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Right as Nevin is about to fuck Bill..Bill could say No! I changed my mind I love Tomi to much. Please.
Date: 12/04/07 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't want Bill to have sex with another boy. Only Tomi. You almost killed it to me. You could fix it though.
Author's Response: That would work.. But it wouldn't go with my plot... Sowwies.. =S
Date: 12/04/07 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1
OMg its good!! The chapters are too short, please update very very quickly with a longer chapter. I want to know what Tom did to Bill that made him hurt and what will happen now that he has punched him :/
Date: 12/04/07 02:07 am Title: Prologue
Oooh, i'm intrigued!!
Date: 12/03/07 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww i wanted to beta but good chapter by the way and im really busy this week so its probably good you got someone else
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sowwy... Hehe, thank you though. You'll still be my beta reader when you aren't so busy!!! I promise! I guess it's whoever gets to it first? lol. ^^
Date: 12/03/07 09:10 am Title: Prologue
Keep going! I can´t wait to read the next chapter!
Date: 12/02/07 10:57 pm Title: Prologue
you should totally add more! i cant wait! :D
Date: 12/02/07 04:55 pm Title: Prologue
Yeah, of course you should go on! Since now I'm corious to find out what did Tom do to little Billie boy ç_ç please let me know I'm a very corious girl :p
Date: 12/02/07 03:24 pm Title: Prologue
You have to keep going
:)
it's well good :)
Date: 12/02/07 01:55 pm Title: Prologue
awww poor tom why's bill angry at him? what did he do? please continue i love it cookie for you