Date: 01/02/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 19
KEEP IT COMIN!
Author's Response: YES, YES, YESSSS!!!! Haha thanks for the reviews ^-^
Date: 01/02/09 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh the suspense is killing me!
Just make him kiss Bill already!!!
PLEASE!
Seriously though, I'm really loving this fic. Cant't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Haha suspense is one of my strong points in writing ^-^ Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/02/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 19
good chapter.
tom is suchhh a pedophile!
ahaha but I love it!
Author's Response: It only works when it's Tom =] Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/02/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
Update soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease :D
Author's Response: Yes, I will Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/02/09 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 19
Tom peered in the kitchen window. No Gordon. Tom didn't know if this was a good sign or not. - *grimaces* In my previous experience…not a good thing.
He opened the door, Andreas in toe. – wrong word…you want tow, like towing a car not the nubs on your feet. *winks and grins*
"So tell me about Bill." – wow if words could open a can of worms I think those ones could!
Tom told Andreas everything. – yeah I bet he did! Poor Tom he’s a love sick puppy and for a boy who’s 5 years way younger then him.
No, Tom had never thought anything like that. Well, up until now that is. Thanks a lot Andreas... – ha ha ha *cracks up*
Tom thought about how it would feel to touch Bill as he lay on Tom's bed looking at him with those deer-caught-in-the-headlights, honey colored eyes. Tom thought about how it would feel to hover above a naked Bill as he squirmed under Tom. Tom imagined touching Bill's body with his own. How would it feel to be inside the boy? Tom tried to imagine what kind of noises Bill would make. Would they be similar to the whimper of pain that he had made when Georg hit him? – Oh my Tom! You took that suggestion for the long haul didn’t you?!?!
Tom noticed what Andreas had been laughing at as he looked to his pants. - *Cracks up* aha ha ha ha, Tom you got it soooo bad!
Author's Response: Haha tow, thats the word... *goes to change it* Thanks for reviewing ^-^
Date: 01/02/09 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 19
I really like your story! Amazing! I love that you're not rushing things.
Author's Response: Yay Thank you! New reviewers = love =]
Date: 01/02/09 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 19
awe ! =]
i'm like addicted to this story !
PLEASE update !
Author's Response: Yes, an update is in your future! Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 01/02/09 11:10 am Title: Chapter 19
aww how cute
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing =]
Date: 01/02/09 09:35 am Title: Chapter 19
Haha! I love that Andreas put dirty thoughts in Tom's head. He really is a true friend! ;)
Author's Response: Haha only true friends can do that *nods* Thanks for reviewing ^-^
Date: 01/02/09 06:46 am Title: Chapter 19
Haha! Poor Tomi! XD
But, ugh. I love this story. Like really... it's soooooo good! Every fucking chapter is so good... and I need more... x33
Author's Response: And more is always on the way!!! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 01/02/09 04:49 am Title: Chapter 19
happy new years to u too!!! gawd i luv this!!! there needs to be more billa soon!!! and i want some smoochin too!!! d:)
Author's Response: Haha, more Bill soon, promise. My story is a little slow paced but it will pick up! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 01/02/09 04:43 am Title: Chapter 19
happy new years...........plz hurry and update i luvz u
Author's Response: Never fear! An update is in the horizon! Thanks for reviewing :]
Date: 01/02/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 18
Tom waved lazily at Bill, who was hopelessly lost without Tom. – awh!
"Get you ass in here before they call the cops on you for loitering!" Andreas laughed. – funny line
"Perfection takes time, my friend." – again funny line
"I think... I think I-I like him...?" Tom turned the statement into a question and Andreas tried to hide the smile that clearly said 'I'm always right.' – I promise I won’t be smug either Tom! *nods* ok! *smiles*
Author's Response: Hehe some humor is always good ^-^
Date: 01/02/09 01:42 am Title: Chapter 17
There was something Bill's eyes did to him. They weren't accusing, which Tom wished they were. No, they were not scared, he also slightly wished this. They were however; soft, forgiving, sad and thankful all wrapped in one. – awh!
Bill was craving Tom's interaction and Tom was craving Bill's... - *smiles*
Tom watched as the boy before him, allowed his eyelids to fall. Tom was almost sad to see the honey eyes disappear behind lids once again but the thought that he knew they come out again made him smile. His fingers still brushed against Bill's knuckles, making small circles over each one.
Tom didn't know it at first, but an Angel had come to him in the form of a battered fourteen year old boy...
Bill had been blissfully unaware, but in a reckless driver he had found a friend and a Savior...
Tom allowed his own eyelids to droop before closing completely. His head falling against Bill's mattress. Tom's fingers still slowly rubbing against Bill's hand... – I like this bit! * smiles broadly* I’m a sucker for a bit of fluff in a ‘tragic story”
Author's Response: I knows! Fluff is always a start haha a start that leads to smut later on haha... actually I know how much smut will be in this story... At least a little probably... Haha the angel line and the savior line took me like forever to think of I felt very smart when I finally wrote it like that haha Thanks again for the reviews
Date: 01/02/09 01:34 am Title: Chapter 16
He had no destination planned but his legs seemed to have a pretty good idea... - *grins*
Some miles away, tucked away in a dark room; a certain black haired boy opened his eyes. - *claps* YEAH!
Bill heard heavy footsteps. These were footsteps he knew. However these were not the kind footsteps of his mother or Tom. These were footsteps he knew as bad and he had learned years ago to cower from them. There were two sets. One was heavy and angry. The second however was soft and light, like a shadow...
Bill hoped they would pass his door, however, this was Bill and he was never that lucky. The footsteps stopped outside his door and Bill held his breath. The door creaked open and Bill closed his eyes, pretending to be asleep. What else could he do? - *gasp* oh my you’re going to add more drama? O.O ok I’m ready
He failed to notice the familiar black car parked at the far end of the parking lot... - *cringes* OMG! *shakes head* Too much too much going on!
"Tom thought he could hide this?" It was Georg, "Everyone knows. What are you to him?" Tom heard a sound like flesh contacting flesh and a soft whimper. It was as if instinct took over. Tom walked in the doorway to see Georg with his hand raised over Bill. – Ok not what I was expecting. *grins* thanks for throwing me off!
Honey met chocolate. – OMG!!!! This is the most AMAZING description of their eyes meeting EVER!!!! And I’ve read a lot of them!!! OMG, takes my breath away!!!
"Don't. Ever. Touch. Him." With every word a punch was delivered to Georg's face. - *bounces in place* hooray!
Bill on the other hand, could only catch bits and pieces of the action due to his limited movement. He was thrilled however; no one had ever stood up for him before. - *grins and shakes head*
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No the fighting scene was good! Just about right! Hence the bouncing.
Author's Response: Yay! I actually thought that my fighting scene sucks since I'm really majoring in those kinds of writing but I've got a lot of posstive feedback on them and that makes me happy! Your reviews are beyond golden!!
Date: 01/02/09 01:23 am Title: Chapter 15
Tom thought he was in the clear. He was so sure he'd gotten away clean. Little did he know, two pairs of eyes witnessed the whole thing and they were not happy... – Oi! *grimaces*
Tom choked back a sob – ooooh! *plaintive expression*
I’m okay – no, no you’re not! Flashbacks aren’t normal. Oi!
"I mean it's the least I could do. You've never seen someone like that, Andi. You can't ever picture tearing a family apart until you actually do it..." - *sigh*
God, Tom felt like a first grade girl sitting in her best friend's room discussing her first crush. Tom's breathing caught in his throat. A crush? Did the notorious Tom Trumper have a crush? On a boy, none the less? On a fourteen year old boy? Tom wasn't gay. He wasn't, it just wasn't possible... Was it? - *nods* yes Tom Trumper it’s possible.
Andreas would be here to listen when he was... - *smiles* he has a real friend.
Author's Response: One of my few touching chapters... Most of them are Tom wallowing in self pity... Thanks again for the awesometastic reviews!
Date: 01/02/09 01:12 am Title: Chapter 14
Tom thought it better to call his dad this time, - and responsibility hits!
Ring – I still like that sound breaks up the chapter.
Tom's thoughts returned to the touch shared between him and Bill. Tom's cold, calloused hand against Bill warm, soft cheek... The fact that he was even giving the touch a second thought almost scared him. This was Tom Trumper we were talking about. This was the boy who would sleep with anywhere between five to ten girls in one night and wake up in the morning with no sense of regret. Half the time he didn't even know their names. Yet here he was, captivated by a fourteen year old boy. - *claps and giggles* yeah he’s falling in love and he hardly realizes it then *cocks head* whoa that’s serious stamina.
"You are coming to the party, right?" – Woops I guess we don’t get to avoid any longer.
He feared for Andreas on this part. – yeah you need to protect Andreas.
Author's Response: Georg will make a reapparence later on... I just got to figure out how... whats a story without a little conflict right? Thankies for the lovely reviews!!!
Date: 01/02/09 01:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Bill needed Tom. – Nice parallel now Bill needs Tom.
"It is something to worry about! I did do this!" Tom yelled, his innermost thoughts ringing out loud and clear before he retreated to a whisper, "How can you say I'm his closest friend? I've hurt him, your son. Look at him Mrs. Kaulitz, look what I did." – Nice!
He knew Tom brought him flowers and gifts and those small things would send Bill's heart into a frenzy inside. – awh!
God; how Bill wanted to lean against the hand that rubbed his cheek softly. This was Tom, Bill knew. Bill wished he could open his eyes. He wished he had any control over his body. In all the pain the only form of comfort for Bill came from this stranger. This person he knew only as Tom. Bill was in the darkness. Bill had thought about giving up and just letting the darkness overtake him. He always thought he had been alone. He wasn't though, now Bill had Tom. Bill would fight the darkness. He would fight for the chance to finally see the face of Tom. - *smiles*
And although Tom did not know why he was persuaded to come back here time and time again, he was sure he'd figure it out eventually... – *raises hand in the air* Oo Oo I know, I know!!!
Author's Response: Haha a little fluff always makes a chapter that much better.
Date: 01/02/09 12:53 am Title: Chapter 12
Bill opened something inside Tom and he couldn't decide weather he liked it or not. – nice!
Tom knew it was a little far fetched though and the scariest thing in this town was Tom himself. – ha ha the scariest guy in town is hoping their is someone scarier??
Tom found himself crying again. He was really a wreck. Tom wondered when he'd become so fucked up as to almost kill a fourteen year old boy. Tom needed to talk. He needed to be heard. He wanted someone to listen. He didn't want someone to talk back this time. It wasn't Andreas Tom needed today. Tom needed Bill. – awh…I like this bit!
"You know, this may sound silly but you're the closest thing to a friend Bill's ever had." Simone smiled at Tom and his eyes dropped to the floor almost instantly. – Yeah that’s right Tom that’s PATHETIC, you the guy who almost killed him? Is the closest thing he has to a friend. I hope you feel like shit!...*reads a little further* ok good you do!
Author's Response: Haha I loves your reviews they make me smile! I love when people leave these utterly long reviews ^-^ Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 01/02/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
It's not boring! It's not fast paced but it's well written and interesting. The pace is right for how much is going through poor Tom's head and heart. Don't worry if I was bored I wouldn't read it. You're fine! I like it when characters fall in love in the first three chapters when the rest of the story is pure smut! *raises eye brows and grins*
Author's Response: Smut is always good haha. I'm glad you like it. I always feel special when people leave these kinds of reviews! Thanks again!!!!