Date: 01/04/09 05:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I love how this is written! Tom seems to regret so much...that should count for something.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review! New reviewers are golden!
Date: 01/04/09 04:34 am Title: Chapter 21
woah. this fic is so cool!
poor Tom, though.
having to deal with Bill's dad and Georg..))=
this intrigues me!
more soon, i hope!(:
Author's Response: More soon *nods* Thankies for the lovely reviews!!
Date: 01/04/09 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1
hehe this is so fucking cute. I need to take notes from this for my stories, XD
nah, not really, you deserve the credit. lmao. The actual representation of the flower shop is adorable :3 but of course i may be seeing into things that aren't there, like the schizopkrenic I am XD
Author's Response: Haha thanks. I glad to have a loyal reviewer such as yourself *bows*
Date: 01/04/09 03:38 am Title: Chapter 21
Something that really stuck out to mea bout this chapter was the fact that for a moment, you zoomed in on the flower shop girl, and her thoughts. I'm wondering: is the customer that she lost Bill? Or is it just a random thought of hers? Hmm...
Author's Response: Hmmm you never know... Thanks for the review though! New reviwers are love!
Date: 01/04/09 03:23 am Title: Chapter 21
i absolutly love this story and i love that you update everyday; thats so rare to see from most authors.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you that means a lot. Thanks for reviewing ^-^
Date: 01/04/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 21
OH! OH! PICK ME!!! it was bill, wasn't it. billa was the one that went to the flower place regularly!!!! ^^
LUV!!!! d:)
Author's Response: Shhhh!! Don't ruin it! Haha thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01/04/09 03:19 am Title: Chapter 21
EEE! And you stop there... hehe can't wait for the confrontationt that's bound to happen :) Keep up the amazing work.
Author's Response: Thanks I will. Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/03/09 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 20
still adorable :3
lol, i must sound like so creepy person XD
but i really do like this story.
Author's Response: Haha no you don't sound like a creepy person I loves your reviews! Thanks!
Date: 01/03/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
keep it comin!
Author's Response: No worries there! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 01/03/09 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 20
this is a cool story
Author's Response: Thanks ^-^
Date: 01/03/09 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Haha I totally adore your reviews!
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I'm glad! *grins* I'm your favorite reviewer *grins* Your a fan of your own fans *giggles*
Author's Response: Yesssss! You are one of my favorite reviewers! If your reviews were flowers I'd pick them! haha that was a really bad comparison...
Date: 01/03/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 20
LOL ... so Tom is jerking of in the shower, and all I could think at the end of the chapter was ...
Awww, flowers for Bill.
LOL. I'm such a sap! But I love this :)
Author's Response: Hehe it's sweet and sexual XD Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/03/09 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 20
Tom wondered where his father was – this makes me worried…like maybe Georg had his fingers in this one….read further ok good *sighs in relief* I’ve been watching too many thrillers and horror movies.
"Where were you last night?" His father sounded a bit angrier then he had been lately. – either Georg knows that Tom wasn’t getting into too much trouble and is just mad that he didn’t call…but if that were me my parents would be livid!!!
The mention of Bill brought a whole new wave of sexually aroused thoughts. – *giggles* Poor Tom he’s out of control *giggles*
Tom wrapped his hand around his length. He thought about Bill. Bill and his lips. How would it feel to have Bill's lips on his? How would it feel to have Bill kissing his body? How would it feel to have Bill's mouth on his dick? Tom released a sweet moan as his head hit the wall of the shower. *shudders* oh god really good…but we don’t even know for sure that Bill would go for that? I mean it’s here on TH FF which means we have a 50/50 chance and the warnings and all but Bill hasn’t ever even said a word. He might be straight as a pin. *he he*
Tom's dreadlocks stuck to his face and back, - I’ve never had dreadlocks but I don’t think they stick? I think they would feel like waterlogged ropes, but I don’t think they’d stick? Not sure.*shrugs*
God, Tom was fucked up. Here he was jerking off to thoughts of a fourteen year old boy. – yeah thought about that too…but I let it go. *grins*
He gets dressed but you neglected his dreads…if they were that wet in the shower you HAVE to have some line about him wringing them dry and then patting them dry. There is NO way he would stick them in a hat without doing something to them first. They would be heavy and wet for at least two days.
Yeah switch it to NC-17…it’s moving towards really naughty, I can feel it. *giggles* make it worse!!!
Author's Response: I don't know... now you got me thinking, do they stick? And ooopppssss I guess I did forget about his dreads being wet... But seriously how would you dry dreadlocks? Since You're not supposed to get them wet in the first place... Oh well shhhh no one else knows about me skipping the dreadlock part... Haha I totally adore your reviews!
Date: 01/03/09 09:23 am Title: Chapter 20
Eh, it may have been an uneventful chapter, but it still makes me feel like a loser because the first thing I did when I woke up this morning was check if it had been updated yet. And I didn't see anything that made my Grammar/Spelling Nazi sense tingle, so I have nothing to say there, except for that I'll be looking for yuor next update tomorrow morning. *hinthint* ;]
Author's Response: Haha I actually went over this one very carefully *le gasp* I know right? haha Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/03/09 06:55 am Title: Chapter 20
Hehe I have no Idea how you could possibly thing THAT was uneventuful... I was rather... entrhalled by it *blush and giggle* seriously though, I've read this all tonight... it's damn near six in the morning and I havn't slept yet but it was So worth it. I love you and this fic and totally can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: Haha YAY I loves new reviewers! I'm glad you like the story Thanks for the awesometsstic review!
Date: 01/03/09 06:53 am Title: Chapter 20
You are killing me... slowly... ;) I hope he will meet Bill soon, please? :)
I love it too! Can't wait for the next chapter!
xx
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glads you loves it! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 01/03/09 05:50 am Title: Chapter 20
I'm still in loovee with this storyyyy! x3
Author's Response: Yay!!!! Thankies for always reviewing!!!
Date: 01/03/09 04:58 am Title: Chapter 20
...the suspense is killin me!!!! GAAAAH!!! d:)LOVE IT!!!!
yes tomi, just keep blamin it on andi....
d:)~SPREDDELUV~d:)
Author's Response: Andreas is always his alibi haha. Thanks for the reviewssss!!rn
Date: 01/03/09 04:57 am Title: Chapter 20
hmm, can u plz update soon.u take 2 long, lolz.....plz hurry i luvz u thx=]
Author's Response: I take too long do I? Haha I'm glad your into the story I'll try to have a new chapter out tommorow. =]
Date: 01/02/09 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
I love this story so much. But I did notice one tiny thing: 'Andreas had seceded in his goal.' I think you meant to say "succeeded" since to secede is to pull away/break away from something. But that was one tiny speck of sand in a sea of amazing/wonderful/fantastic/etc. Seriously, I'm so in love with this story right now. Please update! :]
Author's Response: oops... Haha sometimes I get into typeing and I do spell shit wrong all the time, so sometimes it'll correct it for me and I don't dare judge the supiority of the all mighty computer haha. Anyways I loves new reviews and I'm glad you read and reviewed!!!!